Padosi:maan geet ff/pt 17-pg 20,june 4

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 1 maan singh khurana is 16yrs old now,he is the only son of the great buisness man Dev singh khurana and radhika khurana.he is the heart of khurana family.they leaves in Delhi.Maan is now studing in class 11th science stream.he passed his 10th with 95%.
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PART1 & PART2-page1

PART3-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=2

PART4-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=3

PART5-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=4

PART6-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=6

PART7-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=7

PART8-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=8

PART9-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=10

PART10-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=11 & http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=12
PART11-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=12
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PART 12-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=13

PART 13,PART 14-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&PID=83745625&#83745625

PART 15,PART 16-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&PID=84342079&#84342079
PART-17-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2761698&TPN=20

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2
Today beside his home Khurana mansion new neibours are coming .the mansion beside them is of Handa's ,today there is grihapravesh cermony they are also invited there.handa's started to build this mansion a year back during that period mohinder uncle(MR.MOHINDER HANDA) use to visit here to visit dadi .dadi knows uncle frm long ago because he is the son of her best freind rano who is now no more.during that period papa and uncle become close.
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dev and dadi is sitting in sofa taking morning tea.radhika is serving them.
Dadi:bahu hamare pota poti kaha hai dikhai nahi de rahe,jaldi aane ko kahiye hum late ho jayenge.

Radhika:ji maaji

Radika:maan jaldi karo ,tere uncle ne itne pyar se bulaya hai.agar hum late ho gaye unhe acha nahi lagega.

Maan:maa bas do min mein aa raha hoon.

Maan came out of his room and is wearing a black sherwani in which he is looking breathtaking. dev is wearing a cream color shervani and radika a red color sari in which both are looking awesome.

Maan: papa mein chahe kitni bi koshish kar loon lekin apse handsome kabhi nahi lagta(he said this making a cute face)

dev:lekin aapko dekh kar mein hamesha jealous feel karta hoon.kyunki aapke aate hi aapki maa ki nazar mujh se hatkar aap pe hi tiki rahti hai.

Radhika:meri nazar aapse hatna swabhavik hi hai,akir maan itna handsome jo lagta hai. Kyun maa mein sach keh rahi hoon na.(after hearing this maan had a gread smile on his face)

dadi:tum log ab mujhe apni nok jok mein shamil mat karna,mein aise hi teek hoon

maan:maa choti kaha hai tyaar hui ki nahi.

Radhika:main toh use bulana hi bool gayi,maan jao use jaldi se aane ko kaho.

Maan:choti wow tum kitni pyari lag rahi ho.

(a girl was standing in front of maan wearing pink blouse and choli with the duppata in her neck ,annie maan's sister)
maan:choti aaj tum ekdum princess lag rahi ho.

annie:bhaiya aap bi kisi prince charming se kam nahi lag rahe
maan bent to adjust his sisters mangtika which was falling.as he finished adjusting she gently placed a kiss on her bhaiya's chin

annie: thankyou bhaiya

maan:ab jaldi chal nahi toh maa papa naraz ho jayenge.

Annei:okay bhaiya chaliye.

They went downstairs

dev:aaj toh choti ekdam pari lag rahi.

Dadi:main in dono ko kala tika laga deti hoon taki hamare banchon par koi buri nazar na lage
and she placed kalatika behind the ears of both maan and annie.

Dadi:challo chalte hain

precap: they reached handa haweli.

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats on the new ff
sounds good and interesting too
update next part soon
will be waiting

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update...
really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr d lovely update...
waiting fr nxt prt...
continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago

congarts on ur ff dear...

