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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for ur nxt update .got time so read ur ff
awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago

I am busy with college fests'😆😆

So updates would be delayed'

Sorry again'..

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RECAP: Tudu??? Strange name he thought'..with this he was broght back in his senses'.

Yeh mai kya karne jar aha tha??? He crossed his arms in order to control his hands'

He saw her opening her eyes'

God I have never seen more beautiful eyes till now'.he thought'

Just then he saw her looking upward and smiling'.he felt weird..

And then she started drooling on him'then he uttered'

tum insane hi hona??

**PART 10**

Hun'then she realized what the man standing before thought of her as'

Mai to insane hi hoon but ap ka pta nai'am human only!!

Ap gadi dekh kr nai chala sakte!!! can't you see and drive???

Agar is bichare ko kuch ho jata to?? if it had got hurt then???

Ye janwar hai'issliye kuch keh nai sakte but iska matlab ap inki masumiyat ka fayda uthaenge!!! you should not take advantage of its innocense!!

What do you think of yourself???

Mana ki you have audi to drive'she said glancing at his car that was parked behind him'

Iska matlab ye thodi na hai ap apni money aise flaunt krenge'

She was continuously blabbering'when maan raised his hand in order to stop her'

Kitna bolti ho tum???you speak a lot!!!

Thak nai jati?? don't you get tired???

And by the way m msk!!!

And one dares to talk to me like this'samjhi tum!!!

Geet who was silently listening to him was shocked out of her wits!!!

You mean THE MSK???

Matlab THE MAN SINGH KHURANNA'..her eyes literally popped out'

Matlab ki mai world's second most company ke ceo ke samne khadi hun!!!!

Sir ek photo le sakti hun mai apki' can i have one photo with you??

By this time even pinki had come'

Geet tu theek to hai na'geet you all right!!

Tujhe kahin lagi to nai''

Geet have you lost it???

No one dares his life like this'.are you nuts???

Geet who was busy drooling over msk turned towards pinki '.

Ab mai bilkul theek hun'tu meri chinta mat kr!!! i am fine...do worry...

Tu chal mai bs 5 mins me ai'

Geet pr tu yahan'

Maine kaha na'I am coming in 5 minutes'.

You take this puppy and leave him on the other side of the road'.geet spoke while handling the puppy to pinki'.

Maan who was witnessing all this was pissed off and told'

Miss whatever you are'if you are done can I leave'

Am getting late!!!

Geet turned towards maan and with attitude spoke'

This miss wahever has a name'

GEET'.GEET HANDA'

Naam tu suna hi honga'..to which maan smirked and

Geet broke into laughter'.

Maan was lost in her innocent laughter and thought where do we get to see such innocence now a days!!!

So miss geet'.i would like to take your leave and yes

It was really nice meeting you'

And he turned around and was about to leave when geet called from back'

Msk sir'please one minute!!!

He turned around and uttered

Now what??? In frustrated voice!!!

Sir'now that you are so rich and smart'

I had a proposal for you!!!

You single till now'

Why don't you marry my elder sister '.hamari life bhi set ho jaegi'

Maan who was busy seeing time on his watch 'got amused at her antics'

He chuckled silently and said'.

So you find me smart ?? hun!!!

What else do you find interesting in me?? He said taking little steps towards her!!!


Wo wo'.ap smart ho'apke biceps bhi ache hai'.

You look fit so 'would be having 6 pack abs also!!!

Aur phir you are intelligent also'yes also hardworking'

Aur paise ki kami to hai hi nahi'maan smirked and said'you seem to have a lot of money!!1

To phir tum hi mujhse shaadi kyun nai kr leti ..when you liked me so much'

I will keep you happy'after all I have so much of money!!!

Nai wo I am not of marriageable age'I am only 17'.

And sam di is pursuing mba'you would love her'

But I am ready to wait for you'.ek sal bat hm shaadi kr lenge'

He spoke taking one more step forward and now geet felt cars bumper at her back'.

Ap samjh kyun nai rahe'.she pouted very cutely'

Next year i will turn 18'then I want to pursue b.tech, then mba'.

Then I will think about marriage'not before that'.

she bend backward to take its support as maan bend forward'.

