The lady with wet hair :Maaneet OS last part

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The lady with wet hair

Guys...i enjoyed a lot writing this os.plz give long comments...

Ram was shattered when his twin brother Maan met with an accident.He was even more upset when Maan got paralysed after the accident.He tried to arrange a home nurse for Maan.
Finally the home nurse landed.
It was a rainy morning.She was wet.Ram was struck by her beauty.Walking in the rain in the white salwar kameez made her look like a fairy.He felt like wiping the rain drops on her face.
"Hi...you had called our agency for a home nurse.Right?I am the home nurse.My name is Geet".
"Hi...you are welcome.I am Ram.I called you to look after my brother Maan".
"Can i meet him?"
She asked.
"Sure".
Ram took her to Maan's room.
Geet could not believe her eyes.
"He looks like you Ram Sir".
Maan and Ram giggled.
"Maan is my twin brother",he replied.
Geet was surprised.
"Maan...this is your home nurse Geet".He introduced Geet to him.
Geet smiled at him.Ram noticed her sweet dimples.
Maan simply smiled at Geet.
Geet noticed Maan shivering.
"You feel cold.Right?"
Geet covered Maan with the blanket.
"Now you will feel better.I will make hot tea for you".
Geet went to the kitchen and made hot tea for Maan.
Maan took a sip.
"Very nice tea".
Geet smiled.
Ram said,"You are taking care of my brother.I did'nt expect this much on the first day itself.Feel nice.But you are forgetting to take care of yourself.You are wet.You will catch cold.You will fall sick.Dry your hair.Change your clothes".
"Yes Geet.."Maan also agreed with Ram.
"I am used to walking in the rain.So i don't fall sick that easily.Anyways i will freshen up and come".
Geet took bath.She tried to dry her hair.But it was not completely dry.So she left her hair open.Seeing her coming out of the room with her long hair open Ram kept looking at her.He enjoyed her appearance.She saw him watching her.

She felt uncomfortable.

But seeing him smiling at her she smiled slightly.


Another day...
Maan was looking sad.
"Why are you gloomy?"
Geet asked him.
"How can i be happy?I lost everything".
"You are wrong.You are not able to walk.But you have not lost your eye sight.You can enjoy the beauty of nature.You can hear.You can listen to the beautiful voice of birds.For that you need to go out".
"How can i go out?I can't walk".
"Don't worry.I will help you to go out".
"How?"Maan could not guess what Geet was going to do.
Geet took him to the garden in a wheel chair.
Maan felt nice seeing the green plants and beautiful flowers.He listened to birds chirping.He found it musical.
"How do you feel now?"Geet asked him.
"I feel nice.You are right.I have not lost everything.My life is not dry yet.I can still enjoy my life".
Geet smiled.
Ram watched it with a smile.
"I will show you one more thing".
Geet ran inside.
Ram came to the garden.Both Ram and Maan were curious to see what Geet brings.
Geet brought soap water and made bubbles.
Both Maan and Ram enjoyed the sight of bubbles.
Maan smiled opening his heart.
"Thank you so much Geet.Now i feel i am the most happiest man in this world".
Geet and Ram became happy.

Geet fed him food with her hand.Ram felt happy seeing his brother looked after well by Geet.

Another day...
Geet was drying her hair.Ram felt nice seeing her do that.

"I never knew that wet hair can make a lady so beautiful".
He went towards her.
"Geet...thank you so much for making my brother smile again".
She smiled.

"My brother was my life after our parents' death.By making my brother happy you made me happy.by that you made me fall in love with you".
Geet was shocked.

She asked herself silently,"Hey God!Why are you testing me like this?"

"I am serious.Will you marry me?"He proposed to her.
Geet could not answer soon.
Slowly she moved her lips.
"You are perfect.But i don't know destiny's decision is different.That's why i fell in love with another person".
Ram was shocked.
"Who is he?"
"The one who has your face.The one who is not healthy and handsome like you".
Geet's words made Ram's eyes wet.
"I am happy that you did the right thing.You yourself said that Maan is not healthy and handsome like me,still you prefer him to me.That proves that your love is true.Maan was healthier than me..more handsome than me.It was destiny which made him like this.But everything happens for good.That's why he got someone like you who loves him sincerely".
"But he does'nt know that i love him".
"You should confess your love to Maan.It will make him more happy".
She smiled.

