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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


when is ur next holiday starting😛
are dont worry give ur best and rest leave to IF people😊


ummm i have a short holiday of 4 days in end of november. the big holiday of 5 weeks is at end of december.. . .sigh so far.

yeah that's what i plan to do :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK


ummm i have a short holiday of 4 days in end of november. the big holiday of 5 weeks is at end of december.. . .sigh so far.

yeah that's what i plan to do :)


in those 5 weeks holiday want regular updates😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on this thread bt pls pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
SHE'S UPDATING!!!!!🤣🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part: 20

One Step Ahead

RECAP:
"Maan please" she strokes the side of his cheek.
"pleas let me. . ." Maan's eyes were closed and before he knew it he got flipped to the ground
"Hope that answers your question" she winks going toward the entrance.
She gives a glare to the security guard and he couldn't believe his eyes! He just gulped down in fear and let her in.
Maan couldn't believe he was on the floor! Damn was is left that this girl doesn't know how to do? she even knows martial arts.. . ufff HOT!!! A smiled appeared on his lips before he walked inside after his Pagli!

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Geet walks in and heads over the bar counter, ordering herself a drink after drink.
She was going to gulp the fourth drink down when Maan grabs it. He drags her hand with the drink and gulps it down.
Maan: aghh! Why thank you Miss Geet Handa. That really hit the spot.
Geet moves her hand away in disgust.
Maan: So what was it you wanted to talk about exactly darling?
Geet: really? I don't remember wanting to talk to you? I think you hit the ground really hard. Awwh you poor thing.
Maan: Your one Feistyyy chick! If you look behind yourself you can see how many women's eyes follow my direction, and I am not just talking about the single ones.
Geet Handa: hahh! You think you got it all special? Every guy in here is wondering which lucky guy it will be tonight to get a taste of me.
Geet watched his expressions change.
"I think I might go with that sexy guy. . .ufff his abs are just oozing out of his shirt" she says with a evil smirk.
She was about to head over to the dance floor when she felt herself getting tipsy and falls over to Maan.
" I haven't even made a move on you and yet you are already over me instead of that guy. Sorry I am not interested" pushing her off him.
Geet: ugghhh I hate you.
Maan: You never gave me a reason to like you pagli!
Even though she hated to admit it, but he was right. It was just better that way.
"So if you will excuse me that sexy girl has been eyeing me since I walked in" he cheekily smiles and leaves Geet.
"Whatever" Geet rolls her eyes and gets cozy with a hot guy.
No matter how much they both danced and got cozy with their partners both their eyes would occasionally fall on each other as if checking up on each other. Each time Geet's eyes fell on Maan and would catch her he would get extra closer and cozier in order to make her jealous. The song changes and Maan finds himself backed up to the wall, and to his surprise it was none other than his Paagli.
"You think this is all a joke?"
"The answer is yeah. . . I do miss the other Maan. . . he wasn't such a doochebag "
"Goes both ways sweetheart. . . I miss the geet that never was" he looks straight in her eyes searching for his Geet.
"Stop trying to act like me" she said gritting through her teeth.
Maan: I am not acting like you. Your totally misunderstanding me, you always have from the start.
Geet: That's what a virgin always says to a person who has let's say EXPERIENCE.
That wasn't the analogy Maan was quite looking for to get the picture, and Geet knew that very well! He could see him cringe even though he tried not to show it. She knew very well what gets people to stay away from her, but no matter how much she tried it with Maan he kept on coming closer, something she didn't like.
Geet: You put up a good show. I find it cute if you ask me. But why don't you tone it down a bit.
Maan: tone what down a bit now exactly?
Geet: This dark side avatar of urs. Flirting with anybody with every chance u get. You won't prove anything. I may have broken your heart, but that doesn't mean you can become like me.
" What is that suppose to mean? Are you saying that someone broke your heart and that's why you are like the way you are?"
Geet laughs "not like I will answer those questions, i like being a sexy mystery, so don't even bother to try to dig information from me

Maan: Oh yeah I just proved that you take notice of when I give attention to other girls. Why don't you ask yourself not to care?

Geet was about to reply back when her eye falls on a familiar face.
"I don't have time for this. So take this as a warning Mr. Flirty Khurana" and walks away.

"Go ahead run away. Let's see how long you can escape" Maan says watching her figure disappear into the crowd.
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"I told you to put everything on hold!" ,Geet tried to control herself from yelling cornering the guy away from eyeballs.
"Well some things can't be put on hold GEET! I knew I would find you here. You have come this far! I saw the person you call a distraction", the guy scoffed.
"Didn't you look so lost in his eyes, all cozied up next to him"! he mocked
"SHUT IT!!" Geet said pointed her finger at him.
Geet: Things are a little tight here. If I miss class one more time I won't graduate! So like I said things have to be put on hold for now.
Guy: Since when did graduating become your priority? As if you even need it.
Guy: Anyways you might want to make your move fast Geet. You got the weekend, and for the Geet Handa I know 24 hours is more than enough for her. I gave you the heads up the rest is up to you BOSS!
"Fine now go away from here before someone sees you. And don't come back until I call you" she spit out.
There was a change in Geet, a lot of agitation and frustration, and even a loss of focus. Her mind is not where it used to be. But he trusted Geet and knew he would take care of her little distraction. It was Geet Handa after all!
Maan over hears the conversation pretending that he didn't he butts in , " Is there a problem here Geet?"
"No I was just leaving" he sneers looking at Maan before leaving.
"Geet if he is bothering - "
"Stop trying to be my hero. Thanks but no thanks. I can take care of myself" she snaps cutting him off and leaving the club. She had enough of Maan for today and just goes home.
For the rest of the night, Maan was up trying to put the pieces about Geet Handa together. He had to figure out a better plan to take off Geet's disguise. He had to keep an eye on her this weekend. What was this move she had to make next as if she was on some kind of mission?! So many questions, and no answers.
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Morning came, and everyone was excited as it was Friday and the weekend was near. Geet comes out of her last class and was about to head over to her car, when she sees a group of college students including Maan fooling around. She just shakes her head at their level of maturity and just passes them without giving them a glance.
"Hey Vicky give that to me" Maan says grabbing the sling shot out of his hand and aiming toward Geet.
Geet holds her ass while Maan cheekily smirks, " Bulls eye" while others whistle and cheer on.
Geet comes charging toward him!
" Bro tu toh gayi" looking at the angry tigress coming towards him.
"jab mein ushe pehle din dekha toh mein gayi ti" he lowly mutters smiling to himself lost in her as she stood face to face with him.
Maan: Kya Paagli you are not the typical desi girl to get upset when a guy gives you attention or aims for your ass.
"If you ask me, you want men to stare at your ass, which is why you are always in micro mini's" he chuckles.

