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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff...

do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is awesome update
bout scared to don't want
to read that maan done
bad things to have geet
on his side. love it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice ff...


do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...


sure...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi people'.thanx for lovely comments'

I would like to admit one thing'when I started

Writing this story'I had planned a sweet love story but

my shetani dimag😈 have converted it into a dark story'🤣🤣

I have not planned anything yet what I will be writing further'

Its just like that when I start writing'what comes into my mind I start writing that'..

{**in brown is the translation...(if not needed then kindly ignore}


RECAP: She got out of his grip and turned toward the other side inorder to to make her heartbeat normal'.

Wo mai'wo khanna lag gaya hai'ap jaldi change krke bahar aa jaiye'

As geet was about to leave maan held her hand'

Acha geet'tum khanna to kha rahi hona'

She smiled and nodded and ran out of the room'.

Maan smirked and gave a smile'oh god geet I love you madly'

Ye nakul kaka bhi na'hamesha wrong timings!!!!

**PART 9**

~~PAST~~

TUDU..uth na... {tudu wake up!!}

Di do min na..pls.. {di...2 mins}

Its for the last time I am waking you up'or else I will'.

Naiii''''..geet woke up with a jerk'

Sam di..meri pyaari di...dekho mai uth gai... {my sweet sister sam di...see i woke up!!}

I was hell exhausted last night..so wasn't able to wake up...geet said making a babay face..

Tudu..get up fast you are getting late for your school'..

And stop this antics of yours..who told you to sleep late?

Di wo main a raat ho..

Sam cut her in between know you were chatting with your friends on facebook..

Isn't it?...tudu 'If told mumma about this then you know what will happen...

Sorry di'ap to world ki best di ho..meri sabse pyaari di..

Di pta hai mai apse sabse jyada close hun'mai apko chodke kahin nai jaungi..

Even when you get married..i will allow jiju to marry you if he will allow me to come with you...{you are best...i love you the most and wont ever leave you...even when you get married i will come with you}

tudu 'enough of your buttering'

And tudu one more thing'I don't like you meeting dev'.

Be in your limits with him'or else I will tell mom and dada everything.!!! Sameera told sternly!!

di'trust me'.

I trust you tudu but not dev..I know he is a decent guy but you are my kid sister..

You are in 12th class now...you know very less abouit this real world..

Your life is between all of us only'you have been brought up in a very secured environment..

Once you are out from school..then you will come to know about the real world'.

di...you should not worry that much about me...now I am getting late..

with this geet took her school uniform and ran to the washroom...

somewhere in other side of delhi..

Good morning daadima..

Maan said kissing nandini's cheek..dressed to kill in his waist coat with his biceps bulging from his tight fitted shirt and formal trousers...hair gelled back'in a nut shell our typical MSK style...😉😉

Goodmorning maan bte'she smiled

Kissi ki nazar na lage mere pote ko... {god save you from the evil eyes}

Goodmorning ma'I am already late..

Is this a way to greet your mother maan..asked sawitri'.

Settle down and have your breakfast first...

Sorry ma..but not today...I have a meeting...

Maan no more discussion...settle down right down...

Without saying a word maan settled down and stated having his breakfast with black coffee ...

Maan I have seen a girl for you..she is very pretty and is pursuing mba..

You would love her...

Daadi please'for heaven sake am 27 now'why di you want me to marry so early'..

I just can not settle down like this'iwant khurranas to be ar top first'.

Maan..so you want to marry after 30..have you even thought for once if you have kida after 30'..that means there will be an age gap of more than 30 between you people..and then how will you be able to understand them with this much of generation gap'..

Dadi please not right now please..I am leaving..maan said while leaving his breakfast in between'

Fine beta..but you wont be able to procrastinate it any more!!!! She told with determination and moved back to her room..

Maa suniye to...please maan ki baton ko dil pr mat lijiye..

I promise you he will agree to marry...

But there was no response!!!

Sawitri sighed..this was their daily routine..

She also badly wanted maan to get marry..so that there would be a new member

In there home and there would be some change from this monotonous life...

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So, guys its your annual day tomorrow

After that no more excuses..I want you all to submit your projects till the next week'

Is that clear..

Yes ma'am..everyone uttered in chorus..

And all the best for the function'...

As its last year for all of you in this school so have fun and perform well...

Thank you ma'am...

With this ma'am lefty the class...and then everyone started dispersing...

Guys...lets take a pledge today...

What kind of pledge?.....asked meera.vicky,yash,dev and pinky'

Where ever we go once school finishes we all would always stay in touch and wont forget eachother..

