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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 51


Daddi : It means whoever kidnapped Geet that person is well aware of our every moment…

Addi: I think so Daddi Maa…becoz aaj morning main he main Greater Kailash main jo godown hai..waha se visit kar k aaya hu...wo to ho nahi sakta….now two r left.We hav to handle thing with care…We should inform Maan Sir first.

Daddi Maa: But Addi how ?…Maan ka patta hai na aapko unko ek dam batta diya to wahan sochay samjhe binna challe jaa-a-gay…it ll really risky for Maan n Geet both…we should talk to him face to face (she was about to cry)

Rano: Addi tum Maan ko phone lagayo…Manji theek keh rahi hai…pusho unse wo kahan hai (she held Daddi Maa from shoulder n consoled her)

Addi : Ji Chachi Ji. (he dialed saying this)

Addi called Maan…He had Deepak's phone.

Addi: Sir where r u …? (he said in shivering voice)

Maan: Kya hua Addi...Geet ka kush pata challa.? (without answering his question ..He put question about Geet)

Addi: Per Sir where r u …tell me? (He repeated)

Maan: Addi I m near to Faridabad highway where some one saw Geet according to police information

Addi: Sir aap wahi rukiye main aata hu…?

Maan: Per hua kya..? (he shouted)

Addi: Wahi aa kar batata hu…plz Sir wait ..

Maan: okey jaldi karo…police to apna kaam karegi tab karegi..but I hav to do my work

Addi cut phone n told ladies where he was.

Addi: Daddi Maa yeh MMS main Maan Sir ko wahi deikha dunga…jab tak main wahan nahi pahunch jatta..kisi ko hamare dusre gowdown ko check karna hoga but with care…(Addi's mind really working much fast )

Daddi: Aap to jaa rahe hai to…Dev ko kahte hai…(she gave this idea)

Addi: Bahut derr ho jaa-a-gi…Dev Sir ko explain karne main aur unke wahan jaane main…I think Nakul or Deepak should go…(he corrected Daddi)

He called both and as always Nakul came in front.Becoz Deepak couldn't drive.So Nakul left.

Rano: Addi main bhi chalti hu..(Rano got up )

Daddi: Per Rano aap wahan kya karogi..

Rano: Nahi Manji mera jaana jaroori hai…Geet aur bachchy k sath Maan ki jaan bhi daave per hai..unko bahut samjhdaari se samjhna hoga…(she was too upset)

Addi: Nahi Chachi ji aap nahi…main akela he jatta hu aur main handle kar lunga..

Daddi: Jaane dejiye Addi ko…Maan Addi per jitna marji chilla le (to shout)…inko daant le (to scold) per yeh bhi sach hai k humare aur Geet k ilawaa agar Maan ko koi samjh sakta hai to wo Addi hai…(she was totally rite)

Rano: Per Manji

Daddi: Rano agar Maan apko dekhey gay na to wo aur bhi tension main aa sakte hai….kyonki unko pata hai Geet k binna apki kya haalat hogi yahi soch kar wo aur bhi tense ho sakte hai..

Rano: Theek hai…Manji….aur Addi betay agar koi bhi problem hue to plz jaldi phone kar lena.(she said to Addi with heavy heart)

Near High Way.

Maan was waiting alone for Addi.Even He was in much pain due to extra load /pressure on his lower part after about one year.But this pain was nothing in front of his only aim Geet.

Maan ran with all courage n force he had toward Addi's car.

Maan: Kitni der lagga de tumne (holding door of car he said)

Addi: Maan Sir pehle aap beith jaa-ea..(he held his shoulders)

Maan: Addi tum mujhe yahan beith-nay k liye keh rahe ho…mere pass itna bhi time nahi hai…batayo kya baat hai jo tumne mujhe yahan rukne ko kaha.(he shouted)

Addi: ji Maan Sir dekhiye(without waisting time he showed MMS loaded in his own phone from Daddi's phone)

Adi explained every thing to him.He was shocked.

Maan: Meri property k liye meri Geet ko kidnap kar liya..insaan hai k jaanwar yeh bhi nahi dekha wo kis haalat main hai..Aur meri Geet k saamne meri property ki koi keemat nahi...Agar wo property chahte hai I ll giv..per ek baar Geet mil jaaye to unka wo hashar karuga jo unhone socha na hoga...Meri Geet k ek ek aasu (tear) or shoti se shoti chot(wound) ka jawaab dena hoga (Maan was in tears but he had true determination to get his Lov back again)

Addi: Per Sir iska bhi kya patta wo Geet ko wapis aane de (he was too much upset lookin at Maan)

Maan: Daadi Maa se pusho papers bheje unhone ja nahi ?

Addi called Daddi to know about papers Kidnappers were gonna to send. But till now they hadn't sent .

Addi :Sir aab kya karre ?

