Padosi:maan geet ff/pt 17-pg 20,june 4

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crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Read all the parts at one go.
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing
Like the bond Maan n Geet share.

Maan is protective abt Geet n is
Savior in troubles.

Continue soon.

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anky_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

brilliant concept...came across this OS 2day & loved it. Awesome.

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Hellozz...even I hv tried my luck on MG FF & started 2 FFs here are the links.

My work on Maaneet :

Soulmates - A journey begins

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2987446/soulmates-mg-ff-updated-pt-11-pg68-nov-2

Love Will Find A Way

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2821693/lovewillfindaway-on-hold-8-8-2014

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FanDeep

@Fandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

PART 10
GEET:maa,aap aise kaise kar sakte ho.aap ne brij virji ka shadi fix kiya woh bi mere practicals ke din.maine kitne saare sapne dek rake the.lekin aapne mere saare sapne tod diye.ab toh mein aapne he virji ki shadi mein yaha rahungi aur aap sab wahan par enjoy karna.
Shalini:geet beta samajne ki kosis kijiye, agar hum uss din ke liye brij ki shadi fix nahi karte,toh agli muhurat 5 saal baad ka hai,aur tab tak unki shadi ka umar nikal jhata.aur hum itna intazar toh nahi kar sakte nah.vaise bhi tumhari hone wali bhabi ko hum kitna intezar karvate.

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FanDeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Cont...
So finaly geet is coming today.after so much of manofying by shalini.the practicals due to which she was arguing was postponed to next month.so today maan and geet are going to meet each other after long 3 yrs.it was not like that ,that our geet didn't come to her home in this 3yrs.but can say its coincidence that maan was always out of station whenever she came.But this time Geet's Babaji has different plans,which no one can change.
Its already very busy night everyone is busy in preparations.whole KM was present in HM.Brij is talking with some freind who is apologising that he will not be coming 4 his marraige.Our Maan has alloted the job of decorating HM.Dev and Mohinder is discussing the rituals to be done tommarow with Darji.princess of khurana's Miss Anwesha khurana is selecting the jewels to be wore tommarow.
Maan:Nakul bhaiya dekiye wahan par yeh curtain laga dijiye.
Nakul:ji maan baba laga deta hoon.
Maan was standing there wearing royal blue shirt with his track pant.and his hands on his hips,thinking what to do to complete the decoration of this corner.An idea struck in his mind .
Maan:ramu kaka woh kal maine kuch flower vass laya tha woh apne kaha raka hai.
Ramu:woh tho brij baba ke kamre main hai.
Brij:aare buddy kya hua ,yeh lo mere attached store room ka key.tere kal ke shopping ka sara saman usi mein hai.
Maan took the key and went towards brij's room.
Annie:shalini aunty geet di kab aane wali hai.i can't wait any more.
Shalini:beta woh toh kal subah 5AM yaha pohunchegi.
But no one know that geet has just entered main gate.
Geet:Aaj toh sabko surprise kar dungi.sabse pehle brij veeji ko,aakir dulha jo banne wale hai.
She switched off the main switch of HM,without getting caught by security.
In the hall
Shalini and Radika: oh ho!ab isse kya hogaya zara dikiye na.
Dev: Darji aap yahi baite rahiye hum dekh kar aate hai.Annie yahi pe baito brij ke saat.
Meanwhile maan just entered brij's room.
Maan:electricity ko bhi aab hi jana tha.buddy candles shelf ke niche wale cupboard main rakte hai ,chalo main utta leta hoon.
He lightened the candle.while geet was using her mobile flash and was entering from backdoor,when she was just 1 room away from brij's room.her mobile became off.she was scared of darkness so she ran to brij's room and entered panting bump into Maan's back who was holding candel,candel fell down,room was again dark.with a swift maan turned he felt the person who bumped to him was falling.he just grabbed the person,then he realised its a girl.In fraction of seconds the girl moved her hands and hugged him tightly,her heart beat was loud and high to be heard by him.she was shivering,he guessed may be due to darkness.he just felt their hearts were trying to communicate.the girl's hot and rapid breath was falling on his chest as the buttons of his shirt was already broken while girl grabed his shirt while falling.

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Geet Cuming to home after much persistance
From her mom.
Maan already present. First meeting hone wala
Hai sirf Geet ka intezaar hai

Geet comes wid Surprise. N she dashed int our
Maan. Loved their meeting. Both hugging each
Other

Waiting more for Maaneet part n lets see how
Their meeting goes on. Geet kta karne wali hai.
Candles toh gira di.

Continue soon.

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FanDeep

@Fandeep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Cont...
Both of them felt a different type of comfort in each others arm as if this place was made for them.
Geet:wow! Veerji aap ka toh shadi ka preparation dumdaar hai.apne bade ache dole-shole banaye hai.babhi toh aap par aise hi latoo thi ab toh fanna ho jayegi.aur aap toh aaj mere hero ho.mujhe bachaya jo hai aapne girne se.toh ek chota aur pyara gift toh banta hai.idar aiye(she pulls his chin ) ummmha(planted a kiss on his chin)
Maan was totaly shoked and silent by her soft melodies voice,it seems like that he was hearing something which could take out all his stress n tiredness inseconds.then the sudden touch of the most softest petal like lips on his chin which reminded him the 1st time when he has got kissed by a girl,after years also he remmembered that special feeling and found similarity with previous incident.uncounciously he held her more tight and whispered her name near her ear.
Maan: Geet
geet was shocked hearing his sexy voice,she shivered,a current passed through her spine.she loosened her hands .But maan was no where near to listen,his hands were doing magic all over her body.
Precap:everyone is there on dance floor including bride and groom.

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago

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kuhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

lovely part

cont soon with longer update please

and please update CC also

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FanDeep

@Fandeep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

PART 11

Maan was shocked by the behaviour and continous chattering of this girl.He was feeling as if he was in heaven when he held the girl bumped to him.He was feeling d comfort which he never felt with his girlfreind also.But when he heard her musical voice and heard her misunderstanding him as Brij.He realised the girl no one other than Geet.Before he clear her misunderstanding she just gave him precious gift which he got earlier 4 years back.A peck on his cheek.

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago

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FanDeep

@Fandeep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

The kiss was for very small duration,but feel of her soft lip on his skin was going to remain in his heart life long.He tightened his grip on her waist.Geet placed her head oh his chest above his heart.He realised that geet was afraid of darkness .

MAAN:Hey geet don't worry light will come soon.

At the same time light came n brij was wondering n coming to his room that why maan is taking such a long time.When he was about to enter his room .

Mohinder: Brij beta come fast u have a call from ur freind.

Brij:ya i m coming dad

Maan: Buddy!!!

Geet: Bhai

Both maan and geet looked each other with shocking face.Geet n maan moved back from each other.Brij entered his room

Brij:where r u Maan?Did u find the things of urs

.Brij : Maan! Maan!

Here Maan n Geet heard brij's voice n was in a shock.If brij see them like this it will give another meaning to him.so Maan just dragged Geet into the attached bathroom n closed d door from inside.Geet was in confused she didn't know what was she doing.when she realised what they were doing she asked maan.

Maan n geet both were standing facing d door.T hen Maan heard her saying

Geet : Maan ..hmn...hmm

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago