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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: bangalores

ur story brought in memories...oh not mine but the tales are in 3rd person...
the triangle reminded me of the happenings in my sister's litt class...there was not just triangles but rectangles too😆😆
and my sis herself was involved in one...but unlike geet she is married to her ceaser.
great going but at times confusing to keep up with the allusions in the thoughts... but never worry keep up i will... 😃
have send a buddy request for PMs



Ah! Nice...

You should quote on the confusion here. Else I would never improve you see.

Thanks for writing back.
Hasini
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: t_areeb

its brilliantly written

i really liek the way you give details of characters and incidents



Glad you like it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sadffi

Wooow me first⭐️

Brilianttt...👏
Lovd the story...
Update soon 😃
Thnx for PM...😳



Thanks you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Hmmm... very descriptive... settling in the foundation bricks I suppose :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
So Maan was in love with Geet from the beginning but she had a relationship with Dev. Dev gave the photo album for Maan to restore & the pictures of Geet are jogging his memory & re igniting his past feelings.
Am I right? I was a little uncertain about the album

Brilliant update by the way, brings a few memories back of my school days
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
they say a picture says a thousand words...

it has a memory...a deep meaning...a moment captured...one which either makes us happy or sad...but always brings a smile...it is just u have to figure whether it is a happy smile or a sad smile...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
it was so beautiful...
i loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
wow.. a new story..😊😊

Looking forward to this one also...😃

Thanks for d PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
ahh that was a fab part hasini...very beautifully written...though i was confused a bit at first when i read , it got cleared the second time i read it...you are an awsome writer👏 loved it...waiting for more😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

So Maan was in love with Geet from the beginning but she had a relationship with Dev. Dev gave the photo album for Maan to restore & the pictures of Geet are jogging his memory & re igniting his past feelings.
Am I right? I was a little uncertain about the album

Brilliant update by the way, brings a few memories back of my school days



Well I'm not explicitly stating anything between M&G as of now. If you notice both updates are from Dev's POV so far (first one is almost Dev).

The picture album is what Dev is going through at the hospital, after Geet drops it off after restoring it.

Although Geet's picture with her t-shirt clutched to her chest, is really a memory from the time he saw the snap in Maan's wallet a long time ago.

I will go back and edit a few things around, so that its explicit that the second part is really a memory of seeing a picture and not a picture itself.
Thanks for writing back.
Hasini

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