They both were lost in each other '

But I am ready to wait for you forever'

As you are so beautifull'he whispered looking into her eyes '

Geet 's cheek s started turning red'.maan smirked seeing that'

They heard a car's horn that was passing by and both of them came into senses'

Pr ap sam di se ek bar milie to sahi'wo mujhse bhi jyada sundar hai'.why dont you understand!!! she is more prettier than me!!!

Par jb mujhe tum pasand ho phir'but i like you!!!

Aur waise bhi agar ek bar msk ka dil ek cheez pr aa jata hai to he have it by hook aur by crook'he said giving a dangerous smile'

Hd ho gai'yahan mai apni behn ka rishta pakka krne me lagi hun aur ap mere piche hi pade hai!!! its the limit...here i am trying for my sister and you are busy fixing it with me!!!

Meri behn me problem kya hai???

Agar mai sundar ho to wo toh meri badi behn hai!!!

To wo to mujhse jyada pretty hui na'.. she is more prettier than me!!

Aur waise bhi mai toh apki saali lagi na'.

To which he replied'you mean aadhi gharwali'.

Pr mujhe toh puri chahiye!!! but i want you as whole!!

Fine I am leaving'ab toh adhi bhi nai milegi!!!

Arrey tum toh bura maan gai'chalo can I take your leave now??

Am seriously getting late!!!

Geet replied nodding 'but meri behn ke bare me sochiyega zaroor'

do think about my sister!!

Aur tum mere proposal ke bare me!!! Maan spoke before sitting in the car'.

and you about mine!!!

Pta nai kya samjhte hai apneap ko'..

Pr geet you will have to control for your di'

Itne bhi bure nai hai'

Geet was busy complaining to her babajee'she was disturbed by car that was continuously honking'

Geet came to her senses and rushed back to home!!!

~~PRESENT~~

EVERYONE WAS ASSEMBLED AT THE DINNING TABLE'

Geet beta we all have planned something for you and maan'sawitri spoke

Geet who was busy serving the food'turned all her attention to sawitri ji..

Geet beta we all know that you have been going through quite a lot of emotional stress!!!

So we all have planned a trip for both of you so that both of you get a bit of

Time for each other or else you guys is so busy in your daily life'

I want you both to give time to each other and have fun'

And yes don't bother about parth'

He will be fine with us'

And the tickets are for ladakh'.

So get going and start packing'

Geet was shocked and turned her face towards maan'

Who gave I don't know expressions'but smirked inwardly'

Kb tak mujhse dur bhagogi geet???...

You will have to accept the reality or else I will have to force you to do so'..

PRECAP: PACKING

And more past coming'.

So how was it???

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Mdworld Corner


Next update:PART 11

Previous update:PART 9

Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved maneet's conversation ...so funny !!! Reminded me of jab we met :)
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it..
Maan had made her clear about his feelings in the first meeting itself..
But then hw cum he married sam?????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome awesome awesome...😛

continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
so so sweet part...like it...



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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
liked maneet's first meet...
awww their convo was funny...
wow maneet off to ladakh..
waiting for the next one..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


past Maan-Geet convo is very funny...

now trip to laddakh...Maan is determind to make her his...

Maan is really a negative character in this FF...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
read all 10 parts all together...what a twisted story...maan is playing a little bit negative character here...so much questions arouse...maan liked geet from the first sight n geet also but as an admirer nothing more...maan loved her n i guess maans ma/ dadi was talking abt sam to maan for marriage so when maan went to see ladki he saw geet n to get geet he agreed to marry sam as geet already liked dev...it that was true then poor sam...if maan loved geet from th beginning then why they had a child...why he got intimate with sam physically...that was nt fair...geet respects maan so much n maan is playing wth geets trust...he planned many things...trapped geet...sam is dead n its still disclose the reason behind her death...sam knew abt maans lv interest so she requested geet to marry maan...maan gave job to dev coz he tried to pretend vry gd in front of geet...natasha is maan plan bt may b dev is also interested in natasha...dis geet really lov dev coz if she loved him so much then y she kept away from dev for 4 years...when u love somone its vry tough to keep away from him/her...if maan loves geet then y he attached wth sam physically...is parth really maan-sam child i mean maan is jealous of his own son...so much questions here...u said that dont criticize ur first ff...i m nt criticizing it...its only curiosity...n i m so happy that u made nandini as maans dadi...its better if u would made her as maans mother in law...😆
Edited by paponecon - 13 years ago

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