Maan:I hav to go...(he moved toward his car)

Addi: But Maan Sir alone...(he ran behind him)

Maan stopped

Maan: Addi m gonna check godown

Addi: But Sir wahan aise jaane main khatra hai...apko he nahi ...Geet ko ..even she is at much risk

Maan: Addi I don care about me..But Geet..I know it is not good for Geet's safety to go there as such.But I know what to do (he had planned what to do )

Addi: What Sir..? (placing his spects back he said )

Maan:main wahan jatta hu jahan humme shakk hai Geet k hone ki..tum ghar jaayo...aur wait karo kab papers aate hai...the place they hav given us to hand over papers..wahan per jaane main ghar se aur godown s almost same time lagta hai. (he said placing hands on waist)

Addi: Ji Sir wo to hai...

Maan: agar mujhe Geet wahan na milli to tum wo papers le kar aa jaana ...I ll reach there from godown..if I will hav to sigh papers.

Addi: Sir papers wali baat to theek hai...per godown main aap akele kaise handle karogay...agar Geet hue wahan to kaise aap usko..laa-a-gay...un logon k beech se..wo normal hoti to theek tha..but she is pregnant at about full term..aap maane ja na maane aap bhi abhi puri tarah se theek nahi..3-3 jaano ko khatra hai...(he was saying rite thing)

Maan: Gabrayo mat Addi ...main apni Geet aur bachchay ko le kar aau-ga...wo bhi theek thaak...main wahan ja raha hu..tum Dev aur police ko inform kar do...wo hamare godown se kush duri per wait karre..jaise he mujhe Geet milti hai...main Dev ko inform karuga..aur wo by foot wahan pahunch jaaye...agar Geet wahan milli to theek hai...other wise papers le kar tum unki batayi jagah per pahunch jaana...

Saying this Maan left place..Addi informed Dev n police..n they were ready to take action...

At KC Godown

Pammi's gunda : Madam hamare Admi lawyer se papers le kar nikal gaya hai ..bas currier se papers KM pahunch jaa-a-gay with in hour.

Pammi: Itna derr.(shouted)

Gunda: Madam currier main time to lag he jaata hai khud to jaa nahi sakte...

Pammi : Theek hai jo karna hai jaldi karo..isko kush nahi hona chahea... jaab tak kaam nahi ho jaata...iska kya karna hai baad main soch-tay hai..isne mujhe dekh liya hai...aur sabh bata bhi sakti hai...jab tak puri formalities puri nahi ho jaati isko yahi rakhna hoga...agar isse de diya to wo kutte ki tarah hamare pishe pad jaaye-gay.Aur formalities purre hone tak iske aise he MMS banna kar beh-tay rahegay so that we can control Khuraanas...jis din kaam ho jaayega...iska kaam bhi kar dengay aur main sadaa k liye India chod kar chali jaa-ugi..Iska kya hai iska apna privaar jaise isko bhul beitha hai...Maan aur Khuraanas bhi bhul jaa-a-gay..(she laughed slapping Geet)

Gunda: Per Madam isko to bachcha honne walla hai...agar beech main he kush ho gaya..

Pammi: Kush nahi honna chahea isko ..Khana de do isko per utna he jisse yeh jinda reh sakke...(left)


Gonna update next after some time .Plz read n comment before I pm ...I ll complete it..n if u find before getting pm plz giv ur views...with ur Juttas n Chapples 😆


Lov


Jass😭


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Posted: 13 years ago
great update,...
waiting so long for maaneet's reunion...
update soon...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update,...waiting so long for maaneet's reunion..
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
hope maan reaches there soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pammi is really a dangerously cruel women...
just hope maan reaches there soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part dear...😃

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 52



Geet was lik semi conscious but she had jst one aim to secure Maan's child n his property for which she had done every thing.But how ? Her first target was to run away from here.She had to wait for right time.

There was only one Gunda there..the day was going off.She was locked in that godown room.When gunda gav her food he untied her hands.But her legs were tightly tied.He left room.

Geet tried to untie her legs but failed.Becoz of her grown belly she couldn't bent.But she saw a cutter to b used in construction that was lil bit away from her.She with ful force started to slide her chair backward n every back step she took it hurt her more n more..even her feet were in blood when some rusty nails (clinchers) prickled her bare feet

After many attepts she became successful to cut her ropes n in this attempt her hands n legs had cut from places.She was in much pain but jst one n only thing in mind to run away.Geet hided herself in such manner when some one would open door that person couldn't find her in front.N she held broken hammer in her hand from that waste material now that was in use by Geet to rescue herself

When man opened door.Geet hit him from behind n he fell on floor.She took his phone n gun in hurry n left room with sour bloody feet.

On the other hand Maan had reached place..he left his car at a distance from godown n took short cut with bare feet.bearing throwns he was moving forward hiding himself behind shrubs n trees.

Maan noticed two cars there outside godown…n even a suspected persons.

Maan : Dev aa jayo…but on feet (Maan called Dev with police) But on back door of godown u knew that.

Even Maan called Addi.

Geet was feeling giddy in same manner she masseged Addi

Geet: Addi Sir Pammi ne puraane godown..(before she could write more... one gunda detected her.She pressed okey before she could write more at least Addi could estimate things).

