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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Its awesome update dear... loved it...😆
Luvd Vicky ... He is so sweet...😃
Finally ... some Maaneet moments...😳
Waiting for Something dreamy...😍



Edited by singh24 - 13 years ago
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awesome update
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Part 21

Maan was busy for the rest of the day and could not spend some moments with geet. Geet was upset with him as it was their first day after their confession but could not say anything as she knew Maan worshipped his work.

Geet was a bit angry on Maan as he was to busy and geer had finished her wok early. But as Maan being busy he could not give her enough time. She just wondered here and there.

In Maan's Cabin.

Geet: Maan.. der ho rahi hai, ghar chale.

Maan: thodi der aur geet.

Geet: kabse yehi ek baat sun rahi hoon. Chalo main Vicky ke ssath ghar chali jathi hoon. Aap apna kaam kijiye, vaise bi ap bahut busy ho.

Maan: ummm?

She gets irritated by his answer. Vicky comexs to the cabin.

Vicky: geet tu ghar aa rahi hai mere saath ya bro ka wait kar rahi ho.

Geet: koi fayda nahi hai Vicky, main tumare saath chali aati hoon. Maan tho waise bi bahut busy hai.

Vicky: so lets go. Bro main aur geet ghar chale jathe hai. Aap apna kaam khatam karke aye.

Maan: ummm?

Vicky and geet leaves to go when maan shouts.

Maan: rokho geet. where are you going.

Geet: main gahr jaa rahi hoon.

Maan: tum nahi jaa sakthi. I need your help.

Geet: Mr. Khuranna if you have forgotten then I would like to remind you tat I don't work for you but for Singhania's and as I have finished my work for the project I would like to go.

Maan: Geet I said you cant go.

Vicky: Bro don't worry I will reach har safe.

Maan: Vicky tum ja sakthe ho aur geet tum chup chap baitho yaha.

Geet: Par maan main thak juki hoon.

Maan: Vicky I said you go.

Vicky leaves and geet gets frustrated and comes back to her sit.

Geet (ST): Dekha babaji khud mujhe yaha baithakar apna kaam kar rahe hai. yeh nahi ki chalo geet yaha hai thou she thodi baat kare par MSK ko tho sirf apna kaam diktha hai, Pata nahi kis manhoos gadhi mein ise pyar ho gaya tha. Ab jhel tho inhe geet, sab tumari galthi thi. Chup chap kaam khatam hone ke baad ghar nahi jaa sakthi thi..

Maan: Hogayi tumari Complain khatm tho hum jaa sakthe hai.

Geet: Complaint.. main kya kar rahi thi.

Maan: geet yeh tum bi achi tarah janthi ho kit um kya kar rahi thi. Ab apna muh bandh karo aur chalo, der ho rahi hai.

Geet: ab aapko der ho rahi hai, aur tab kya jab main wait kar rahi thi.

Maan droves the car towards the vincity of their farmhouse and tats when geet noticed it.

Geet: Maan hum gahr jaa rahe the na tho phir farmhouse kyu aaye ho.

Maan: heve patience geet. hum ghar chale jayege. Par yaha toda kaam hai.

Geet: Farmhouse pe kausa kaam hai aur who bi itni late. Kya baat hai maan aap kuch chupa rahe ho.

Maan: geet thodi der ke liye chup nahi reh sakthi kya.

Maan hold geet's hand andd takes her inside the farmhouse. the farmhouse was decorated with red and white roses favourite of Maan anf Geet. There were curtains flowing down. To give it raomantic look it was lighted with scented candles over with noother light source. The moon light was giving it a more romantic look with cool breeze coming from the open windows. Geet kept staring at the room with her eyes full of love. She now understood why maan was ignoring her for the rest of the evening. She turned to see Maan who was busy staring at her.

Geet: Maan yeh sab.

Maan: its for you my love. I wanted to spend some quality time with you so..

Geet:par yeh sab karne ki kya jarrurat thi Maan.

Maan: Jantha hoon geet ki koi jarrurat nahi thi par I wanted to make this ordinary evening special for you. Darr lag raha the ki tumhe pasand ayega ya nahi.

Geet: aap yeh kaise soch sakthe hai maan ki aapki koi cheez mujhe pasand na aye. Its beautiful Maan. Thanks a lot.

Geet comes and hugs maan tight. She felt some unknown tears in her eyes and quivkly wiped them as she did not wanted Maan to see them. She stood there in the same position fo sometime. Geet feltherself in air and before she could understand it Maan scooped her in his arms and started to walk.

