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I like the story concept.
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Sad for Geet, but she got Maan to support her.
Because of that dump Sameera, Geet and Maan had to suffer.
She also destroyed Vikram and Nandini's dream.
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Part 2 ( Can't PM as i'm going out of state for 3 days for cousin's marriage)

3 months later

Maan always try to cheer up a heartbroken Geet. It pained him to see that his wife is still in love with Vikram. Though she promised Maan that she'll be a good wife, she was scared of physical intimacy. Maan in these months felt an unknown desire to kiss her and love her like any other normal couples but he knows that she is scared.

She never stops him when he hugs her and snakes his arm around her bare waist but she never responds too. Even their friendship got ruined because of this awkwardness. Maan now hated the fact that Geet still have some feelings for Vikram.

One day, Maan met his old friend Rasika Rathod who was very happy to see him. She was engaged to a villager Pandeyji , who she fell in love due to his innocence. At first, Pandeyji rejected her saying he was a brahmachari but later he too confessed his feeling for her. It was Maan's idea that made Pandeyji confess his love for Rasika.

Rasika is good girl at heart but she is short-tempered and rude. She is only child of her divorced parents who have another family. She always craved for love and her loneliness made her spolit girl. She is rich and owns a big fashion company and treats Maan as a younger brother and Geet as younger sister. Though she had many boyfriends previously, she was not serious as she was with Pandeyji.

Rasika knew Maneet' marriage and Geet's depression. Maan now wanted to start a new life with Geet. He doesn't have any problem knowing that she lost her virginity to Vikram but all he wants is her love. Maan cried in front of Rasika and told her that he wants his wife to love him and forget Vikram. Rasika asked him to take her to honeymoon but he told that will be upset if he mentioned the word 'honeymoon'. So Rasika told him to tell Geet that she invited both of them to her house in Shimla for 2 weeks, so that Geet won't get suspicion. He happily agreed.

As planned, Maan arrived at Rasika's farmhouse with Geet. Rasika gave a warm welcome and showed their room which was decorated very romantically. Geet didn't show any emotions seeing the romantic atmosphere which made Maan angry. Maan and Rasika planned to make Geet jealous with the help of Rajji, Rasika's cousin's fiance.

As planned, Maan was to show that he is interested in Rajji. Rajji, the drama queen said she loved to play the role of cupid and agreed.

Day 1

Rasika introduced Geet and Maan to Rajji. Maan and Rajji pretended as they are seeing each other for the first time. Maan in front of Geet flirted with Rajji to make her jealous but couldn't get any satisfaction seeing her react as if nothing happened.

Day 4

Rasika took Geet and Maan to club. They met Rajji and Maan ignored Geet purposefully and asked Rajji for a dance. He even ignored Geet when she told him that she is thirsty and need soft drinks. Geet was hurt a little but thought not to disturb him, and got drink for herself. Maan was really mad when he saw Geet's silence.

Day 14

It was last day of their mini-trip but Maan and Rasika didn't get a slight glimpse of jealous Geet. She saw Maan flirting with Rajji and many other girls. He hugged others girls in front of Geet and even mocked Geet indirectly. But Maan crossed his limit by kissing a girl infront of Geet, Rajji and Rasika and when the girl questioned about his wife, he said "My wife is a cold-princess." Geet was hurt but didn't say anything. But this made Rajji and Rasika angry. They dragged a drunken Maan outside and scolded him. Maan got angry and left from there. Rasika took Geet to farmhouse. Geet said goodnight with a sad smile and went to sleep which made Rajji and Rasika feel guilty.

Maan entered the room at late night and saw Geet waiting for him. He locked the room and walked towards her and took off his T-shirt and belt. Geet knew he was not in sense and tried to move away but Maan blocked her way and lifted her and pinned her to bed by laying on her top.

Geet : Maan, what are you doing? Leave me.

Maan : Why should I Geet? I'm your husband and I've full right on you.

Geet : You are not in your sense Maan. Leave me.

Maan : why Geet? I may not be as good as Vikram bhai but I assure you I'll try to meet your expectations.

Geet : MAAANNN ( She pushed him and slapped him.)

Maan got angry and pinned her to bed. He kissed her forcefully on her lips and tried to enter inside her mouth but when she didn't let him, he bit her lower lip making her gasp open her mouth. She tried to wriggle but he held her tightly putting his body weight on her. He ripped her clothes and his and started to bit her everywhere. The more she resists the more aggressive he become. Finally he entered her forcefully with one thrust making her scream in pain. The whole night, he was forcing on her.

Morning

Maan woke up with a slight headache. He pressed his forehead and sat up but suddenly froze to see a bruised Geet with blood dripping from her lips and shoulder. He moved the sheet with his shivering hands and saw Geet's body all bruised with blue and red marks. He closed his eyes seeing her like this. He patted her cheeks to wake her up but she didn't get up making him scare.

Edited by Ash534 - 13 years ago

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