MG OS: I AM IN LOVE (Updated EPILOGUE pg 58) - Page 45

Originally posted by: ...Harshita...

Love Maneet,
Love the OS,
nd Luv u <3

Originally posted by: hermoso

lovely one

Lovd it dear to awerme...!!

Originally posted by: nishnal

Lovd it dear to awerme...!!

Lovely SS.I just finished reading all the chps and I loved each and every update👏⭐️ I think this has been the only story on Maaneet which I have read that has radiated such a lot of happiness and positivity and I really loved the story.You've done an excellent job👍🏼

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Lovely SS.I just finished reading all the chps and I loved each and every update👏⭐️ I think this has been the only story on Maaneet which I have read that has radiated such a lot of happiness and positivity and I really loved the story.You've done an excellent job👍🏼

Hi hi !

Originally posted by: Poojaa_P

Hi hi !

OMG wahiii ! that was simply AMAZING !

brilliant.. awesome..fantablous, super duper cute, ahhh just beautifully written, words aren't enough to describe it!

seriously loved it, each and every part was just too good!

You liar ! you said your hindi was rubbish, that's not the case at all... your hindi is great !!

all the dialogues were SUPERB !

I could feel Geet and maan and their LOVE. was totally imagine them while i was reading it, You expressed their character so perfectly, felt it so realistic !

I am actually *drooling* over your descriptive words!

yeh ladki ne toh mujhe pagal banda diya..sirf 2 minutes use dekha aur yeh haal hogaya hain mera - Maan

well yes Maan singh Khurana, Geet is a angel from heaven..Poor maan, just couldn't stop thinking about geet, 2 minutes was enough for him to go crazy over her beauty !

I lLOVE these phrases

sorry Babaji

chup...bilkul chup!

^^ without those there is no maan and no Geet ! YOu used them very well,!

Aww it was really sweet and lovely story! I am in love with this OS. 😉i think i can read it over and over again! The whole concept is brilliant,

in the 1st part you make them realize their love for eachother and then engagement, mehndi, sangeet and then finally shadi ! PERFECT !

Also loved how they both say I LOVE YOU in each part, aww man they are soo adorable and the way you described maan starring at geet eating gol gappa was awesome! (i love gol gappe hehe)

aapke bina main kuch nahi... - geet.

Tum meri jaan ho - Maan

Those two dialogues are just ...ufff !

haha maan was very naughty, he went to put haldi on her without anyone seeing, and then he also went to see her on the day of their WEDDING, aww he saw his bride before anyone else. 😳

Gosh passionate kiss before shadi ! haha aww!

You described so many romantic shades of maan, naughty, teasing caring, he is mixture of everything!

the Best part was Maan talking to himself, his self talks were just out of this world..

and geet saying how can she miss golden opportunity to go on date with maan ! 🤣 of course, who wouldn't want to go on date with him!? (i wish i could )

This is my favourite "bone crushing HUG" that is super sweet!

And i must say good song choice for sangeet !

Maan specially performed on Tere Mast Mast Do Nain for Geet

Geet specially performed on Tum Jo Aaye Zindagi Mein for Maan

Lovely choice, and much appropriate for eachother! so perfect!

So now let me give you the score review ..

part 1 - 10/10 ❤️

part 2 - 100/100

part 3 - 1000/1000

part 4 - 10,000/10000

part 5 - do i need to say it ? i think you got it by now 😆

OMG can i just add, your last part totally killed me, the PICS were just... !

I honestly enjoyed reading this OS, i'm not saying to make you happy or feel good about yourself.. i am saying it because it's the truth! And wait... this is your FIRST OS.. Fricking Impressive !

This OS Refreshed my memory of Maaneet, now i know why i loved that serial, it was cute, funny, and passionate love +romance !

Half way through this you were thinking of skipping to the end of my comment ! hahaha good news.. this is the end of my comment. Now you officially think i am CRAZY for REAL. 🤣

BTW this is not long at all, i wish to write more but i will save those words for your other OS

Lub you too much.

hope you don't get too freaked out by me.. 🤣

Originally posted by: MaanGeet_GurTi

OMG Pooojaaa..!!!! u just made my OS a blockbuster man

I LOVE U TOOO very much 🤗

cant believe u actually wrote this much, this is d longest comment/essay i hav ever got

i love u tooo.. dont worry i aint freaked out cuz i love u as ,uch 😉

🤗

aww superb SS wahiii & i love the way Maan was noticing geet at road side...