EK AJAB PREM KAHAANI[part10:page121-18/10]

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Hey friends me back again with one more ff..😃

EK AJAB PREM KAHAANI


[banner credit goes to jass..thanx dear😊]

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This story is about two people with different point of views..he don't believe in love or marriage.he says that love is just a trash and it is the word used but everyone just to fullfil their needs and sources from other person..it's a waste of time..love just leads you to ur doom..

She says love is a beautiful feeling which connects two hearts..no relation can stand without love... love gives u courage to win over every obstacle..when ur love stands with you in difficult times..u'll automatically gain strength to overcome the problem even in helpless situations'

So how this two people will meet??will their point of views change after meeting each other??will maan start believe in love or geet looses trust on love??

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CHARACTER SKETCH:

Maan singh khurana:



He is a cool guy who enjoys his life completely..he don't believes in love..he says that love is a trash and people use the word just to complete their needs from other person..he is arrogant at the same time very kind hearted' his attitude is his pride..works as a software engineer'


Geet handa:



A very bubbly girl who enjoys her life every second..she always thinks in a optimistic way..very kind hearted and loves to see every one happy who are around her..she belives in love and thinks that love is a very beautiful feeling and no relation can stand without love..she works as a creative director in a channel'


Naintara rathod:


She is maan's best friend who also don't believe in love..she enjoys her life and vamp natured who changes her boyfriends like a dress..she works with maan..


Aaditya :


Maan's another best friend..and works with maan and naintara..


Pinky mishra:


Geet's friend who works with her in the same tv channel..she is bubbly and funloving..she is the one with whom geet shares her heart..


Mohinder handa:


Geet's dad who stays with her'


Sonali and dev:





Geet's brother and sister-in-law(bhabi)who stays in U.S.A.


vikram and neha:




Geet's elder sister and jiju..


Rishab khurana and priya khurana:





Maan's mom and dad who loves their one and only son maan to the core..maan's dad is a professor and his mom is a house wife...

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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EK AJAB PREM KAHAANI

PROLOGUE:

Maan get up..maan it's getting late'maan'priya almost screams from the living room who is running here and there busy with house hold works..she continuosly calls maan but no reponse..

Rishab who was reading news paper smiles at priya who is running here and there like a robot and says..priya you know na maan will not get up until u go and wake him up..bekar ki koshish kyun karthi ho roj..

Yes this is her daily routine to wake him up..he's just like a small baby to them even though he is in his 25's now..he is also habituated to all these things..like taking her mom's help in everything even in small things'

Priya finally gives up and goes to maan's room to wake him up..

She enters his room just to find maan sleeping peacefully like a baby sleeping on bed on his stomach..priya smiles at her little grown up son and shooks her head..she looks at the clock"hey bhagwan it's already 8 now..aur ye janab abhi tak gode bhej kar so rahe hai..and then says mama y don't u wake me up..it's getting late.[immitates maan].kya karu mein is stubborn ladke se..

She goes near him and tries to wake him up..maan wake up..maan..

"Mama plz sone do na"mumbles maan..

Maan it's getting late for the office.. get up now..says while tapping on his shoulder

Maan:mama plz bus 5 minutes'

Priya:maan don't say me that i didn't tried to wake u up..it's already 8 now..aage tumhari marzi..iam leaving now..

Maan quickly opens his eyes..kya???😲😲it's already 8 now..and mama y don't u wake me up?late hogaya hoon na..mama aap bhi na..

Priya frowns..wat I didn't wake u up..mein pichle 20 minute se ghana gaa rahi thi kya??

Mama iam getting late now..we'll fight in the evening..u plz keep my breakfast ready..i'll be there in 2 minutes..and he rushes in to wash room'

At the same time a girl in her 22's is busy in her prayers to babaji..

Geet:babaji plz be with me and give me success in everything I do..

