Soulmates-MG FF-UPDATED Pt 11/Pg68/Nov.2

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My New Creation for you all... Another attempt to make you fall in Love with our very owm Maaneet all over again. An attempt to write something which has humour, rage, friendship, love, jealousy, passion, dreams, compassion, struggle, tiffs, understanding, sense of longing, belonging, companionship, competition, scuffle & much more. I don't know if I would be able to bring all these emotions together in a correct way or not but if I have your support then I know nothing is impossible. So, are you here with me in this Journey of various emotions of Maan - Geet ?












Soulmates - A Journey Begins








Hello friends, I am back (well did I go at 1st place) wid another fiction story for you all. I know my very 1st FF has just started & U must be thinking I have gone mad to start another one. But this story has been in my heart for long & now I can't resist penning it down. It will be a short story not too long but I don't know how many parts it will contain. The theme or basic essence of the story is partly inspired by my real life experience (not personally mine) & partly by reel life i.e. films. I am giving an intro of characters & a synopsis of the track here so guys plz lemme know if I shall proceed wid this track or not. Your views & suggestions matter a lot & I am hoping to get as good response as I got for my 1st FF.


Guys, if you like the concept & want me to go ahead wid it then do tell me. Also, if you want PMs for this or my other FF then add me to ur buddy list by this name :

"anky_s"







Here is the Character Sketch :


Gurmeet Chaudhary as Maan Singh Khurrana :








Drashti Dhami as Geet Handa :





Karan Wahi as Rishabh Handa (Geet's twin
brother) :






Kanwaljeet Singh as Mohinder Handa (Geet's Dad,
I love him as her dad so cudn't change it) :





Kiran Juneja as Rano Handa (mother)






Anil Kappor as Samarvir Singh Khurana (Maan's Dad)
Note: Guys, I know AK still come as HERO but he suits my story best so I took him & well he's 50+ so no harm.





Sridevi as Surbhi Khurana (Maan's Mom)



Rati
Pandey as Akriti Singh (Geet's childhood friend)





Mohit Malhotra as Vishrut Sharma (Maan's
childhood buddy)




Jaskaran Singh as Uday Singhania (Identity will
reveal in story itself)






There are more characters which will come in
focus as the story moves on.




Synopsis :


The story majorly revolves around Geet - Maan & their journey from acquaintance to friends to best friends & eventually falling in Love & at last realization of their own feelings. Geet & Maan 1st met each other at their coaching class in 11th grade but get separated as Geet leaves to Kota for further coaching. Both meet
again after an year gap when they took admission in same college in Delhi. It's a story about their friendship, college life, their dreams & their love. A story of how they deal wid their lives, fulfilling dreams, copping up wid pressure, emotionalturmoil. It's
a very simple yet loveable story so plz don't expect any high class drama here coz am very bad at that. Also, the initially the track is based in Delhi & will cover different places as the story moves on. Also, there is no past of Maan & Geet.



So, this is it guys. Now tell me how do you feel
about the concept, characters & everything. Shall I continue wid this or
not. Waiting for you all to response. Please be kind enough to tell your views.



Love
anky






Index :


Part # 1:




Part # 2:





Part # 3 :




Part # 4:




Part # 5:




Part # 6:




Part # 7:




Part # 8:




Part # 9:




Part # 10:


IMP. NOTE :



Part # 11 :











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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww sounds interesting plzz add me loved it very much
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sounds very interesting continue soon
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interesting...
cont soon dear...
and pm me...
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very interesting concept...

and the best thing is that no hidden past...

start updating soon...
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thnx for the pm dearcongrats for the new ff
interesting concept
loved the character sketch

plz do continue soon
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THE CONCEPT SOUNDS GREAT
WAITNG FOR IT TO START
CONGRATS ON A NEW STORY
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interesting concept...
waiting fr da frst pat...
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Hello friends! Wud like to thank you all for appreciating this concept of mine.😊 I am really glad you ppl liked it & I just hope u'l continue to like this story in future as well. I am trying to update the very 1st part of this track soon maybe in a day or two till then plz wait for it & am I promise I won't disappoint you.
Keep showering your love & support like u always do.😊
And, 1 more thing friends if any1 who want me to PM them the updates then I request them all to add me to their buddy list as for me it is difficult to PM if ur not in my buddy list.

