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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...

geet brought a smile on maan face n she is so innocent...lvd it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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friends i'll update in a while..tab tak teaser se kaam chala lo..😉😉

maan:you always need someone or the other's help...tumhe bahut shouk hai doosro ko tang karne ka...

geet glared at him.."nahi i dont need anyone's help..i can do everything by myself...u are the pne who offered me the help last night..i never begged u to drop me..did i??"

maan:oh!!now u r showing attitude...

geet:ji ha...i have the habit to give answers in their own way...

when both were glaring at each other...train moved suddenly...geet lost her balance who stood with crossed arms n bumped with maan who stood opposite to her..she is about to fall down but maan saved her holding her waist...

maan smirked at her.."u don't need any help from anyone.."


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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome teaser👏
Eagerly waiting for an update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srirad

Awesome teaser👏

Eagerly waiting for an update😊


wii post in few minutes dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome teaser
waiting for the update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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EK AJAB PREM KAHAANI


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PART-6

Geet laid on bed after having the juice.."di kitni acchi hai na..how sweet she is..but isduniya mein us dustdanav jaise log bhi hai..how rude he was na…he cant even smile n always gussa gussa gussa…chaddo!!mein kyun soch rahi hoon us dust danav ke bhare mein..i wont meet him again na…chalo so ja geet..u have to wake up soon" n she drifted to sleep after few minutes….






Next morning maan woke up with his mom's continous calling…ofcourse it is his daily routine but today she behaved something diff…maan got up n saw his mom arranging things in his room properly….



Maan:mom what happened why u r in so much hurry??i already said na that I will go li'l late to office..



Priya:beta get ready soon not for office..rajeev uncle is coming here…u know na his bro's daughter is getting married..may be he is coming to invite us..



Maan made irritated face.."mom what should I do if he comes here??should I welcome him with garland…huh!!"



Priya:maan..beta don't say like that…he is ur dad's friend..



Maan:exactly..he is dad's friend na…so why should i??and u know mom his so called daughter sameera irritates me to the core with her flirting…and her dad…jab dekho maan beta kab shaadi kar rahe ho..god why he is so much interested in my wedding???



Priya giggles while sitting beside him…"what's wrong in that maan?u have to marry some day or the other…may be he wants u to marry his daughter sameera..



Maan cuts her immediately…"what??mein aur sameera huh!!give me a break…mom iam not going to marry sameera or anyone one else..u know it very well..so plz stop it now.."

"but maan.."


Maan:mom plz…leave it now…waise mein late horaha hoon…plz get my breakfast ready..i'll get ready soon..

Priya:but u said u'll go li'l late to office…


Maan:no mom muje kuch kaam yaad agaya I have to go now….said maan n moved inside washroom…



Priya shook her head not able to understand him..sometimes he cares a lot for everyone n sometimes he behaves as if he don't care about anyone…yes it's true he don't care about those people whom he don't like just like sameera n her dad..




he knows their real face…his dad is actually behind maan's intelligence..he knows maan can create wonders in software field..he saw it also as maan achieved great success n praised by many…big big companies are ready to offer him a job n pay high salary but maan is maan..he did whatever he want n worked where he liked..sameera's dad owns a software company n he even tried many time to convince maan to join his company which maan rejected very softly….maan never said this to his dad or mom..he is his dad's best friend rather say brother…he don't want to create any rift between their relation by dealing him in his style i.e msk's style..so he always ignores him…when he failed in everyway he is using his daughter sameera as his weapon..once maan marries sameera then maan cant deny his offer..so he is trying hard to involve maan in relation for which maan never showed interest…



Maan got ready soon n about to move out but for his bad luck sameera n his dad entered his house at the same time…

"hai maan beta.."he said smiling widely….


Maan:hiii uncle…he said mockingly...


"hii maan how are u??"wished sameera while moving towards him…



Maan:hiii….he said without even looking at her but at his mobile...mom iam leaving muje late ho raha hai..he side hugged his mom n dad n left the place without even giving a second look to both of them…




Sameera burned with anger but shrugged it as she got used to this behaviour of maan…she still hopes that maan will come to her one day as her love is true for him…yes she loves maan truly…ofcourse her dad is using her but she really loves maan n never thought to force maan in relation…



Later they had li'l talk n left the place inviting them for the wedding…rishab also left to his college….




Here at geet's place; geet got excited to receive the invitation of her friend anitha's wedding..she was her best friend in college n she is getting married now..pinky n geet got very excited as they are visiting delhi for her friend's wedding…she rushed to office to ask for leave..she convinced her khadoos boss however…she excitedly packed everything ..she told pinky to take care of her dad for a week as she gave hand at last minute as always saying aadi's mom is still in the city n they are discussing about their engagement..geet took her nice class n then thought to go alone…



Maan returned from office in the evening hoping that his mom wont throw any bomb on him or take his class for behaving rudely with them…priya came smiling to him n took his lappy bag from him..she asked him to go n fresh up which surprised maan..he expected nice lecture from her but she said nothing…he saw rishab's smirk but didn't understand anything…



Maan came out from washroom n saw his mom packing his bag…

Maan:mom what u r doing??why u r packing my clothes???


Mom:becoz we are going to delhi 2morrow…rajeev uncle ki bhanji ki shaadi hai na…



Maan is shocked to hear it..he already said that he is not interested in those people n here his mom decided that he is coming with them that too delhi for one week…noway he thought n about to say something but priya cut him before he could say anything.."u r coming with us that's all..no more arguments now..maan try to understand he is ur dad's best friend…kya sochenge wo..ok u don't like him but beta it wont look good if u don't attend the marriage..and u know ajay very well o kya sochega..he is ur friend na…u should attend his wedding…"



Maan:no way mom..i said na I don't want to come anywhere..ajay se mein baat karlunga..waise office mein bahut kaam hai muje..i cant take any leave now that tooo for one whole week..



