FORBIDDEN LOVE ~2 updated prt19 on pg 130( 17/8)

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myramabin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome update very difficult to wait for next

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

awesome update
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now this would hurt geet more

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ammu5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

congrts. God, hw can maan say something like this. poor geet. loved the update continue soon

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kavs123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

awesome part,,,,,,,,continue soon,,,,,i want her to go away for som tym n may be distance will set things right,,,,or let her refuse him n Maan shud see hw Mahi is desperately tryng to win his own wife n to an extent she is admiring him,,,obv lyk a frnd...

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bindu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Can you feel my pain?

Can you feel me dying each and every moment

Hour by hour and day by day

In each and every breath I take.

Pain is all I have now, my only companion

With you being gone, and no one else to support me

With you arms gone and only the coldness surrounding me

With your loving eyes no longer lingering over me

With you quiet assurance taken away from me

god rachna..my eyes have turned misty!!
great poem especially the qouted lines...
great to have two of ur creations honouring my back to back updates!!!
* holding up my invisible collar*
the greatest woe for geet is that she can't find comfort in his arms..coz he is the one who is causing the pain and he no longer connects to her pain

Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago

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Cathy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Finally you updated this. Ok, off to read.

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Rupa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Geet should not accept.. Et Maan miss her to the extent tht he realizes that he cannot live without her

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Cathy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Hmmm, so looks like Geet would distance herself from Maan, after what he had to say. Poor Geet, just when she was starting to get happy, Maan offers such a proposition. Do update the next part soon Bindu.