Here's my profile link, so you can add me here :
anky_s: http://www.india-forums.com/view_profile.asp

love
anky
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Sorry guys for delaying the update. 1st I wasn't satisfied with wot i wrote so I wrote it all again & then whenever I tried to update there was a power cut each time. honestly, I don't if I wud be able to post it this time even!
Anyways, here I am with the very 1st update of this FF & I just hope u all will like it. Don't forget to drop ur precious comments, views & suggestions. Also, remember that the "Like" button will always be waiting to be hit by u all.😉










Soulmates - A journey begins










Soulmates - A Journey Begins



Part 1






The morning is the sign of a new begining of everything. Its brings a new day with new hope, new happiness, new zeal, new work etc.. Everything about a morning is new when everyone gets up with a idea of a new start leaving everything behind with gone night.The morning rays are not only rays but a light which guides humans in their lives.Morning has been said as most beautiful & precious phase of a day.

New Delhi...

6'o clock in Morning...

Khurana Mansion...



As the morning rays were trying their luck to enter the room of a 16yr old boy who was sleeping peacefully in his king sized pluffy bed totally unaware of the fact that a new day has started. As the sun rays got their luck in peeping inside the room & they landed on the boy's face disturbing his sleep & in no time the rays were debarred of entry in the room as the boy still in his sleep pressed a button nearby the head rest of the bed & the roller shutters/ window shields started rolling down further preventing the light to enter room & making it pitch dark again & the boy again went into deep slumber. a few moments later a beautiful lady entered the room & frowned finding the shields being shut. She first open the shields & then went near the bed. She admired the boy for a while & then sat beside him & brushed her hand in his hair & said, "Manu, (nickname of Maan which only his mother can call him) wake up beta else u'l get late on the 1st day of ur new session."
Maan pulling the quilt over himself "umm, mom bas 5min aur"
"beta its already 6:30, how much more u want to sleep now?"
"bas 5min mom"
She sighed & got up saying, "wake up in 5mins, am sending ur juice.Ab main nahi aaungi uthane even if u miss ur school". Saying so she walked out of the room & Maan got relief as he got some more mins to sleep.

Nakul came into his room in 5mins wid his juice & tried to wake him up. Maan again tried his trick on Nakul but Makul being Nakul din't budge & said, "chhote saab, uth jaiye nahi toh memsaab mujhe bahut daantengi"
"Kya yaar Nakul tu mere liye ek din daant nahi kha sakta!"
"Roz toh khata hoon aaj subah-subah nahi khana chahta, ab aap plz uth jao naa"😆
"hmm...abhi uth raha hoon 2min mein"
"Nahi aap abhi k abhi uthiye"
saying so he 1st switched off AC & then pulled quilt from Maan's body & took his hand in order to made him sit on the bed. Giving up to this chipku Nakul, Maan sighed & got up.Nakul stood beside him like a statue wid juice in his hands. Maan looked over him with look "Arrrghh...now wot?"

Nakul dint get his look or shud say was indifferent as he knew once he went out Maan again gonna sleep.Nakul's silence was a torture & Maan frustratedly got up & went in washroom banging the door shut. Nakul went near washroom door & said, " apka juice rakha hai pee lena aur jaldi se breakfast ke liye aa jana". Inside the washroom hearing Nakul like a robot Maan was like where shud I bang my head.😡




At the same time...



New Delhi...



Handa Residence...




The scene in the room of a 16yr old gal was not much different than that of Maan's room just some additions like the alarms went dead after keep buzzing for god knows how long but the person in the room in midst of these noises kept sleeping without a slightest frown. Now that's wot we call "khumbhkaran ki neend"! Rano came inside the room all the way cribbing to her daughter for being such a late riser. "Geet, uth ja dekh nahi toh tu phir se late ho jayegi"

"umm..."

"yelo, isse toh koi matlab he nahi hai.
(in a calm sarcastic tone) Queen Elizabeth, please wake ma'am else u'l get late on the 1st day ur new class."
"kya hai mumma, subah-2 kyu natak kar rahe ho, sone dona"
"Oh madam, holidays over isliye ab uth aur school k liye ready ho nahi toh tere woh Sharma Sir tujhe chhodenge nahi".
Hearing the name of Sharma Sir, Geet snapped open her eyes & got up with a jerk & looked at the watch, "Babaji, 6:45 ho gaye! Maine toh 6:00am ka alarma lagay tha par yeh khote bajte he nahi hain. Ab main late ho gayi toh woh Sir toh sach mein mera bharta bana denge. Chal, Geet jaldi kar beta."
Rano silently watched all the drama of her lovely daughter with a sweet smile adorning her face.She shook her head at Geet's antics & got downstairs.