She threw away phone so that they couldn't find to whom she pmed.

Gunda: ek rukk ja…warna tera kaam yahin kar dunga.(He shouted..But Geet showed him gun n he stopped.)

Before Geet could turn Pammi came running n pushed Geet from back n her belly hit against wall

Geet: Maan..mera bachcha (voice was about to came out from her mouth..)

She was in very bad condition.In short time many things had happened.Geet she was in blood already but with this push…she started to bleed from inside.But she not left gun

Addi was at home when he got incomplete message.

Addi : Daddi Maa yeh message aaya mere phone per..Addi Sir Pammi ne puraane godown..

Daddi: Iska matlab

Addi: Iska matlab Pammi ne Geet ka kidnap kiya hai..aur mera estimate theek tha she is in godown.mujhe jaana hoga ..aap Maan Sir ko phone kijiye to deal with care (he ran )

On the other hand Maan was waiting for police n Dev when he came to know about Pammi.

Inside godown

Pammi held Geet from hair n slapped her many times.Geet controlled herself n showed gun to Pammi n then that gunda n signaled them to move one side .n in that condition she fired a bullet which Maan heard

Maan : Geet (sudden her name came in his mind when he heard bullet )

Police was coming but Maan entered climbing back gate n entered from back side.But Geet she left place from front side

He was searching every where... She was at no place...But Maan found foot prints due to blood n estimated that might b Geet's... He moved in that direction When he heard a conversation

Pammi:Pakdo usse wo bhag na jaaye... wo bhag gayi to hum jail main hongay(shouted)

Gunda:Madam ji uske pass gun hai

Pammi:to kya wo is halat main hai...gun chala sakke khoon se to naha-e(wet) hue hai uska bacha to lagta gaya per wo bahut sakhaat (much hard) jaan hai bacha challa bhi gaya... khud bach gayi to hum pakde jaa-a-gy... before that capture her .

Gunda left n Pammi was stunned to find Maan in front of him

Pammi: Maan tum yahan (stunned)

Maan: ha main tumne kya socha main nahi aa-u ga..tuhari bat sun le hai maine tumko to baad main bhi dekh lunga per meri patni aur bachay ko kush ho gaya to tumhara wo hasher hoga tum jaan nahi sakti (he grabbed her from neck)

Maan hit Pammi at wall.. slapped her many times But the gunda who was hit by Geet came from behind n hit him on back.Before things became more worse police came Pammi was much more shocked to find Dev

Pammi: Dev mujhe pata tha tum aa-o-gahy apni maa k liye dekho maan ne mera kya haal kiya (she showed her fore head where she was hit against wall )

Dev:mujhe na kush kehna hai na sunna..SSP sir le jaa-ea isko

Maan's head from back was hit with full blow so he was in much pain

Dev : Bro aap theek to hai..(he held him from back)

Maan : Ha Dev..mere pass time nahi hai..inse pata challa..she was beelding..Geet aur hamare bachchay ki jaan ko khtra hai…wo yahan se bhag to gayi per uske pishe Pammi ka gunda hai

Dev:Bro chaliye hum Geet ko dhundtay ha

Dev Maan n other police staff started to find Geet when Addi joined them.

Addi found blood sports outside godown n he showed to Maan .from where he started to follow same direction.

Maan was continuously calling her name but she was no where..He grabbed gunda near main road but Geet was not with him .After beating him enough he was saying same he didn't know where Geet was.But before running away he stabbed

Hunt for Geet was on emergency basis

Addi :Maan Sir (he shouted)

Maan:Addi meri Geet …wo museebat main hai aur main kush nahi kar sakta…Meri Geet ..aur hamare bachcha ki jaan khatre main hai

Addi :Maan Sir aap k itna blood nikal raha hai

Maan:Addi don waste time n search Geet

N both moved in opposite direction but they could move more ahead Maan shouted

Maan :Addi Geet

Maan found Geet totally wet in blood laying unconscious in middle of road before a truck could come near to her Maan cradled Geet in his lap

Maan: Geet ankhay khollo

But no answer without wasting time Maan started to run asking Addi to bring car .n within minutes SSP came to them with jeep n they left for near by hospital.Both were in bad condition wet with blood of each other but Maan was not letting himself unconscious.He was now pushing his all matters / pain behind for her


Hop u ll lik pla comment n hit.if some thing u wanna point out plz tell me with positive manner.

thanx buddies

Lov

Jass

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pammi Grrr she is such a beep beep beep
I hope Maan reaches on time and saves Geet and then takes care of this Pammi in his own way

Ok read the next part
very well written
Omg I hope Geet , Baby and Maan is fine 😭
Continue soon
Edited by krndr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
oh no both are bleeding n in so danger
happy that pammi is arrested
but hope geet the baby n maan are not in danger
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful part...
thank God !!! maan and dev reached there on time...
hope baby and geet are safe...
waiting to know the next...

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