Padosi:maan geet ff/pt 17-pg 20,june 4

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love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

omg...omg...geet kissed maan...haan baba...pata hai...cheeks pe...but its deir first kiss...dey r small na...chalta hai...

m happy...abhise dono ekdoosre ka khayal rakhte hai...kya baat hai...m impressed...

awesome n beautiful update...

its amazing...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

loved their first kiss...

Urghh..i hate rajiv..

precap s a bit scary..

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mandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awesum update dear:) thanks for pm:)

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FanDeep

@Fandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Part 6
Geet woke up at 6AM.her ma was amazed by her behaviour,she is now sitting in dinning and was taking her breakfast with the whole handa's .they usualy take their breakfast at 8.30AM,but today their ladli geet was going picnic and only return after 3 days.brij was pulling her legs.
Brij: geet ko roj utathe utathe murga tak kar so jata hai.lekin ajj wo behosh hi hogaya jab geet uske bulane se pehle hi ut gayi.
Geet:isme toh bhaiya aapka hi fayda hai ,uske behosh ho jane ke vajah se aap ko aaj dinner mein chicken mil jayega aur mehnat bi nahi karni padegi.
Everyone laughed at their joke.
Everyone went to see off her.while maan also reached there.no one came to see off him as he didn't like to be pampered like a child in front of his freinds.brij went to him leaving other member's of handa's near geet.
Brij:buddy enjoy ur journey .
Maan:thankyou buddy.(with a smile)
brij:maan geet pehli bar hum sab se itna dur jha rahi hai.aur wahan koi pehchan ke log bhi nahi hai,uska kayal rakna.
Maan:aapko chinta karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai,main hoon na.
Saying this he left towards the bus after giving brij a bear hug.
After a few minutes the bus left the place and parents who were standing there to see off there child left the place .while everyone was enjoying ,girls were singing songs.after a while mishra sir conducted antankshari,as the girls were good at singing they won.but the boys also played their best and given girls good competition.in the mean while maan was watching geet througout the journey.rajvir was sitting in the last seat,he was staring at geet with the evil smile pasted on his face,this was not gone unoticed by maan.
Their picnic was in the bank of yamuna river,the place was full of greenery the children who were living in the heart of city,admired the scenic beauty in front of them. When they reached the picnic spot it was already 3.30PM so, they just went around and came back to their camp.the boys were allocated their camp at a distance from girls and in between boys and girls camp there was kitchen and dinning cum gathering area.while taking dinner both maan and geet were looking for each other ,when they spotted each other they were in peace and went to their respective tent.
In the next day they all went around, played,some competition was held in dancing geet bagged first price,and while maan was declared man of the match ,their team won the match.Rajvir was in the opposite team and he was bowled out by maan.they enjoyed the whole day,mean while after the lunch rajvir approached to geet with the praposal of showing her the nearby deer park where a group of deers were living,but geet refuced it directly in front of his freind which was a great insult for him. All of them were exausted and slept early,the next day they will start their journey back to the home.in the mid night when all of them sleeping,geet came outside the tent she wanted to freshen up.she thought of calling pari but she was in the deep sleep .so she didn't disturbed her.she went outside towards bathroom while returning someone grabbed her hand and jerked her towards himself,she felt someone against her she looked at him she was terrified.
Geet:rajvir tum?
Rajvir: haan main,tumhe subhah mere saat aane mein problem ho rahi thi na ,ab dekta hoon tum kaise mujse door rahti ho.
Rajvir was coming near her ,she was moving backward but a tree blocked her way.she was pinned between the tree and rajvir.
Rajvir snatched her duppata and it landed the ground.she tried to scream but instantly rajvir closed her mouth with his one hand.the other hand of him was placed in her waist and gradualy moved towards her shoulder and torn her salwar from back.she was trying to scream but her mouth was shut by his hand.she was pleading to him through eyes to leave her.rajvir was such a dirty filth he was now trailing over her neck with his lips.tears were coming out continously she was praying to her babaji to send someone for her help at the sametime she felt rajvir was no where near her and she heard the sound of falling.she opened her eyes to find her saviour in front of her with the red eyes ,folded fist looking at him which implies i will kill u.
Rajvir's nose was bleeding he looked towards maan and then geet.
Rajvir:maan don't interfere its between us.
Maan: between u and geet.then u should know that if geet is coming in the 'us' then i will be there always.u have to face MAAN SINGH KHURANA before facing GEET HANDA .
Rajvir:tum lagte kya ho iske,bf.
Maan:usse tumhe kya farak padta hai main boyfreind hoon ya best freind.
Maan kicked him again in the ground.geet was standing there shocked.maan walked towads her & placed her duppata and asked
maan:geet chalo
but geet didn't moved & was standing there crossed her arm over chest & tears were flowing from the brown beautiful eyes.maan took out his hanki and wiped her tears .
Maan:gabrao mat geet main hoon na tumhare saath.

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago

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kuhu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

nice part ... please cont soon

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

👏nice start👏

add me in your pm list

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

ossum part.

cont soon.

pls do pm whenever u update.

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

awesome updates both part 5 and 6

part 5 was cute when geet accidently kissed maan

part 6 thank god maan saved geet, hating this rajvir

continue soon

will be waiting!!!!!!!!

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

I have added u in my buddy list...

please pm me when u update...

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FanDeep

@Fandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Part 7
Their return journey was quite .geet was depressed due to previous day experience and maan was worried for geet .He was feeling guilty for not being able to keep his words to Brij and geet's fear filled eyes which he have seen was haunting him.the bus was at one hour distance frm their stop.this stop where now they were standing was the last stop before their home everyone went to eat something or freshen up. But maan was only looking at geet .Geet was sitting blankly in the bus and was at the edge of crying. GEET'S POV
From the last night i am trying hard to forget the incident but whenever i see rajvir or maan i was again reminded of the incident.yesterday the pain in me was due to the incident,i was feeling disgusted i have washed several time my body where he touched.but now i am not feeling the pain mainly due to incident,but only thinking of the family knowing the fact make her weak. they wil breakdown if they came to know about the incident.the bus stopped for 30 min break in the mean while everyone freshen up and have take food frm the near by restraunt .geet went there and took corner table.Maan noticed this and was going towards her same time maan's freinds made him to sit with them.they were some important ,but maan's attension was towads geet only after few minutes he exuse himself and went towards geet at the same moment pari was coming towards geet .Maan knows that if pari will sit with geet then he will not be able to ease geets pain.so maan walked fast and sat on the opp seat facing geet. Maan looked towards pari but she already changed her direction watching maan sitting with geet.maan's gaze now move towards geet.

Precap:they exchanged their ph no.from there started the journey of two freind maaneet.
[sorry guys for changing the precap]

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago

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