FF'I see right through you'New thread link Page140 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

770

Views

112.3k

Users

143

Likes

1.8k

Frequent Posters

Mrs.ZSK thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

A Night Out

It Was an odd night when we decided to go out. I so wanted to visit the beach but my
Friends told me I was crazy. It was December for Heaven's Sake! I didn't care though. All I knew was I wanted to go there no matter what. The Sound of the ocean soothed me whenever I felt alone.
Yes, I was alone. No family except two friends in an Unknown city.
Who says One is alone when the crashing sounds of the waves say "hello" to you. And Never come back to say a Crashing "Bye".
Sighing at my Unrealistic thoughts I dragged my friends with me to the beach of memories.

"We'll get you for this!"
I heard my friends say.
"Well shut up for now"
I giggled.

As I walked on the wet sand, I felt as though someone was staring at me.
Of course it was my buddies! But it was Different. It Was Intense, a stare that was burning me from within.
I turned around and found no one. Maybe I'm imagining, I thought.
But wait, where were my friends? I desperately looked around trying to find them but failed to do so. Tears welled up in my small eyes.


That's All I Managed To Type Up Before I Had To Leave.
Told Ya it was Crap 😆


Nahi i was just about to type to you to let me read more . . .
but my dumb luck !!!!!😡 that's all u typed. . .

GOd damn it was giving me the chills. . . hayyyeee i was imagining maaneet.
Damn girl ur writing in this one was so different.

Like i loved what you did with the intro. . . using the symbolism of the waves and loneliness. . .
and then that intense glare ufff ***goosebumpsss***

plz finish it!
and u r getting really good at writing 👍🏼

Mrs.ZSK thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu



Oho...Rajnikanth ki daughter 😆 🤣
14th april is yours ???


whose daughter? sorry didn't understand 😛 . . . or don't know who that is.

yes 14th april is mine.


Craziest_MG thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK



whose daughter? sorry didn't understand 😛 . . . or don't know who that is.

yes 14th april is mine.




Oh you dont know rajnikanth...he is south indian superstar...you must watch his films, those which are dubbed in hindi...you'll love them...he knows everything n he can do anything. 😉
Great so we share the date.
..CountingStars thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#44
@Its All in my book 😉 😆
Zee that was last year 😳 Told u I had matured 😆
But yeah my writing style changes randomly!
If I'm told to update idk within a Few hours. I CAN'T . Itll ruin the whole thing!
Just Like Teri Meri . It wAs intense.
But the second Part just turned into Comedy 😆
Cuz I was doing it in a Rush.
This Story I practiced with Maaneet In My Mind 😳
I'll post This Up Soon 😳
maybe in few days Time..
THAT was Wat I did in the exam! 😆
..CountingStars thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Oh By the way Zee
Rajnikaanth--If that's how u spell his nAme
Was In Robot 😆
Thought to let u know since You Like Bollywood 😆
Just Like Mee 😳
Mrs.ZSK thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#46


Oh you dont know rajnikanth...he is south indian superstar...you must watch his films, those which are dubbed in hindi...you'll love them...he knows everything n he can do anything. 😉
Great so we share the date.

Sadie just told me he was in robot. . .i watched half of that film . . . so i know who he is now 😆

but LMAO!!! now i get ur comment 🤣

yes we share the same date.
Mrs.ZSK thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

@Its All in my book 😉 😆
Zee that was last year 😳 Told u I had matured 😆
But yeah my writing style changes randomly!
If I'm told to update idk within a Few hours. I CAN'T . Itll ruin the whole thing!
Just Like Teri Meri . It wAs intense.
But the second Part just turned into Comedy 😆
Cuz I was doing it in a Rush.
This Story I practiced with Maaneet In My Mind 😳
I'll post This Up Soon 😳
maybe in few days Time..
THAT was Wat I did in the exam! 😆


DAMN i am jealous!!
In an exam . . .when there is pressure on you . . .you come up with something great like that 😲

i wish there was more time in the exam so you would have finished it 🤣

lmao!! it depends on the mood 😳

that's why when i am doing updates sometimes. . . i read the parts before it to get myselt in the mood . . . and then write the next update.

it helps a lot! k jaani. looking forward to this now.
Craziest_MG thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK



Oh you dont know rajnikanth...he is south indian superstar...you must watch his films, those which are dubbed in hindi...you'll love them...he knows everything n he can do anything. 😉
Great so we share the date.



Sadie just told me he was in robot. . .i watched half of that film . . . so i know who he is now 😆

but LMAO!!! now i get ur comment 🤣

yes we share the same date.


Ok...so now you know him...yeah he was in robot...but more than that i like his shivaji, the boss...dont know much abt his films coz only few are dubbed in hindi...
So you got it na...vaise bhi MSK had said it so many times that he is rajnikanth ka beta 😆

Great then same pinch darling.
Mrs.ZSK thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu



Ok...so now you know him...yeah he was in robot...but more than that i like his shivaji, the boss...dont know much abt his films coz only few are dubbed in hindi...
So you got it na...vaise bhi MSK had said it so many times that he is rajnikanth ka beta 😆

Great then same pinch darling.


oh will look into it.

really MSK did??

i watched like 3 months of geet episodes today . . the golden episodes. . .didn't hear him say that.


..CountingStars thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK



DAMN i am jealous!!
In an exam . . .when there is pressure on you . . .you come up with something great like that😲

i wish there was more time in the exam so you would have finished it🤣

lmao!! it depends on the mood😳

that's why when i am doing updates sometimes. . . i read the parts before it to get myselt in the mood . . . and then write the next update.

it helps a lot! k jaani. looking forward to this now.




Rajnikaanth 😆

Zee I FINISHED It 🤣 But only in the Exam Paper *Plus I Was Given extra Time 😆*
But we Knew A Question will come up to write a Story so we had Prepared Like 5 Stories 😆
And Then It would be easier when under exam conditions.
But The Slow fool that I am, I didn't finish it in my book!
So I can't remember the ending properly...I'll change the ending I guess 😆

Yeah the Mood also. I'm always in ONE MOod by the looks of it 🤣
But Yeah Thanks For the Advice Twin! Will do That Now 😳

And 😳 Sachii? Do u think I should continue?
I'm gonna make sure I post this On GF!!! 🤣

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter · 10 months ago

Something About Us Hey All, starting a new story. It is a kind of reboot or version 2 of the story Something About You . Hope you will enjoy it...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Mahimaan · 4 years ago

Do dil.....

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Mridzy · 1 years ago

Hello again everyone! Thank you so much for the warm welcome and for reading and loving my OS - Elevator Encounters. Motivated by that, here I...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni · 10 months ago

Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25

This story is about teenage Maan and Geet who met at a marriage. Whoever is interested in reading pls responds to this post. Ignore if not...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom · 4 years ago

WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".