Priya:oh!!since when u started to say lies??


Maan looked at her shocked n confused.."I already called ur boss n he agreed for ur leave..i know there is no such project going on in ur office…so u have to come.."



Maan:mom plz why don't u understand.."waha di ki family bhi hogi…u know na I hate them..i don't want to see their faces.."his voice filled with anger now..




Priya caressed his cheek..maan but they are not important now…we don't care if they come there also..u know that even I hate them…but we are going for uncle..we cant hurt him..plz maan



Maan snapped her hand as if saying he don't agree with her…"teek hai u don't come anywhere..but plz don't talk to me"she angrily left the room…




Maan without wasting a second ran behind her…"mom plz"he said with pleading eyes at the same time req his dad to support him..his dad shrugged his shoulder as if he is saying iam helpless…maan shook his head n sat infront of his mom on his knees…"ok mom I'll come for u…but plz don't say that u wont talk to me..i cant bear it"he said with pleading eyes…




Priya almost jumped from couch saying no no shouted actually"sacchi!!i knew it.."my maan can never say no to me.."



Maan chuckled at her as she is behaving like a kid who got her fav chocolate..he placed his head on her lap..priya caressed his hair lovingly.."mama papa plz don't ever say that u wont talk to me…I cant bear it.."



Priya:iam so sorry beta..i know this is only the way to convince u…


Maan:hmmm toh emotional atyachar ho raha hai muj par…


Three of them laughed…"maan chalo jaldi sojao..we have to start in the morning.."




Maan:but mom..my car is in servicing centre how can we go then…we'll go day after 2morrow...said maan with a hope that atleast he can escape for a day….




Priya n rishab smirked at him.."bete who said that we are going by ur car..we are going by train..and reservations are done already..so don't worry.."said rishab..



Maan:oh toh poore planning karke rakha hai….


Priya n rishab giggled at maan's puppy face..later they went to bed..



Next morning,priya rishab n maan reached the railway station…priya n rishab settled in their seats while maan stood at the entrance n he is on call…suddenly his mobile slipped from his hand due to someone's sudden push…his anger reached peak n he turned to burst on the person who dare to push him just to find geet looking at his mobile on ground with her mouth opened widely…"sorry…"geet said with closed eyes…"tum!!!!"said maan…geet slowly opened her eyes n saw maan glaring at her.."aap!!!"she almost shouted..



Geet(st):oh god! Y u r doing this to me..why u r bringing this dust danav again in front of me…he is looking at me like a devil as if he'll eat me alive..



She instantly bent to pick his mobile but in this process she left the hold on her baggage which she was holding till now n it fall on maan's foot.."ouchh!!!kya kar rahi ho??are u mad….sach much tum chalti firti disaster ho…jab dekho kuch na kuch karti rehti ho"



Geet:kya kaha aapne…chaltifirti disaster…aur mein….


Maan:ha..any doubt…


Geet:oh toh aap bhi kuch kam nahi ho..aap..aap..aap ..…ha dust danav ho…jab dekho gusse wala shakal dikakar sabko darathe rehthe ho..


Maan glared at her.."kya kaha tumne"


Geet:wahi jo aapne suna..dustdanav…


"tum"said maan n took a step forward glaring at her…geet gulped her saliva n took a step backwards..she didn't notice that she is at the very end of the entrance door…she took a step back n about to fall but maan held her wrist n pulled back…

maan:you always need someone or the other's help...tumhe bahut shouk hai doosro ko tang karne ka...

geet glared at him.."nahi i dont need anyone's help..i can do everything by myself...u are the pne who offered me the help last night..i never begged u to drop me..did i??"

maan:oh!!now u r showing attitude...

geet:ji ha...i have the habit to give answers in their own way...

when both were glaring at each other...train moved suddenly...geet lost her balance who stood with crossed arms n bumped with maan who stood opposite to her..she is about to fall down but maan saved her holding her waist...

maan smirked at her.."u don't need any help from anyone..huh!!he said sarcastically...

Precap:

Priya:oh toh maan ye wahi ladki hai kya..wat u said..pagal,miss.radio mirchi chalti firti disaster….she then realised what she said n bit her tongue...



Geet's mouth widened in shock.."hawww…aunty ye sab kaha inhone…aap ne muje pagal kaha...pata hai aunty ye bhi kuch kam nahi hai dust danav hai das sar wala ravan….ya toh goorthe rehthe hai ya toh chillathe rethe hai..lagtha hai inko insaano se allergy hai…sab par kisi na kisi bahane chillathe rethe hai..

Maan:tum.,..

Geet:ha mein kya???

Precap2:

Maan lifted her head from his shoulder n made her sit properly…he crossed his arms n closed his eyes..after a second he felt weight on his shoulder again…

Geet again placed her head on his shoulder..this time she held his arm tight encircling her hands around his arm…maan sighed n closed his eyes….



i know friends this part is very short..iam so sorry for that...i have typed only this much..plz bear with me..😭😭


plz press like if u like it n comment plz..can u give more than awesome...iam ready to receive criticism..but plz write something more than awesome so that i can know whether my writing is good or bad...

silent readers atleast bother to press like it take not even a second...

love..

-mona😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
Me first..😃
Amazing update👏
Liked maan and his mom conversation⭐️
Maaneet fight cute.⭐️.Loved it😳
Precap sound interesting⭐️
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
Edited by srirad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
friends i have given 2 clues for future track in this update..
let's see who can guess 😉

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