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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Nice concept...
Loved the prologue...
By the way Who is"he" n "she" here??/

Continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN



Dear I can only tell..lik previous season...this is all about a kid's desire for a father but also a kids desire for mother no illegitimate relations but more that its new concept..not continuation of previous.As I hav made plan I gonna keep Sam out of it.Its whole about Maan n Geet n their extra ordinary relation plus some concepts from medical science...No no not take it as super natural or science fiction.Its a story about two persons who don't wanna marry. even then how they get bound in a relation lets see.

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jass


Loved the concept... A bit different

Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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intresting plot for season two
they have different views on family and marriage
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the season 2...

nice intro...

waiting for it to begin,...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww MERAY PAPA MAAN is back yupieee
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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eagerly waiing so happy that u sarted season two but confused also why u have given that relationship detail like that but confuse also
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow interesting
Loved it
Beautiful starting
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1

KM

7:30 in the morning

Whole staff was on toes.Becoz Mr Maan Singh Khuraana had to b in urgent meeting before 8..And the venue for this meeting no where else than his own place Khuraana Mension..He had cold n fever too..When doctor advised to stay back at home for couple of days.So he shifted KC to KM.as always he do in emergencies.KM staff was suffering more Becoz servents had to bear him more hours during his stay at home.

'Nakul …Nakul' shouting at Nakul , Maan came downstairs.'Is ghar main sabh pagal hai…when ever I need..I never find any one' He put his hands on waist n moved toward Kitchen.

'Maan whats wrong with u ..why hav u set whole house on fire if u need any think tell me' Savitri Devi ...Maan's Granny came listening to her grand son's favorite time pass shouting...He had done his home work for presentation . But still half hour was left in meeting so he had nothing to do now.

'Daddi Maa what u mean to say.I seem mad to u tht I m calling Nakul without an reason.' He burst on Daddi

'I think there is no doubt u r turning out to b mad..with over load of work..But by the way Nakul is not at home..I hav sent him to market.'Daddi gav her verdict about his disturbed mental balance

'Okey fine if u think I m mad…its okey I don care.' He said rudely 'But u know I want my every thing on palce .jab mujhe office k liye ready hona ho…n this is Nakul's responsibility.I m searching for my wallet from last half n hour.But where Nakul hided it I don know.'So this was real reason he was shouting

'Maan hum apki Daddi hai..I hav kept eye on you from days...u were a spoiled brat from child hood.But now u r crossing ur limits.Kissi rishte ko samjhte nahi aap.Beta I brought u up after u lost ur Mom n Dad…n not even me matter for u…' She started to cry.

'Daddi plz don start ur emotional atyaa chaar…U know Ur emotional blackmailing is your only weapon for me...Mujhe pata ho bhi k aap drama kar rahi hai..fir bhi main iske agay haar jata hu ' He held Daddi's shoulders

'No Maan I m not blackmailing u…Its true I hav every thing even then I hav nothing..😭 Jab koi rishta he na ho to beta bakhi kya…I hav jst u n Dev he never cares about me.U may b rude…u may show that u don care about me.. But its true U lov me..u care about me.So beta tell me what can I do else then this u call drama !! to get ur attention' tears rolled down to her cheeks.

'Daddi plz tell me this is ur drama or not to b in tears..drama he to hai 'He teased' Why the way I want Nakul jst Nakul..and due to that duffer I hav to bear u r emotional atya char…I don know whether I gonna concentrate on my presentation or not 'He said few lines loudly but then started to murmur.

'U r saying some thing to me Maan' she noticed it.

'Oh not at all Daddi…How can I..meri itni himmat, I said what's mystry behind Nakul's such careless behavior I hav to find out.'He rotated whole conversation.

'That's why beta I always say ...its high time u should get married.U r such a busy person..😆 Bahu aa jaa-a gi to beta yeh problem nahi hogi..she ll take care about ur every need' Now she started new topic for today but it has became a headache for Maan..She always compelled him to get married.

