'Removed' - Page 6

omg Sneha di...
Ur jz brilliant...
Honestly... Ur jz stole my heart away once again...

D pain u portrayed in Maan's being ws excruciating... It ws sooo painful... D way he questioned his destiny... His pain... It ws totally heart-wrenchin...
I especially loved d part whr u showed dat he didnt sumhw like d full moon.. Bcz d pain in his eyes n heart ws visible 2day... N dat even darkness betrayed him dat night...
These emotions jz touched my heart..

Den I loved Geet's letter...
D pain yet d positivity dat ws visible in those words ws commendable... Great job again there...!!!

I loved hw u showed dat Geet used to see him evrydy bt today bcz of d moonlight he ws visible to her.. Connectin it to d part whr darkness betrayed him.. Beautifully connected...
I loved d way u showed hw she felt 4 his pain n jz cudnt cntrol goin to him...

I loved hw Maan questioned her on his pain n doubts.. N hw Geet calmly n positively answered dem ol...

I absolutely loved d serenity of d moment.. It ws sooo dreamlike...
Hw he let go of his pain through his tears bcz after hearing Geet, he didnt find it as a sign of weakness but rather cleansing himself of dat weakness...
I loved d way he hid himself in d crook of her neck n she soothed him being there 4 him...

I absolutely loved d moment whr they lay dwn on d beach holding hands...
Dat signified their bond n companionship...

Den i loved hw simply dey showered each other wd their immense love making d world beautiful for each other...

Absolutely wonderul Sneha di...
Love ya 4 dis...
Outstandin job...
Cheers...!!!!

Hugs n kisses...

wow..lovely OS...loved it...it was beautifully written...thanks for PM

simply beautiful os totally luvd it x 🤗

U again rocked it missy
luvd it to bits
was rlyy soulfull

thnx fr sharein a wndrfull OS yet again

Luv Divzi

Wow Sneha, that was intense sweetheart, so beautiful & poignant, I loved it 😊

lovely OS Sneha 😊
it was really soulful

except the kiss part...felt every word you wrote...felt sooo..spritual .. divine...so much potential you have sneha...be the way you are...be unique...as you are...dont follow the stereotype...best of luck ...:)

It started with a sad note. The painful feelings of Maan. There Geet came for rescue.
Maan's question for each of his feelings. Geet's way of answering it back with comfort.
They were strangers but their simple gesture was really beautiful.
The unspoken love between them, Maan found peace and love in Geet.
Beautifully written.