Geet: Maan yeh aap kya kar rahe hai. chodeye mujhe.

Maan keeps quite and walks. He reaches near the couch and places her on it. She makes herself comfortable and maan moves near the home theathre screen. He puts on the screebn and here geet was thinking as to wat maan was doing.

Geet: Maan yeh sab kya hai.

Maan: have patience dear. Tum khud hi dekh lo ki yeh kya hai.

As the images started to be seen geet was shocked and surprised to see her pictures from her childhood and recent ones. There were her some photos with Vicky, prem, arjun, maan, annie and her family and the khuranna's. Maan had captured her life moments. She was surprised to know tat maan would do something like this. She knew tat he was a man of few words and never expressed himself to anyone. Geet turned to say something but maan told her to be quite and concentrate on the screen. She saw tat after each picture of hers there was a sweet message expressing maan's feelings

Once upon a time something happened to me, it was the sweetest thing, that ever could be. It was a fantasy , a dream come true. It was the day I felt for you.

The only shelter I find in this big world is your heart. For the world, you are someone. But for someone you are the world.

I was merely existing before I met you. The heart started beating only when you became a part of my life.

Your smile gives me a satifaction, that you are happy with me, and I just want to love you, so that you and I become "WE".

If my love for you ws mere drops of water, I would love you as much an entire ocean.

Your love is the sweet dream I always had. And now that I have you, I wish I never wake up so that this dream may never break.

The best compliment that you have ever given to me is the feeling of oneness that I get whenever I am with you. Thanks for being the best part of my life.

I don't love you for the way you look, I don't love you for the way you dress up, the only simple reason, for which I do, is the wonderful soul that's, within you.

Love was a simple English word for me till the time "you" happened to me. Now love for me is your name, your soul, your eyes. In a word, love to me is "YOU".

Lets create ouw own utopia where there is just you and me and our eternal love blossoming. On this day, I wanna tell you that you are the one I LOVE. The one I wanna grow old with. The one I wanna be till eternity.

I LOVE YOU GEET

Geet had tears reading the lines which expresses his love. She knew that Maan was a man of few words. Everytime when she felt like she knew him he utterly failed her with his actions. She could feel the deep love hidden in his heart for her. The love which is beyod imagination. The love which could not be measured.

Geet: Maan????.

Maan: ssh geet aaj kuch nahi. Geet I don't know how to express my love my feelings for you. I don't know how to put my love in words and tell you. Just simply tried to give a meaning in this words for the way I feel for you. I tried to exolain the depth of my love for you without knowing tat will you understand the meaning of it. Geet I don't know how to make you feel special but just tried to make it special by expressing my love with words. I wanted to make this evening special for you just as the way you like without thinking tat wil my Mishti like it or not but my heart felt tat you will.

Geet:( cups his face?) Maan this is the best gift I have ever got in my life. I feel my love is very timid in front of your pure love. This words are just not mere words or lines but the most precious of all as their depict your true and pure love for me which I will treasure for my whole life till eternity

Geet: Haath mein leke mera haath yeh wada karlo,

Ab na chorogey mera saath yeh wada karlo!

Tum na Badlogey badalthe hue Mausam ki tarah,

Beetney wali hai barsaat yeh wada karlo!

Log halat badaltey hi badal jate hain,

Tum na badalogey riwayat yeh wada karlo!

Tum tho wadey bhi Bhula detey ho aksa,

Ab na Bhulogey koi baat yeh wada karlo!

Maan: I promise you that I will share all my thoughts and feelings with you?

I promise you that I will understand everything that you do?.

I promise you that I will completey be honest with you?

I promise you that I will laugh and cry with you?

I promise you that I will share my life with you?

But most important of all I promise you that I will love you forever?.

Geet hugs Maan tightly and as they make promises to love abd be there for each other till eternity. Geet could not control her emotions and starts crying..

Maan: geet don't cry love. I cant bear your tears. They are to precious for me geet.

Geet: no Maan they are just not tears but tears of happiness. Let them flow today as I had holded them for yers. Let they enjoy this happiness and moment.

Maan kisses her eyelids one by one. He slowly places soft kisses on her face. Geet slowly wraps her arms around his neck when she felt his breadth on her lips. She slowly parts them for him and Maan places a soft peck and withdraws himself before loosing. With the loss of his lips geet opens her eyes to see him staring at her and quickly hides herself in his chest feeling shy.

Maan: khana khane chale.

Geet: hmmm?

