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loved the concept !! good CS. Thumbs up👍🏼
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part-12



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It was her wedding day, very much awaited day of her life, her wedding with her prince charming, her wedding with her knight in the shining armor, but where is her happiness, where is that bloom in her eyes, where is that shining spark which used to attract others in just a single glimpse, well that was all belongs to that bubbly geet, that was belong to a geet who just to adore her Maan, who was always ready to kill herself for him, but ala that geet died, died that day only when her own love betrayed her, she died that day only when her family separated her from them, she died that day only when her life seems on the verge of breaking down and she was standing numb, watching all her life was being ruined by others, all were together, all were planned by them to kill her,

Maan ek baar maang kart oh dekhtey, hastey hastey me jaan de deti, lekin yeh kaisi zindaghi di, jeetey ji Maar diya, yeh zindaghi toh Maut se bhi zyada darawani hai, aapka saath maanga tha lekin apni self respect ko kho kar nahi Maan, she looked at him, he was sitting beside her completing all the rituals carefully, concentrating on the wedding costumes and trying to avoid the eye contact as much as possible...

She was sitting idle, her mind was blank, only one thing was running in her mind... Only one cruel voice which changed her life drastically...

Flashback

Geet tumhein Maan se shaadi karni hoghi warna iss ghar ko chhodna hogha...

Maan se shaadi karwa kar aap waise bhi mujhe iss ghar se nikaal rahey hai papa...

Lekin saath me wapas aaney ka darwaza khol kar geet, aur agar tum ne mana kiya toh na iss ghar se tumhara koi ta'aluq rahegha aur na hi hum se koi rishta...

Papa nahi please, rather you kill me than saying this...

She said in disgust...she broke down, sat on the floor, her knees were hurting...knees digging on the floor, No one not a single soul came ahead, all were standing around her, as if it was some movie not a real life...

As if it was fiction and not a fact, damn it was her life, her own life but people made it public...

Yup that was true, that was indeed true, Jab hum kamzor padhtey hai, apne bhi saath nahi dete, even her own family was ready to disown her, even her family ready to apart her from their life...

Her Mother was standing as usual shedding tears...

Prem and Brij with papaji standing with clutched fist and gritted teeth all were trying to control their anger, Anjali was standing their with sympathetic look in her eyes for her, what she wanted to see for her in her love ones eyes, just a truck of love, care and so much proud and what she is finding right away, only hatred, disgust, pain and anger...

Flashback ends 😭

She closed her eyes tightly and unknowingly she tightened her grip on his hand, he looked at her and rubbed her back, he wanted her to come out of her reverie soon, he cant see her in so much pain, in so much mental trauma, No he cant,

He was damn sure she misunderstood him, he was very well aware why he did marriage with her, he know very well what will be the consequences of it...

Geet will never accept this marriage, she will hate him for this, she wanna kill him for this, she will surely in so much pain, be he dnt have any other option, whatever was circumstances at that time, those things forced him to take such decision...

He loved her, insanely; undoubtedly she was the first who came like a soft breeze in his life, who made his loveless life full of blossoming flower of love...

They were taking woving each other...

Promise 1

Maan: I will live all my life for you...

Geet: I will make your life hell...

Promise 2

Maan: I will never ever leave you...

Geet: I will never ever let you go, It will be my revenge...

Promise 3

Maan: I will always protect you...

Geet: I will never let you stay in peace...

Promise 4

Maan: I will always be with your side, beside you...

Geet: I will always against you, No matter who is wrong or right

Promise 5

Maan: I will protect our children

Geet: They will be either yours or mine they can't be ours...

Promise 6

Maan: your family is mine and mine is yours forever and ever...

Geet: I am all alone left in this world; I neither have family nor frnd nor love no one...

Promise 7

Maan: I will always love you, Insanely, crazily, immensely, beyond any imagination, beyond any limits...

Geet: I will hate you from bottom of my heart, Beyond the point of insanity, limitless hate, mine hate will be more effective than yours, It will change your life , and its my promise, Geet ka wada hai, How much I was crazy in the love, I will much more extreme in my hate , I swear...


precape: 😡

Previous: part-11

Next: part-13

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Phew Updated...

So how many are still in shock heheheh

God I know its really small part but it was importamt to create a bit suspense and curiosity

Okhh will do Pms in evening...

Till that time those who are reading feel free to curse me to stopping at this point


Edited by Angelic_analyst - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yappp me first

Oye devil😡😡😡
ye kya kiya tune???
mare sare excitement pe pani fer diya??
Grahhh
tu 🤢🤢🤢
Itni romantik songs ki baad ye dhama ka
Me in shoked
hell ireted
Wait for next
Edited by Mayamaan - 13 years ago
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Announcement:

A novel on MaaNeeT 😊😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god!wats happening yaar??
i dint understand anything...
so mysterious...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

oh god!wats happening yaar??
i dint understand anything...
so mysterious...!!!



I told already Its gonna be twist and Now story will take a U turn 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..
bt m confused...wats happening????
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...

not liking d vows geet took...

thank u sooo much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 12
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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