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Chapter 11


Addi in his car n father daughter in their car left toward KC.But in between way to KC Inder got an urgent call.He had to sign some documents.It was matter of some time.But he had to go.So they decided Geet should hav to start meeting...n Inder ll join them later.He stopped Addi who was jst behind them n asked him to take Geet with him.

But scared of Geet made excuse that he also had some work on other side.But he offered his car to Geet n himself hired auto Inder's driver dropped Geet to KC in Addi's car.Addi knew bombshell called Geet gonna explode.So he didn't want to b victim.This was reason he informed Maan about his site visit.But not told him about the storm coming toward him/MSK.

Geet was fuming .How dare he to offer advance for her lil attempt to giv happiness to innocent child.If he knew who she was.He should also keep it in mind that she was not doing this for money.She was able to hire as many cooks as she can lik him.He made her his employee.

She pushed door with full force.Where security stopped her.

Guard: Madam kisse milna hai apko.
Geet: Aap apne kaam se kaam rakhiye...(she shouted)

Gaurd: Dekhiye aap andar nahi ja sakti jab tak apko permission na milay.(he stopped her )

Geet: U know who I m Geet Handa ...Mr Khuraana k client Mr Inder Handa ki beti hu main...

Gaurd: Oh Mr Handa ko hum jaante hai per apko kabhi dekha nahi .
Geet: Aab dekh lijiye.

Gaurd: But Madam duty is duty any proof u hav.

Geet: Sure take this (she showed her driving license n visiting card)

Gaurd: Okey Madam u can go ..Plz don't mind ..I m very sorry for this...But we r bound

Geet: aab main jaayo Don feel sorry .(she asked him about Maan's cabin n after this she moved in toward Maan

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Geet moved in...Addi was chasing her or spying her...After wandering for some time at Delhi streets.. He came back to keep eye on Geet...He was in do or die condition.He couldn't face Geet n Maan too becoz till now he hadn't told him about Geet.It was difficult to tell him whole situation at phone.Maan not gonna listen .But how he could reach him ? No way for that

Geet stops peon.

Geet: Bhayia yeh he hai Mr Khuraana ka cabin.

Peon:Madan aap paddi likhi lagti hai itne badde badde aksharo (words ) main likha hai unka name.

Geet: Bas Bas maine pad liya tha.I mean he is in.

Peon: Nahi wo to meeting shurru honne wali hai.

Geet: Oh main bhi meeting k liye aayi hu show me way where he is (she not let him complete)

Peon showed her way to hall.Before she could move in .Maa came out..was calling some one.not noticed her.She had seen Maan from outside schoo.How he dresses up this made her to judge lil bit that he is Maan
She tiptoed come close to him.From behind she tapped on his shoulder

Geet: Excuse Me...Kya aap he hai Mad Singh Khuraana (her tongue slips)

Maan was surprised who called him such in uncivilized way.He looked back giving tough look.Had never seen her before .How dare a girl behav with him in such a way..standing in his office

Geet: I mean aap Rehaan k Papa Maan Singh Khuraana (she yelled...Hey Babaji yeh to mad hai aur pagal k saamne kaho k wo pagal hai wo nahi manta..Geet u to zhalli hai (murmurs n tapes her own head)

Maan: Kyo kya kaam hai apko..aur how dare u call me Maan as Mad. (he put his hands on waist.(Geet was stunned looking at his first impression.Lik this was familiar to her.)

He yells when Geet was standing lik statue. She came back to senses

Geet:Kya samjhte hai aap apne aap ko ?

Maan: main jo hu wohi hu.

Geet: oh main bhi jo hu wahi hu...mujhe apne dib-bay wali (lunch provider/supplier) samjh raka hai...Bahut bade TeesMarkha hai...

She was moving toward him.Maan looking at herself was taking back steps n in this way when he touched half open door he was not aware n his back body pushed door n he was about to fall on back in room

Maan: Tum mujhe mental asylum se bhagi lagti ho..mind ur language...Batmeez ladki (taking his balance back he points his finger toward her)...Security

Geet: batmeez aap hai..app Geet Handa ko jaante nahi..apka bajja na bajayi to dekh lena (She points her finger toward him n turnes around to move outside But again looked at him back with tough looks n Maan got scared )

Maan: Geet Handa (he tries to remember who she is) Geet Handa (after pressurizing mind)...oh Mannat ki Mommi..per beti ki tarah Maa bhi itni tez (sharp) hai mujhe pata nahi tha..waise yeh yahan aayi kyo aur wo bhi aise

Maan put his one hand on forehead n other on waist.He had seen Mannat n now Geet. This lil convo/clash was enough to make Maan realize only he is not here to dominate others

Geet: Is Maan Singh Khuraana ko sidha na kar diya...mai bhi..main bhi (she repeats what she should ask herself but failed) shaddo ji

Geet rooted to spot before coming out of area.She was here for showing Maan his place.He made her dibbe-wali.She moved her hand in beg n taking cheque in her hand reached to Maan

Maan who was sitting in chair thinking about Geet again got scared looking her in front.