Maan then carries geet towards the table where there were geet;s favourite dishes placed. Geet was amused to see her favourites even though she knew that Maan hardly evn eats spicy food. She was delighted to have her dinner for the first time with her Maan. Maan staed feeding her and geet feeded him. slowly after wat seems to be an hour they finished their first dinner together.

They still had some time before leaving back so they decided to sit on the couch. Geet was sitting in his lap with her head rested on his chest. Maan was holding her tight with his rams and nuzzling her neck inhaling her aroma. They were enjoying their moments when geet suddenly felt Maans hand caresiing her waist up and down. Geet was feeling goosebumps but still controlled herself. Maan started placing spot wet kisses on her neck where he could see her bare skin and slowly slided her dupatta. Get caught her duppatta before it was down but Maan pulled it away from her in one move.

Maan turned geet around so tat now she was facing him. he looked at her for a moment before palcing kisses on her face, starting from her eyes, cheeks, nose and everywhere. Geet had closed her eyes tightly.

Maan: open your eyes geet.

Geet nodes her head in a no.

Maan: love open your eyes. I want to see the same passion in your eyes as in my eyes. I wanr you to feel the same you as I feel for you. I want to see you open your eyes Misthi.

Geet: Maan please..

Maan: ssh geet. open your eyes and with this he bits her skin near the neck.

Geet gasps and opens her eyes. Maan looks at her almond eyes having the same passion and desire hidden with her shyness. She feels shy at the way Maan was looking and hides herself in his chest. Maan slowly moves his hand on her back which makes geet hold his shirt tightly. Unknowing geet opens his shirt buttons and touches his bare skin on chest. She starts placing kisses on his chest which makes Maan bturn more aggressive by feeling her lips on his chest. He grabs her by her hair and places his lips on her soft petals.

Geet could not match his passion but soon responded to his demanding kiss by giving him an entry into her mouth, Maan started tasting her sweetness and their tongues played their game. Maan slowly placed geet on counch on her back without breaking the kiss. Geet in a trance of passion removed Maan's shirt off his body and as Maan increased his pressure on her lips and body she digged her nails into his skin holding him tight and letting him know her desires. Maan moved his hand towards her back and opened her string of the kurti slidding her dress off her shoulders.

He caressed her bare skin on the shoulders placing kisses and lingering his tongue on it. He bit her leaving a mark on her skin marking her as his forever. As soon as geet felt his teeth biting her she could not control herself anymore and pulled Maan and smashed her lipd on his mouth giving a forceful soul seering kiss. Maan could feel her passion in the kiss and slowly his lead his free han inside her kurti. His hand was feeling her skin on stomack and slowly moved back where his fingers played with her hook of the bra. He unhooked it and at that with tat geet came out of the moment.

Geet: Maan.. please

Maan who was so lost in the moment did not understand want she meant by it but as soon as he saw her eyes he came out of it and looked at geet struggling with her dress and covering her upper body which was exposed due to slidding of her kurti off the shoulders. Maan once got up in sitting position and put on his shirt after finding in lying on the floor. Once he as done he helped geet with her dress. When his eyes met hers he saw some tears which geet was hiding from him.

Maan: geet m sorry. I could not control myself. M really sorry. I did not even realize tat you were noty ready for it and forced myself on you. M sorry and he turned his face the otherside unable to face her.

Geet: Maan?

Maan: no geet m sorry. Mujhe apne aap par control rakhna tha. Ish tarah apni jazbaat mein behna nahi tha. M sorry.

Geet: Maan please app aise baatein mat kijiye. Mujhe khushi hai ki aap apni khwahishein mere saath share kar rahe the. Its not tat m happy but m really happy Maan. His was the best moment where I felt you so close to my heart. I cant explain wat I feel now Maan. I also have The same passion and desire as you have in you eyes for me. I loved every moment when you touched me Maan.you have marked me as yours forever and no one can ever make me feel the way you make me when you touch me.

Maan: Geet phir ye ansu kyu..

Geet: just because I stopped you Maan. I m sorry for that.

Maan: geet.. tumne mujhe rokhkar kuch galat nahi kiya aur haan I m happy tat you have stopped me at the right time otherwise I don't know how far I would have gone in my passion. I swear geet you make go crazy for you. I cant control myself from toucjhing you love. I feel to cros all my limits with you and make you as mine forever and ever so tat noone can take you away from me.

Geet: Maan I was yours, m only yours and will ever remain as yours only.

Maan: geet ek baat kahu..

Geet: hmmm

Maan: geet hum shaadi karle. I cant wait for you anymore love.