Khurana Mansion



Maan got ready as fast as possible as he doesn't want to be late for school. He went downstairs to the dinning table where his Dad ws waiting while reading newspaper. He greeted him, "Morning dad".
"Morning son"
saying so he removed the newspaper from his face & looked at Maan. Samarvir Singh Khurana, a loving husband, a dotting father, & a successful business man.The business world calls him "Baazigar" for his sense of business.He even loses only to win. He has been the undisputed king of the corporate sector.He had reached at the pak in very less time which one can't even dream of.Yet he is a down to earth person with no arrogance, no proud. He treat all as equals but when it comes to business he is a just like Lion who at any cost will get his prey.
(u must be thinking why am describing Samarvir this much well AK deserves this much intro😉)
Back to dinning table...

"So, son all set to fire the new class"
Maan chuckled at his dad's remark & said, "yeah dad." SV patted his back & said, "Good luck for new start."
"Thanks dad!"
said Maan nibbling his pasta. "Ohh btw, Maan wot abt ur tutions? U said u wanted to join tution,so have u got any good coaching class?"
"umm.. I wanted to join separate tution so dropped the idea of coaching centre. Vishrut has found a sir who gives private tutions so we'l be joining that."
"Ok, so from when ur joining?"
"Aaj se dad."
"All subjects?"
"umm...no dad. I don't hv prob wid maths & physics so I am joining for Chemistry only."
"Great! If u need any help from me then tell me."
"sure dad. ok am done so gotta go now.Bye"
SV signalled for his mother & Maan shouted, "bye mom!" saying so Maan made his way out in garage. He took his bike & zoomed off to pick his best friend Vishrut.



Maan's Ducati (isn't it sexy😉)




Handa Residence



Geet rushed downstairs once all dressed.She knew she's late AGAIN. "Babaji, aaj phir se late ho gaya. Par main kya karu? Main toh kitni koshish karti hoon ki late naa hoon par phir bhi ho jati hoon aur aap bhi naa meri koi help nahi karte ho!" Her non-stop cribbing session to her Babaji was disturbed by a loud voice, "Geet, GEET, GEEETTT !!"

She got startled wid so much calling. "Uffo, aaj meri itni demand kyu hai?" she thought. She quickly reached dinning table & greeted her dad with a kiss on his cheek, "Gd mrng Papa!"
"Morning my princess"
said Mohinder smiling to her & then whispered "aaj phir late". Geet made a baby face & Mohinder patted her cheeks gesturing its ok. Then suddenly Geet felt a blow on her back & she spitted out the milk she was drinking. she turned angrily & said, "Rish (Rishab) pagal hai kya tu! Dekh sara milk gir gaya."
"Oye, pagal tu hai & btw jaldi kar hum late ho rahe hain"
saying so he just dragged Geet out with him. Mohinder cudn't do much but just smiled at his children.



Rishab's Bike




Rishab quickly started his bike & both of them made their way for their school wid Geet cribbing for everything. Rishab stopped at a signal & Geet said, "oye ab bike kyu rok di? Ab late nahi ho raha? Mujhe nashta bhi nahi karne diya."😡
"Geet, signal hai mujhe koi shauk nahi hai bina wajah beech sadak rukne ka"
"Subah-2 kaun dekhta hai tu nikaal lena aur waise bhi humne helmet toh pehen he rakhe hain"😉
Rishab was surprised😲 that his half mad sister is asking him to break the signal. "Geet, tu pagal ho gayi hia kya? Ek toh late hone ki wajah se waise he main bike laya hoon when I don't possess license & on top off that tu mujhe signal break karne ko keh rahi hai. Agar pakde gaye naa toh mera baap nahi dene wala hamari bail."😡
"Oye baap nahi Papa. And tera toh pata nahi par meri toh woh zarur denge."😆
said Geet giggling. Rishab shook his head in disbelief that his sis is just impossible. Meanwhile , another bike stopped at their right & some similar discussion.
"Vish, tere chakkar mein late ho & ab yeh signal prob. Delhi mein yehi prob hai chalne se pehle rukne ke signal mil jate hain."😡
"Arre sorry bola naa yaar! Gussa mat kar. Tujhe bataya na woh raat ko woh wali movie dekhne mein late ho gaya."😉
"Sudhar ja sale, kuch toh sharm kar."😡
"Oye tu sadhu hai par main nahi, samjha"😆
Maan gave him a stern look🤢 & drove away as signal turned green. All four Maan, Geet, Rishab & Vishrut finally managed to reach their school just on time.






Pre-cap: School




So, friends this was the 1st update of this FF & I hope u all liked it. Now, do me a favor by hitting the "Like" button & posting ur comments. Will be back with another update soon till then keep showering ur love on me.😊 And anybody who wants PM just add me to ur buddy list & I will PM u.Love you all.🤗
Edited by anky_s - 12 years ago

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