Maan: Aap fir aa gayi...yeh to pata chal gaya aap Mannat ki momi hai per why r u behaving so

Geet: apki amaanat lautane aayi thi (she made pity face putting cheque on his hand ) yeh filmy dialogue nahi maru-gi main..isko rakhiye apne bheja tha na
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Maan was surprised to find cheque on his own hand which he sent to her.

Maan: Yeh cheque to main apko bheja tha..

Geet: Apka stupid PA mere pass aya tha apki vichitar lila ( unexpected act) ka saboot lekar.I mean to say that jo apne kiya wo pagalpan he hua na..aab batayo kon aaya hai mental asylum say.Aur yeh cheque bhj kar apne prove kar diya not me u r mad Mr Mad Singh Khuraana (she yelled)

Maan: Beti ne trailer dikha diya ..aab Maa puri film dikha rahi hai(he mumbled)

Geet: apne kush kaha ?

Maan: Meri itni himaat main kush bolu jab sabh aap he bol rahi hai (he was helpless in front of her ..never expected that such situation can come )

Geet: Oh to apka matlab hai main binna kisi wajah k bol rahi hu..apko main pagal lagti hu

Maan: Nahi bilkul nahi pagal to main hu as u said ...aap meri teacher ban jaa-ea (his dual meaning was very clear to Geet )

Geet: Oh to aap yeh keh rahe hai main pagal hu..aur apki teacher hone ka matlab yahi hai na..teacher wahi teach karta hai jo uske pass ho ja sikha ho..(She moved near to his chair n bent on him holding one chair arm.)

Maan: Aap ki himmat kush jayada nahi baad rahi Miss Handa (he stammers) aap kripya mujhe uthne dengi

Geet: Maine aap ko pakad kar rakha hai kya uthiye (she put off her hand from chair arm..let him get up)

Maan: Miss Handa agar mujhe pata hota k aapko bura lagega to

Geet: to aap mujhe cheque na bhejte..its good apko apni galti pata to chal gayi (she was happy atleast she made him realize )

Maan: Ji Miss Handa mujhe samjhna chaahea tha aap koi aam insaan to hai nahi Mr Inder Handa ki beti hai..jst 30,000 advance bhejna insult hogi apki okey tell me what advance u want as much as u can (he was serious.he took Geet's intentions wrong way )

Geet: Kya ?

Maan: Ya Miss Handa if u want cash or check its up to u

Geet: How dare u Mr Khuraana..maine soch aap ko akal aa gayi k apne mere emotions ko samjh kar apni galti maani...K jaise Mannat hai mere liye waise he Rehaan..per aap to aur bhi aagay baad gaye...mujhe paise de kar aap meri Mamta mere pyar ka mazaak bana rahe hai..ek chote se bache ko mere hath ka khanna acha laga to uske Papa ne mujhe cook appoint kar diya for his son (she was much serious n felt insult)

Maan: Miss Handa isme aisa kya ho gaya k apko bura laga apne betay k liye mujhe jo theek laga maine kiya jo usse acha lagta hai I can provide him.I hav that much money (he placed his both hands on waist n got up from chair )

Geet: Paise paise mere pass bhi bahut hai itne k apke is thirty thousnad k badle main 30 best cooks appoint kar sakti hu apke liye on my own allowance. Apko bahut proud hai apne pasie per wait (she put her hand in beg and took out a handsome amount of cash )

Maan: Yeh kya (😲)

Geet: 30 thousand apne diya,Fifty thousand main de rahi hu...cash itna he hai mere pass n tell me how much more money u want I ll giv u cheque

Maan: What?


Geet: I mean go to mental hospital Mr Khuraana...or go to any heart specialist...apke pass na dimaag hai na dil check karva lena acha hai...(he taunted )

Maan: Dekhiye Miss Handa

Geet: Let me speak...maine lunch bheja isliye nahi that I want money becoz jaise Mannat hai waise he Rehaan hai mere liye...mili nahi abhi main usse but I lov him.Aur sirf Rehaan k liye he nahi agar mujhe Mannat aur Rehaan ki sari class k liye bhi lunch bheja padde I ll arrange..when ever they need.

Maan: Per kab tak bhej sakti hai one week one month kab tak.