Geet: maan even I want to marry you and be yours as soon as possible but I want to to live some moments with you which I had dreamt. I want to feel the feeling of being with you. I want to live my three years which I spent away from you. I want to live the emotions of being in love with you.

Maan: love? as you wish but not for long dear.

Geet: Mr. MSK jaisa main chahungi waisa hi hoga. Samjhe aap.

Maan: Ms. Handa don't bi over confidient in this matter. It wont take me a second for making you Mrs. MSK forever and no one can stop me so better don't try my patience in this. I have already controlled myself a lot.

Geet: acha, tho dekhte hai aap kay akr sakthe hai and with this she kiss him a kiss on lips and runs away before he catches her.

Maan: geet ab tum nahi bachogi?

Maan runs behind her and holds her hand before she escapes more. He grabs her by her waist and places arough kiss on her lips. Geet could not hold herself and soon the kiss turns to a paasionate one. After wat seem to be a long kiss they break apart for air.

Precap: Maaneet talks to Vicky, pari, prem and heer.

Edited by shoba.dessai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Awesome update dear...Loved it...😊
Brilliant confession of love...really so touchy...

Love was a simple English word for me till the time "you" happened to me. Now love for me is your name, your soul, your eyes. In a word, love to me is "YOU".

A very dreamy date...😍

Hyyyeee... tumne to aaj hamaari ghanti baja di dear...☺️ ☺️

Thanku ...


Edited by singh24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Once upon a time something happened to me, it was the sweetest thing, that ever could be. It was a fantasy , a dream come true. It was the day I felt for you.The only shelter I find in this big world is your heart. For the world, you are someone. But for someone you are the world.I was merely existing before I met you. The heart started beating only when you became a part of my life.Your smile gives me a satifaction, that you are happy with me, and I just want to love you, so that you and I become "WE"If my love for you ws mere drops of water, I would love you as much an entire ocean.Your love is the sweet dream I always had. And now that I have you, I wish I never wake up so that this dream may never break.The best compliment that you have ever given to me is the feeling of oneness that I get whenever I am with you. Thanks for being the best part of my life.

I don't love you for the way you look, I don't love you for the way you dress up, the only simple reason, for which I do, is the wonderful soul that's, within youLove was a simple English word for me till the time "you" happened to me. Now love for me is your name, your soul, your eyes. In a word, love to me is you Lets create ouw own utopia where there is just you and me and our eternal love blossoming. On this day, I wanna tell you that you are the one I LOVE. The one I wanna grow old with. The one I wanna be till eternity.

Beautiful and so touchy confession ever read . the line with black , make me to feel weak and emotional .tears dwelled while reading . for me indeed a touchy update . waiting for next .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

Once upon a time something happened to me, it was the sweetest thing, that ever could be. It was a fantasy , a dream come true. It was the day I felt for you.The only shelter I find in this big world is your heart. For the world, you are someone. But for someone you are the world.I was merely existing before I met you. The heart started beating only when you became a part of my life.Your smile gives me a satifaction, that you are happy with me, and I just want to love you, so that you and I become "WE"If my love for you ws mere drops of water, I would love you as much an entire ocean.Your love is the sweet dream I always had. And now that I have you, I wish I never wake up so that this dream may never break.The best compliment that you have ever given to me is the feeling of oneness that I get whenever I am with you. Thanks for being the best part of my life.

I don't love you for the way you look, I don't love you for the way you dress up, the only simple reason, for which I do, is the wonderful soul that's, within youLove was a simple English word for me till the time "you" happened to me. Now love for me is your name, your soul, your eyes. In a word, love to me is you Lets create ouw own utopia where there is just you and me and our eternal love blossoming. On this day, I wanna tell you that you are the one I LOVE. The one I wanna grow old with. The one I wanna be till eternity.

Beautiful and so touchy confession ever read . the line with black , make me to feel weak and emotional .tears dwelled while reading . for me indeed a touchy update . waiting for next .

Thanks dear. It was a difficult for me to get words to put down my own feelings for maaneet as i have started to believe in love:-).
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
awesome
love it
love the way he confessed
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24

Awesome update dear...Loved it...😊

Brilliant confession of love...really so touchy...

Love was a simple English word for me till the time "you" happened to me. Now love for me is your name, your soul, your eyes. In a word, love to me is "YOU".

A very dreamy date...😍

Hyyyeee... tumne to aaj hamaari ghanti baja di dear...☺️ ☺️

thanks for youe lovely words dear.. hope you enjoy my next update but i think u have to wait as i havent yet written it.. waitingto get the righ words

Thanku ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update. maan's confession part beautifully written.

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