A Sudden Change Of Heart

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Nice...again yu stopped at wrong point
Nwzzz ll be waiting

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Awesome Update not again ,again you hang us on cliff waiting for truth to completely reveal ..

waiting for next update please update soon

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

tud mel fainted you updated on time. Tu Sarzah hi hain na😕😆

I don; t get it why would maan hate her if dev cheated on her with neha that' s what I thought but seems like something is terribly wrong

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

awesome update. again stopped at the cliff. want the truth to be revealed sooner. waiting for the next. update soon

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Sarzu, fast ke beech mey itna stress mat le. Sara is happy with the length, update times, pace of the story and even the cliff.

Like said before, me remember everything but loved your effort to connect. Dev, the bastar* ke baare mey jo doubt hai, woh meine phele hi bata diya hai. Geet is worried for Maan's reaction in the end, Maan is worried for Geet's horrible past and me worried ke, dev ke baare mey jaan ne ke baad saada munda uska ki haal karega. This hatred is nothing, past ke end ka dekhiyo. Meera was right, Geet felt nothing for him isliye Maan ki entry ke baad hi, she got all those feelings. Overall, superb.

Do cont soon and do PM me.

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Pearl

@Pearl_27

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

I really Just loved it.
It was Superb

Waiting for Maan's reactions and not really worried for Mr Dev Malhotra.
Geet's past is going to take how many Parts.

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

she had a terrible past...

meera was right abt geet...

i dont know wat 2 say...so much engrossed reading her past...

feel like killing dat jerk...idiot dev wid my bare hands

cont

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

the past is very interesting... loving it..

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

awesome update

loved it

waiting eagerly to know what happened to geet in the past?

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#620

Just read all the parts in a go... Loved this story...

I love the whole pace... the flow of events.. everything about this... and i loved ur characterization... Its so good to see the MSK and Geet equally smart, shrewd... and with perfection...

And the way you are building up their love for each other is awesome...

Past of Geet is revealing slowly... am so anxious to know it as to why Geet thinks Maan would leave her and she is not worth for another relation...

Eagerly waiting for your updates...

continue soon