A Sudden Change Of Heart

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#621

loved it !
thanx fo a very lengthy part :)

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Smile90

@Smile90

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#622

Hey Loving the way the Story is Proceeding 😆 !!! Getting damn Curious each time ...

Gr8 Job 😃

Rocking Update 🥳

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arunaprakash.16

@arunaprakash.16

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#623

Lovely update Sarzah,u are a terrific writer and definitely know what u are writing and how.Geet is a virgin and that we came to know when Meera asked her whether she was pregnant and she answered her "how can I get pregnant asexually,when I have not done anything" and all this is heard by Maan.So we know that Dev didn't do anything bad to her and also Meera says that if at all it's anybody's fault it's Dev's and not Geet's...

So it would indeed be interesting to know,what Geet has done to make her feel that Maan would hate her...Continue writing and pls update soon.Can understand how hectic it would get with the university and all that but pls do try bcoz we love your writing...All the best for your exams,quizzes,presentations etc...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#624

Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Superbly written! Past well incorporated! wat happened to Geet! Y does Geet feel tht Maan hates her! update soon

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#625

YAAR Y UR CONFUSING ME
ABI TK KOI IDEA NHI Y SHE BROKE HER MARRIAGE
BT IM HAPPY SHE BROKE HER MARRIGE WITH HIM...😆
😆NICE PART
CONT SOONN

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#626

Awesome update..

awww geet''s past was terrible but interesting...

continue soon

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#627

Geet's past is sooo interesting gosh

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#628

awesome update .

waiting for the next.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#629

u weaved the past with present very beautifully...

it seems as I am watching a movie...

waiting for more past...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...