After a week...
Geet went towards Maan.Her wet hair made him get attracted towards her.
He thought,
"Geet looks so beautiful with wet hair".
But he controlled himself as he felt that a paralysed man like him does not suit a beautiful lady like Geet.
"Maan...i want to tell you something".
"Tell Geet".
"I think..i think i am in love with you".
He was shocked.
"Geet!Are you out of senses?Do you know what you are saying?"
"Yes.I know..I don't know when and how i started feeling for you".

"Then you marry Ram.He just looks like me.He is healthy also.Better for you".
Geet felt upset hearing what he said.
"I did not fall in love with you seeing your face Maan Sir.Then how can i marry Ram sir?I don't know what made me fall for you.But i can never love anyone else".
Her tear drops fell on his hand.
He became very emotional.
"Geet!But don't you know that you can't have a normal married life with me.I can't give you anything which a normal husband gives his wife".
"Marriage is not only about physical closeness.It's about love.I love you.If you can love me you please marry me.Otherwise i will leave this house.I can't stay you anymore".
Maan felt that his heart was torn.
"No Geet.Please don't go away.I can't live without you.When i felt that my life was equal to death you made think differently.You changed my outlook towards life.I felt that you were my life.But if you leave me i will die".
Geet burst into tears.She sit close to him holding his hands.
"Maan Sir!"
Slowly he smiled.
"I love you Geet.Will you marry me?"

She became really emotional.
She smiled nodding her head.
Ram watched this with a smile.
Maan and Geet shared a lovely eye lock.Their eyes had to say something to each other.
"

Jung Lyrics
Song :
Film : Jung (2000)
Singer : Kumar Sanu, Alka Yagnik
Music : Anu Malik
Lyrics : Sameer




"mere binaa tum
o rahoge
naa naa
jiyoge
naa naa
karoge kyaa
mar jaa_e.nge mar jaa_e.nge
mere binaa tum ...

dekhaa thaa tumhe.n to jabase
maa.ngaa thaa tumhe.n hii rab se
ho yuu.n aa.Nkho.n aa.Nkho.n me.n ye kyaa ho gayaa
thaa dil abhii yahaa.n kahaa.n kho gayaa
ye kyaa ho gayaa ye kab ho gayaa
ye honaa hii thaa ye ab ho gayaa
mere binaa tum ...

tumane to churaayaa hai mujhe
palako.n me.n chhupaayaa hai mujhe
haa.n fasaanaa jo sunaa kahaanii ban ga_ii
diivaane se milii diivaanii ban ga_ii
ye lii hai kasam
ye dii hai kasam
judaa_ii kabhii
sahe.nge na ham
mere binaa tum ..."{Jung}.


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tamanna1391 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it awsem just love it so sweet innocent and pure

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great os
love the selfless love of geet
lovely os dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
so a lady with wet hair stole both maan's hearts..
superb..
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sweet OS... Me smiled while readin dis... 😊

The name of the OS ws perfect...

Her wet hair did magical effect on both men... But alas! Love just happens...

I rly liked d concept.. :)
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I smiled...
so innocent...and cute...
loved the feelings...
do write more...
and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really beautiful...
im speechless...
pyar shayad isiko kehte hai...pyar woh ehsaas hai jo zabardasti ei kiya jata ...jo ho jata hai...aur yeh ehsaas kab kiske liye jagega kisiko nehi pata...pyar physically nazdikiya nehi hota hai...its d bond b/w d two souls...really happy fr maan n geet...soulmates shayad issehi kehte hai...saccha pyar mahsoos karna padta hai...
lovely one...i loved it...
thank u fr d pm . also fr dis lovely os...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVELY OS DEAR... SMARTLY WRITTEN...

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NICE PART... I LOVED IT... CAN U GIVE US A EPILOGUE... SOMETHING LIKE MAAN WAS CURED... AS A GIFT FOR GEET'S TRUE LOVE...
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Awesme update dear..
I really lovd the way geet said to ram that she loves the same face who is nt healthy bt handsme like hm...
Sorry dear my like buttn is nt working

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