Geet: I don know per jab tak main bhej sakti hu bhe-ju gi

Maan: U don know dekha ...Agar main apko pay kar rah hu to I m not wrong...Professionally kaam karna aur hota hai aur emotionaaly aur...Agar main apko professionally deal karne k liye keh raha hu i means u ll keep this in mind u hav to do it ..work u r paid for but

Geet: But iske agay nahi Mr Khuraana..agar aap samjhte hai sirf pasie se har kaam hota hai..I m ashamed off that.Ek itna bada business man but emotions k naam per koi greeb se greeb insaan apse uper hai (she was doing that what no one could do in years to show him real image of relations n emotions.Which he had not but his lil son had)

Maan: Plz Miss Handa bahut ho gaya (he yelled )

Geet: Let me speak mili to pehli baar hu main apse per samjh bahut kush gayi hu..aap apne betay k liye khushiya paise se lena chahte hai ..but it is not possible.




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Maan: I can giv what ever my son wants

Geet: Oh to aab pushiye apne betay se why he is not interested in food cooked by ur cook ?

Maan:Shayad usko acha na laga ho bacha hai ek acha nahi laga dusra sahi

Geet: U mean to say wo dusra cook Geet Handa hai

Maan:Maine apko cook nahi kaha

Geet: Aap ka professionalism mujhe cook bana sakta hai but apke bache ka pyar sirf mujhe Maa ki tarah dekhta hai...usko cook ki nahi Maa ki zaroorat hai...I know he had no mother..but its okey jo bhagwaan ne usse cheen liya.I mean Maa..usko hum badal nahi sakte ..per main ek Maa hu aur ek Maa k liye bacha-bacha he hota hai usko janam diya ho ja nahi.

Maan: Mujhe nahi pata is sabh baton ka bas main yahi jaanta hu mera bacha mere liye sabh kush hai aur uske liye main kush bhi kar sakta hu

Geet: Paise se

Maan: Agar mere pass yeh sabh hai to why not I can buy any thing for him

Geet: But not lov..Maa nahi khareed sakte aap...ek Maa bache ka rishta aap nahi samjh sakte..yeh wahi samjh sakta hai jis bachy k pass uski Maa na ho aur ya ek Maa se uska bacha..(she was not able to say more n fell in chair )

Maan: Miss Handa r u all rite (he was much tense looking at her)

Geet: Sorry Mr Khuraana..bahut bol gayi per ek Maa apne pyar ki insult nahi dekh sakti...aur paisa don feel proud if u hav money.Sabh khreed sakte hai insee...per ek din yahi pasa wajah ban jaata hai har dukh ka...aur kae baar itna mazboor kar deta hai k insaan ko khud baazar main le aata hai bikkne k liye.(sighed n got up from chair)

Maan: Main samjha nahi

Geet: Forget it..per Ha Mr Khuraana agay se aisa mat kijiye Rehaan ko jo kush bhi chahea aap mujhe bata dejiye I ll cook.Aur agar aap chahte hai to Rehaan k breakfast se dinner tak I m ready to provide my service..sorry a mother's service for her child.

Maan: Per aap

Geet: Don worry yeh routine miss nahi hogi..jo Mannat k liye banega wahi Rehaan k liye...school ho ja na ho dono ka..chuti ho..ja main out of town ho-u..Mere gahr Maa hai aur hamari mausi jo bahut salon se kaam karti hai hamare ghar..wo bhi waise he banati hai jaisa main..un donno se he sikha hai maine
(she tried to smile)

Maan: I m sorry Miss Handa but don take me wrong mera yeh iraada nahi tha .(he was really sorry)

Geet: Its okey aur agar aap wo pasie dena he chate hai to kisi orphenage main dedijiye dua dengay aur shayad mujhe bhi unki dua mil jaaye (she put her bag on shoulder n came to door when Inder came in )

She pretended nothing happened.

Inder: Geet main aaya tum chal padi

Geet: Wo papa plz carry on mujhe ghar ja kar lunch banana hai...Mannat ko bhi lene jaana hai...aur Mr Khuraana jo bhi Rehaan ko lene aaye ga main unke hath lunch bej dungi...if u want I ll send at ur home.(she said politly)

Maan: Don worry main school main he le lungi I m going to pick Rehaan

Inder: Yeh lunch ka kya chakkar hai

Geet: Kush nahi Papa wo Rehaan ko mere hath ka khaana acha lagta hai..waise Mr Khuraana sabse best cook le aa sakte hai per bacha to bacha hai yahan uska Maan chala gaya no one an stop.if he likes my cooking I ll feel proud /obliged to do some thing for him

Inder: Good Idea Geet. Tum Driver k sath jayo...maine dusri car magwa le hai.

Geet: okey Papa..bye Mr Khuraana nice to meet u

Maan: Thanx Miss Handa.(he has real happiness in his eyes to meet such a great lady )

She tried to put smile on her lips but failed.Maan noticed her sad eyes but was not able to understand why she is such.Her words really put deep impact on Maan first time in years.He was upset.But not showed Inder n asked him to start.

Hop friends u gonna read it.If u lik plz giv ur views n hit lik

Lov J

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superb chalu hai yarrr .. plz plz plz continew... sahi nok-zok
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Great update! Love the nok jhok wish to see more of mannat in the next!!!

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