'No Daddi not again how many times u asked me for this..but still my answer is same no .n u know the reason.' he again became hiper.

'Reason which baseless n illogical reason ...jo aap hum ko detay ho ..if ur parents marriage was a failure it not means every marriage is a failure ' Daddi tried to make him understand true meaning of this relation.

'Oh Daddy not again..Dad he never cared about Mom becoz he had no time for home n mom except his work... mom she also became such parties , shopping friends this was her routine ...She had a illogical baseless reason tha if dad not cared about her she had no reason to care about him.But Daddi what about us both brothers.' He forcibly tried to put out his frustration for parents

Daddi 'But Maan'..Maan he not let Daddi say more 'Let me complete first...Mom arranged Aaya for us.Jst lik we were brought to this world to show people that Khuraana empire had heir n this was jst Dad's business when he always said in front of people..my son gonna take over me n he ll b more successful them me.Then I alwaz thought that I m a product n Dad is on promotion campaign which gonna b beneficial for him'He fell on floor n held Daddi from her legs

'Maan get up beta my intentions were not to hurt u...but beta every thing should not b taken with one point of view.Look at me n ur Grand Paa n Our relation..I was very happy with my relation..I dedicated my whole lif for my relation ..to brought up kids n now my grand children 'She made him to stand up

'Daddi Maa baat ghum fir k wahi aa gayi hier...u gav hier to ur husband.U urself told me apki repect jayada hoti thi kyonki apne ek vaaris diya tha ..aur apki behan jo apki j-thani (wife of husband's elder brother) thi uski koi kadar nahi thi...why jst due to a heir..u gav family a heir...even Dadda ji always told u..that u gav them a heir..other wise apki behan ko ghar se nikaal diya jaata...'

'Beta yeh hamari il laws ki soch thi...not of both brothers who belong to us...wo to aisa nahi sochte thay'Daddi trued to correct

'But Daddi ur Didi's husband might not hav that courage to face parents..unko ghar senikaal diya jata wo kush na kar paate...unko ghar main isliye rakha gaya becoz her sister gav a heir ..mean u...n they took pity on ur sister..it means apki shaddi sirf ek vaaris k aas paas he reh gayi agar wo nahi milta to apki behan k sath he nahi apke sath kya hota' he said in one go.

'Maan its rule of our society...we hav to care about those customs which society had made for us.I was literate enough to take care of business.But I always remained a wife first.Becoz in a relation on person always hav to bent n it always expected form a woman. Marriage ka main reason he vaaris hota hai...kal bhi kahi kaaran tha aaj bhi..chahe hum kitne bhi modren na ho jaaye n try to accept this' she tried to change his mind But no effect on him

'Okey u need a heir.U ll get.But how I don know n can't tell u ...till then don force me aur baat rahi bahu ki agar wo sirf isliye hai k husband ki daily needs ki care kare..to kissi maid ko sindoor aur mangal sutar pehna dejiye ..ban gayi bahu...yahi meaning hai na shaddi ka..apko heir bhi main dunga aur bahu bhi...apka bahu puraan tab pura ho jaa-a-ga jab kiss maid ko with symbols of marrige dekhy-gi..wiase Mangal sutar main mangva dunga aur sindoor wo to Mandir main hota he hai...'he was bit serious taunted her also

'Maan apse baat karna bainse(buffalo) k aagay been bajana hai..' she was frustrated now

'As u say ..I m going in meeting jab Nakul aa jaye gav my message to him 'He was about to leave ' N Daddi don cry now '

'Maan hamari baat to suniye' she shouted from back

'Sun li apki baat..I gonna giv u heir...cheer up now' he left

'What he is upto hamare sir-firre (careless) Maan k dimaag main kya hai koi nahi jaanta' she murmured n sighed

So buddies hop u ll lik.Plz press lik n don forget to comment.Ur replies always help to improve n motivate to giv best.If there is some thing I should improve ..plz tell me



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Jass 😆 😭 .

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it
I think this time you are trying your hand at surrogacy
Continue soon

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