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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Hey madhuri,

sorry i have been real busy with college and writing the new OS/SS Toxic love. I haven't forgetton you guys or my stories. Focusing on one story at a time and doing my best that i can.

i plan to update LIB friday night .. . which in india time is saturday morning :)

Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 12 years ago

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anmirza

@anmirza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Hey I just came across this ff and read it in one go! I don't know if my opinion would matter at this point but I would still express myself as a reader! Geet's character is disgusting to say the least but that's the plot of the story but I think Maan's character is ruined coz there isn't a guy who would ever tolerate such a characterless girl when he himself is a nice guy! He should be hating her as of now, not getting intimate with her at any given time. Given this hypothetical situation even if he is willing to accept her into his life, he won't be waiting for her to enjoy her nights out with different guys until she gets trapped in his games! I would want to see that bitterness there coz Maan's reaction is just impossible. After what she did, there is no possibility for a guy to love such a girl!

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Sadie

@..CountingStars

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: anmirza
Hey I just came across this ff and read it in one go! I don't know if my opinion would matter at this point but I would still express myself as a reader! Geet's character is disgusting to say the least but that's the plot of the story but I think Maan's character is ruined coz there isn't a guy who would ever tolerate such a characterless girl when he himself is a nice guy! He should be hating her as of now, not getting intimate with her at any given time. Given this hypothetical situation even if he is willing to accept her into his life, he won't be waiting for her to enjoy her nights out with different guys until she gets trapped in his games! I would want to see that bitterness there coz Maan's reaction is just impossible. After what she did, there is no possibility for a guy to love such a girl!

There's a lot more to the story than what is being shown.
And Look at the title - I See right through you, gives away half of Maan's Character right then and there..

@Zee, just go with the original story that you have in mind, I KNOW There's a solid reason behind Geet's Cheap Character And Maan's Indifferent Behaviour ...I Know It ^_^

Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 12 years ago

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: anmirza
Hey I just came across this ff and read it in one go! I don't know if my opinion would matter at this point but I would still express myself as a reader! Geet's character is disgusting to say the least but that's the plot of the story but I think Maan's character is ruined coz there isn't a guy who would ever tolerate such a characterless girl when he himself is a nice guy! He should be hating her as of now, not getting intimate with her at any given time. Given this hypothetical situation even if he is willing to accept her into his life, he won't be waiting for her to enjoy her nights out with different guys until she gets trapped in his games! I would want to see that bitterness there coz Maan's reaction is just impossible. After what she did, there is no possibility for a guy to love such a girl!

I could try to make you understand or see it from my point of view, but that would just give the whole story away. So i will do my best to do give a good explanation without spoiling anything.

This is a dark concept, a complicated twisted story. You would be easily be able to relate with Maan if you just read the title. " I see right through you" is from Maan's point of view. He knows Geet is hiding behind a mast and this whole FF will be him unmasking her disguise that she wears for everyone else. He will see right through her disguise!

Right now Maan is holding everything inside him and trying to be the better person and figuring Geet out. He wants to get her off her high horse, by doing the exact things that irks Geet.

It is possible to love someone to such an extent. You can't stop yourself for falling for that person no matter how bad they are. In love there is no off switch. If there was life wouldn't be so complicated.

Since you read it all in one go. Let me remind you in the part where Geet breaks his heart in the club. Geet's friends, Dev, and Vicky are speaking to Maan. Yet at the last moment a lightbulb lights up and he figures out something, for which he then smirks and leaves. From that moment he realizes that Geet didn't break his heart simply for the joy of it, but because she was trying to take revenge for setting her up to get married. To her it looked like a set up, which Maan had no idea of. But if you noticed Geet also says she usually breaks the person's heart by leaving them after she sleeps with them, except she chooses a different route with Maan. . .WHy???

Geet looks like a total wh**e right now, because i am not revealing what has lead her to become such a person. She doesn't even see it as a bad thing. SHe doesn't feel anymore. SHe has turned off her emotions and in order to feel. WHich makes breaking hearts so easy for her.

Your not the first person to let me know how disgusting her character is. But maybe since you read it all in one go you missed out on some of the hints. As quite many of my readers who hated Geet in the beginning actually are on her side now and want her to win against the war with Maan. At one point I got shocked as to make who win. . .because i thought everyone hated Geet. Yet since they have read my other works my readers trust me and know i have something up my sleeve and already planned.

Up to you if you want to continue to read. I tried my best to explain. Your opinion does matter and thank you for voicing it. But I ask you to trust me and let me develop the story. My FF's tend to be very long. My First FF finished in 68 parts. So you can clearly see this FF is still in its initial phase. However if you see as i develop the story i am not doing justice to what i had said i would do then feel free to point me out.

~Zee

Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 12 years ago

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

I too wanted to go with what you have decided originally...but make maan to take her out of her cheap character...as I want them together...😃

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK
Hey madhuri,

sorry i have been real busy with college and writing the new OS/SS Toxic love. I haven't forgetton you guys or my stories. Focusing on one story at a time and doing my best that i can.

i plan to update LIB friday night .. . which in india time is saturday morning :)

Ok dear

Take you time & do update

Will wait for you😊

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
I too wanted to go with what you have decided originally...but make maan to take her out of her cheap character...as I want them together...😃

thank you guys 😳 i know i can always count on my loyal readers 🤗

That's what Maan plan's to do his own way 😉

You guys will see in the next couple of updates how " Chalak " our Maan babu is 😉😳😛

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Ok dear

Take you time & do update

Will wait for you😊

instead of doing my assignment and reading about 100 pages of my book. . .i came a across an IF writing competition and i instantly go writing away.

SO plz bear with me if i don't update tomorrow its because i am writing for the competition. I have an update of ISRTU almost done though. Is it okay if i update ISRTU instead of LIB tomorrow?