"Ohhh...Burn" everyone cooed. Geet just rolls her eyes. Really? How old were they??
"So please don't give me that attitude. Your dress style doesn't suit such a innocent personality" he continued to mock!
Geet: What are you trying to hint on Mr. Maan Singh Khurana? I am that side of Devil who can mold herself into any avatar, and not a person will have a doubt in their mind of who I am. I am that G O O D!
Maan: I don't think you would pull off a desi girl look..Neither are you a desi girl nor contain the innocence and respect that comes with a desi girl. It's not just your dress style. You just plainly don't have it in you darling.
Geet: You want to bet on it Mr. Flirty Khurana?
" Miss Geet Handa is willing to put her image at risk" he gasps.
Maan: yeah right! Of course I will bet on it!
Geet: let's see what is the one thing Mr. Flirty Khurana hates most in this world. . . ME!
So if I win, you will have to take me on a DATE. That would be enough to make it the worst night of your life, spending time with me! That left a little scratch on Maan's heart to see that Geet thinks he hates her when in reality he loves her more than his own life. However she did fall for his trap.
" hey, we want to be a part of this bet to, hain na girls?" Meera says and all the Girls agree.
Meera: If we all put off a desi girl look then what would u guys do for us?
" We will lose our hearts in your beauty and sing our hearts to you" Vicky says sarcastically and all the boys starting laughing their hearts out.
Dev: First of all you girls won't be able to put off a desi girl look. No offense especially you Geet. You all are hot , and know how to dress westernly. Desi clothes is not your cup of tea.
" Second even if you do pull it off, don't think your innocence will cast a spell on us" Vicky gloats with pride.
Geet gets angry.
Geet: MR. VICKY SINGH KHURANA you will eat your words. I will prepare these girls in such a way that you will forget to breathe! All you boys will be floored mark my words.
Maan: Geet you worry about yourself sweetheart.
"Innocence" Geet cringes at that word as she says it.
Geet: Their innocence will make your ego filled heads and hearts flutter.
" And your innocence?" Maan raises an eyebrow.
Geet: I never said I had innocence, its you who fell for that girl that didn't exist!
Maan: we shall see D a r l i n g!
" okay Meera this bet is so on. I also want to see how this will play out. Tomorrow at 5 at the Khurana farm house we guys will be waiting for you" he says putting his hand out.
Meera shakes Vicky's hand. While the other girls and guys glared at each other with the intention of winning.
Geet puts her hand out to Maan, but Geet removes her hand in the nick of time, " sss too slow. Get ready to lose babez" winks before walking off.
Maan couldn't wipe the huge grin that played on his face as he watched his paagli walk away.
And that's what you call a "check mate!" giving a hi five to Vicky.


Precap:

Let the bet begin 😉 What trap has Geet walked into. . .ooh she has to be more careful Maan is a step ahead of her😈

PMS later have to run to class now.

Comments and likes appreciated.




Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow this is called a full powerful dhamakedar update 😉
from start to end i was on the edge that something might hapeen now now now
in begining both trying to show each other that the r better than each other😆
wow geet cornering maan to wall 😆 and showing the sign od jealousy😳
now who is the guy that came is he helping geet to destroy or punish someone
seems like something was planned this weekend but maan babu ne sab bigad diya😆

wow what a plan by maan he challenged geet and was helped by meera vickey and geet trapped in that so whatever there was about to happen in weekend is not happening now
maan executed his plan perfectly but its still to be seen if its successful or not as in case of geet anything is possible😉

continue soon

OH god i cant believe that i m fist after such a long long time
thoda dance hojayee zee dance with me for sometime😆

PS: zee want to make a small request can u always make situation like this that whenever geet would want to go for one night stand maan would spoil it so that she cant go
reply to me if its possible or not

Edited by abinash079 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very interesting chp.I wonder what kind of a mission Geet is on.Looking forward to the next chp to read about what kind of a trap Maan has set up for Geet.Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear

geet wants maan to stay away from her

but maan is maan how can he leav his love like that

oh maan have bet just to have an eye on geet

please update " Love Is Blind " waiting

waiting cont soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
SHE UPDATED!!! 😲😲😲 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update dear...
Maan is on mission Geet...
Waiting to see how girls will look in their desi avtaar...

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