CREATIVE THREAD: PICTURE STORYepilogue pg128(20/9 - Page 74

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maan reached them and geet held karan's arm lovingly.

maan and karan both r shocked .

PART 23

Before Maan could say a word, the lights went off. And came back on 5 seconds later. What Maan saw shocked him beyond words, Geet, his Geet had started dancing with that Karan!

Meanwhile Karan was feeling increasingly nervous. " Geet thu aaj mujhe pakka upar pohunchadegi. WOh iddar hi araha he yaar. Uski face ko ek baar dekh tho sahi".

Geet grimaced, "uff chaddo ! Me aaj iss darr pokh ko kyo layi!! Are mere chuhe thune kya socha me usse itni asaani se chod doongi! Aaj me uss Dusht Danav se pura badla looongi. Thu dekh the rahnaa"

Hearing this Karan shivered a little and tried to check what Maan was upto. What he saw almost gave him a heart attack ! "aaj India me world war 3 hone wala hai, isse pehle ki me shahid ho jao…", he left Geet there and just ran for cover…..

On the other end of the dance floor….

Maan was thoroughly enraged. This was not done at all. He started to move in their direction when he felt a tug at his arm. He saw a tall thin girl smiling at him. She looked vaguely familiar. She gave him a smile said "Remember me Maan?".

Maan was now getting irritated. He knew Geet would be looking at him and if she catches him with this idiot of a girl, he was finished! "Look girl, I really don't know who you are…I am here with…", before he could finish the sentence, the girl had thrown her arms at him and started pushing him around willing him to dance!!!!

Again he started "Look, lady, pat nahi…" and he looked up and was dumb stuck! Geet was starting at him and she was giving him a deadly stare. He immediately freed himself from the girl and started, "Geet who me…..", Geet now was beyond angry!! Outwardly she was calm but her eyes said everything. "Maan mene tho socha tha ki aap badal gaye hai. Par me galath thi." And she turned and walked away. Maan was at his wits end!!! He started running after her.. "Geet …meri baat tho suno…me jaanta bhi nahi……."

Precap:

Maan replied huskily "Accha tho wo ladki tumhari saheli thi…huh…mujhe pasaani ki koshish..iski sazaa tho tumhe zaroor milni chahiye"…

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