The lady with wet hair :Maaneet OS last part - Page 4

awesome emotional OS yar loved it a lot

Wow!! an amazing os!!! felt bad for ram but it was so sweet of him to forget his love for geet and let her go to his brother!!! an amazing ending!! and the song just fits for maaneet!!! an amazing job!! keep them coming!!!

amazing story
loved it
purity of love...

amazing os...

i loved the concept though i would have loved it if you had made it a SS...with some more details...

The lady with wet hair Part 2

Since some of my readers want Maan to be cured i am writing one more part.

After some days...
Geet came back after shopping.She bought medicines for Maan.
Ram welcomed her.
"Geet!More than your medicines your love worked positively on Maan.Yes,your love is his real medicine.First your love made him smile.He became mentally strong.Now he is physically alright".
The last sentence struck her ears.
"What did you say Ram?"
"Yes Geet.What you heard is correct.Maan is alright now.He stood up Geet.The doctor said it's a miracle.Very soon he will be able to walk normally".
Geet was surprised.She became very emotional.
"Maan is ok now?"
"Yes Geet.Your Maan is waiting for you.Go inside".
Geet had no patience.She wanted to see him standing up.She ran inside.
She saw Maan standing and looking at her.
She became so happy that she became emotional.
"Maan!"

He extended his hands to call her to come towards him.
She ran towards him.
"Maan!"

Slowly he carassed her face.
She felt nice as first time she is being touched by him with his hands.

"I am cured because of your love and prayers",Maan spoke emotionally.
She smiled emotionally.
She said,"No.It's our love which opened God's eyes.That's why you are able to stand like this now".
He smiled.
She carassed his face.

They shared a beautiful eye lock.
Their heart beat...
'Mahi...Mahi...'
The end
"Geet...after i stood up the first thing i did is..."
He looked around.
She also looked around.She was surprised to see the room decorated with flowers.
"Maan!You did this for me?"
"Yes Geet.You taught me to enjoy the beauty of flowers.So i am presenting flowers to you".
She blushed.

But suddenly her face became dull.
"Maan...but what you did was not right".
"Why?You did'nt like these flowers?"
"Not because of that.Instead of taking rest you exerted too much".
"He held her close to him.
"Everything is for you my darling.I will do anything for you".
They both smiled at each other.

She held him tightly and helped him to walk towards the room.

The end

awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

wowww awesome 2nd part yar

awesome dear...
loved it...
wow.. maan is cured... n flowers r awesome...