Promise tudu..everyone said all together'

And everyone had a group hug'

This was geet's gang..they all were together from 5th class

And know almost everything about eachother..


Waise geet..sam di kb shaadi kr rahi hai'Vicky asked..

Idiot'pehle unkeliye koi rishta to ane de..geet answered while hitting vicky's head..

Isse toh hamesha khaane ki padi rehti hai..whenever she will marry..

Sabse pehla card tujhe hi dungi mera vicks'..

And everyone started laughing aloud!!!

Everyone dispersed from the class towards their home...

ON THE WAY BACK HOME..

Geet was going back home with pinky..

While they were blabbering good for nothing...

Geet's eyes fell on a puppy who was scared and was trying to cross the busy road...

Oh no'use lag jaegi..geet uttered between their blabbering..{it will get hurt!!}

Kisse lag jaegi geet??asked an amused pinky..{who will get hurt??}

Hun..wo uss puppy ko..geet said while pointing her finger towards the

Puppy who has by now almost reached the center of road...

Pinky looked toward puppy and felt han geet..

Pta hai sab bs dekhte rehte hai aur koi kuch karta nai hai..{seriously geet..people will keep watching and no one would do anything!!}

Pta nai kya hog is desh ka'after saying this pinky turned back to look toward geet

Who was no longer there!!!

Tudu'ye kahan gai she said looking around'.

Just then her eyes fell on geet who some how had managed to reach to

Puppy and when she was picking it up'

Pincky screamed ..TUUDUUU!!!...

Geet heard pinky telling her hat no one helps'all of a sudden she saw some cars

Speeding towards the puppy'.

Out of panick she ran towards him and picked it up'

Ap dar gaye the na'but koi bat nai'a bap safe ho...{you got scared..but don't worry m here!!}

Just then she heard pincky screaming her name''

Smiling geet turned around and heard the screech of tyres'

She got frightened and closed her eyes tightly'.holding the puppy tightly

Near to her heart in order to protect him'.

She was hell scared and waited for the car to hit her'

After 5 minutes she opened her one eye to see what has happened'

She saw a man may be in his twenty's standing in front of her with his arms crossed'


As she saw him she opened both her eyes and cheched her legs, her arms and then the puppy'.

She gave a bright smile and looked toward the sky and thanked and whispered'

thank you babaji meri jaan bachane ke liye'.

She looked back towards the man standing in front of her who was waiting for her to say something'.

But she took notice of his physique'..his biceps that were bulging out from his shirt'

Then her eyes went to his face'his M-shaped lips'.

God'he is so damn handsome'.she thought'

Agar yeh meri sam di ko mil jae to unki life set hai'..{if he marries my sam di then it will so great!!}

Geet was brought back when she heard him saking her rudely'tum insane hi hona??{are you a human?}

Maan was coming back from a meeting when hid driver applied brakes and

Stopped the car abruptly'..

Kya hua'he asked his driver'.

Hid driver told him that a girl came in front all of a sudden'

Before driver could speak anything further he got down from the car

In order to give her a peace of mind when he saw a girl standing

In front of his car with her eyes closed'.he was mesmerized seeing her'

It was like as if time had stopped and it was only him and her standing

There'he had a sudden urge to put a strand of hair that was falling on her face

Behind her ear'he proceeded toward her when he heard someone screaming'..

Tudu tu theek to hai'

Tudu??? Strange name he thought'..with this he was broght back in his senses'.

Yeh mai kya karne ja raha tha??? He crossed his arms in order to control his hands'

He saw her opening her eyes'

God I have never seen more beautiful eyes till now'.he thought'

Just then he saw her looking upward and smiling'.he felt weird..

And then she started drooling on him'then he uttered'

tum insane hi hona??{are you a human?}

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PRECAP: their first conversation😆

And honeymoon???😳😍

So how was it??

I made nandini maan's daadi'.🤣🤣

I never liked her in the show!!! also tudu is geet's nick name!!!😆

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PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 8

NEXT UPDATE:_PART 10

Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n superb n beautiful update...

toh dis was first meeting of maan n geet...n definitely maan fall in love with her...love at first sight...

i really really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update...
i think past will be intresting...maan married with sam but having eye on saali😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nandini Maan ki dadi
loved it


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Posted: 13 years ago
ok i got it
maan fell in love with her on the first meeting then why he married sam?
I am kinda confused about it..
Btw i loved the update..
Awesome part
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part...waiting for more...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n superb n beautiful update...

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