nice one...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 3
They reached Handa Mansion,whole mansion was decorated colorfully as there was a festival.they were amazed by the atmosphere.All the people were busy,servants were running here and there in service of guests.in btw these crowd mohinder pointed out them and came near the door to welcome them.
Mohinder :aaye darwaje pe kyun kade hai.
Mohinder took them inside and started to introduce with his family.
A handsome guy was standing and talking to some one mohinder went to him and said some thing to him.after that he left the place in search of someone and mohinder came back.
Maan was looking the architecture of mansion and he was impressed.
An old man wearing turban came stand near mohinder uncle.suddenly dadi said:Bhaisaab aap kaise hai.
Darji:uparwale ke kripa se teek hai.
Maan noticed the handsome looking guy came back with a lady and a girl.the girl was wearing a white churidar looking like an angel and in name of make-up only wearing lip gloss and kohl.Maan thought he have seen many girl but something is there different in this girl ,may be her simplicity and the innosence in her brown beautiful eyes.
Darji: bhabi aap log yanha
mohi:bauji ye mera surprise tha aap ke liye,ye hamare padose main rahte hai.
Darji: wah! Isse achi kya kabar ho sakti ,mein jab bhi mein hoshiyarpur se aunga aap se mil paunga.
Bhabi ye hamara dev hai na kitna bada hogaya hai.in 20 saal mein kitna kuch badal gaya hai.
Dadi:aare bhai saab ye dev nahi maan hai ,dev ka beta.(all of them were laughing)
Darji: kya dev ka beta .(he was amused by looking maan)
dev:darji mein yaha hoon(he touched darji's feet)
darji:tum itna bade ho gaye ho ab to tera beta tumara utna ho gaya hai .
As darji looked towards radhika, dadima introduced her.
Dadi:ye hamari bahu hai radhika aur ye hamari poti anwesha.
Radhika touched his feet for blessings and he blessed her .
Darji: are maine toh aap logon ko kisi se nahi milaya.chaliye hum milate hai apko hamare parivar se.
Darji looking towards the lady ye hamari bahu hai shalini ,ye brij hai hamara pota,aur ye hamari pyari poti hai geet.(maan was staring geet when they were introducing and he found her smiling when they took her name,maan found her smile beautiful)
Shalini took blessings of dadima.
Dev:brij bete tum ab kya kar rahe ho.
Brij:ji uncle maine abhi buiseness management main graduation kiya hai aur mein aage post graduation karunga.
Dev:aur geet beta tum
geet: main 11th class mein hoon.
Annie:bhaiya be toh 11th mein hai.(geet looked at maan,who was already looking at her and their eye met for first time.both of them were felt shy. and looked here and there.
Dev:kaunse stream main
geet:science
mohinder: geet ka admission hum DPS mein kara rahe hain.usne selection test pass kar liya hai.
Part4-maan and geet in same class

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 4
After the function they returned to khurana mansion,dadi and radika already become freinds with shalini.Annie started to call geet di ,she was happy as she got a sister in geet.Maan and Brij also were impressed with each other.after two days in school maan was sitting in his class for his class teacher cum chemistry teacher Mishra sir to enter the class.
Mirhra sir entered the class ,all the student wished him Gd morning .at that moment maan noticed geet standing beside sir,maan was little bit suprised he was knowing that geet is getting admitted in DPS but he never thought she will be in same section as there is 3 section for science and he was in the best section among the 3 section,i.e.11th A .mishra sir introduced geet to the class.
Mishra sir:
Hello students, this geet handa ur new classmate,she is from hoshiyarpur and is the best student of the HPS.Lets welcome her to our class.Geet go and sit there in the third desk beside pari.

geet:Thankyou sir.
geet went and sit there beside pari ,she got to sit beside window.while going to sit she saw maan staring at her ,she smiled and he replied with smile.
Geet(thinks):His smile is so cute
geet took notes from pari which she have to complete,maan use to look at her in between when he confirmed she is confortable he relaxed.
While geet noticed that maan is the best student of the class.all teachers have great expectation from him.his freinds admired him.he was very close to guy named adi and samrat .
During lunch break all the student introduced themself to geet.all boys were trying to make a place in geet's heart.a guy who's name was rajvir came and introduced himself to geet,he was handsome and geet found him very frank,she was kind of impressed with him.But maan didn't like his closeness with Geet.Maan very well know the charecter of rajvir he used to impress girl and hummilate them later.
The days started passing maan and geet maintained distance b/w them due to shyness .but use to know every thing regarding each other.they use to smile at each other,they use to talk but very less and the topic of conversation always use to be regarding their family or studies.their day use to start with each other as their room was just opposite to each other and the distance b/w their balcony was less than 10m.and before going to sleep they use to check the lights of each other's room .days passed both family become very close.dev,radika, dadi liked geet very much becoz of her bubly nature.
While mohinder,darji,shalini loved maan due to his maturity.brij and maan become very close .
Precap-picnic,maan worried for geet.

Edited by Fandeep - 12 years ago