She quickly finishes it and runs towards kitchen..she prepares everything in hurry and comes out with a coffee cup in her hand'

She takes a sip and then looks at the clock"hey babaji it's already late..muje jaldi tayyar hona hai..papa ko chai bhi toh dena hai..chal geet jaldi kar warna tera khadoos boss tuje nahi chodega..

Good morning geet beta..says mohinder who comes out from his room..

Geet:gudmrng papa..wait I'll get tea for u..

She gives him tea and quickly gets ready for the office..

Geet:papa bye..i'll be here soon in the evening..dont forget to take ur medicines before ur lunch ok..

She hugs her papa and rushes out..when she is climbing steps her mobile rings..

Geet:ha pinky..i'll be there in few minutes..

Pinky:hey geet iam already waiting for u outside ur apartment..come soon..

Geet:ha pinky bus 2 minute..i'll be there bye..

Maan comes out of his room ready..

Maan:gud morning papa..

Rishab:gud mrng beta..

Maan:mom plz jaldi..iam getting late..

Priya:ha beta just 2 minutes..

She then brings his breakfast and places it in front of him'

Maan makes yucky face as soon as he saw idli in his plate..

Maan:mama again idli???it's third time in this week'I don't want this..

Priya:accha!so u are bored of my cooking now..so u better marry and get ur wife na..

Maan:mama ab isme shaadi ki baat kaha se aagayi?

Priya:u just said na that u are bored of the food made by me..if u marry then ur wife will cook different dishes for u everyday..

Maan:mama iskeliye shaadi ki zaroorat nahi hai..i'll appoint a cook..it's over..

Priya:accha bacchu!u are thinking that u are smart..

Maan says hmm... while having a bite of idli..

Priya:maan kabhi na kabhi toh shaadi karna hi hai na..

But maan wont pay attention to her as if he heard nothing'

Meanwhile,maan's mobile rings..

Maan:ha naina..

Naina:maan where are u??boss is already here.. u forgot that there is a presentation today??

Maan:no yar..i'll be there with in few minutes..u just handle it for sometime..

Naina:hey maan don't worry I'll handle..

Maan:thanx dear bye..

Mama iam leaving..

Priya: beta break fast to karke jao.. ..

He takes his files and laptop bag from the couch which were kept ready by priya.."no mama I'll have it in the office bye.."he hugs priya and leaves from there..

Priya:are maan..ye ladka bhi na bilkul apna khayal nahi raktha'

Rishab:bilkul tumhari tarah hai na..


priya and rishab smiles...

so,friends this is the prologue..hope u all like it..plz tell me whether i should continue with this or not..
me waiting for ur comments😍
i would like to thank my friend jyothi for helping me and supporting me in this ff..thanx a lot dear..love u🤗

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love u all..
-mona
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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wow !! new FF ...WAITING
PLZ START SOON
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wow !! new FF ...WAITING
PLZ START SOON
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wow wow mona... 🤗
awww so sweet... maan kitna cool hain...
loved his character in this...
loved priya-maan bonding... awww he is sleeping on his stomach like a small baby n complaining his mom that she didnt wake him up...
ohhh here geet is responsible n cares about her family...
hahaha idli... me too hate idli...
totally loved it mona...
continue soon dear...

love u sweet heart... hugs to u... 🤗
any time dear... i am there for u... 😊

😃
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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wow...superb dear 😳😉
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Originally posted by: jyothikrish

wow wow mona... 🤗
awww so sweet... maan kitna cool hain...
loved his character in this...
loved priya-maan bonding... awww he is sleeping on his stomach like a small baby n complaining his mom that she didnt wake him up...
ohhh here geet is responsible n cares about her family...
hahaha idli... me too hate idli...
totally loved it mona...
continue soon dear...

love u sweet heart... hugs to u... 🤗
any time dear... i am there for u... 😊

😃



aww..thank u chooo much sweet heart..iam really happy and glad that u loved it..ur comments made me dance dinka chika dinka chika
thanx a lot dear..
love u..🤗
🤗🤗🤗
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Nice start... Do continue... Vil wait 4 nxt part...loved it

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