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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: valli22

its true most of the girls sacrifices love for family..

but they cant forget their love either till their death..
i think geet must be married now n here with some bitter experience with husband or a widow..

neenga epdi ipadi story ah munadiyae guess panidurenga story ah first aye... i have to work hard to impress you😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: niticool

WHY THIS KOLAVERI 😆 ( UR SS TITLE )


YEN PA ???

ONNU UNGA FF LA ELLARAIYUM GEET AH HATE PANNA VAKIREENGA ILLA MAAN AH HATE PANN VAKAREENGA

NICE ONE

POOR MAAN

CONT .S OON


enakae theriyala...why this happening???😕

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatema_007

i really liked the concept of this story,,

could u plz pm this 2 me??



am glad you liked it..
yeah sure from now on you will get pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
awesome update
i m sure some solid reason wil be thr behind geet thts y she told evrything to maan
add me to ut PM list
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
are yaar

pona ffla maana hate panna vacha

ippo geetA HATE PANNA VAKIRA

GEETAH BADAH KATTINENAA NEE BALI AADU THAN😆

WAITING FOR MAANEET ENCOUNTER
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
looking forward to boss and secretary meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
she broke his heart...but i think she was also hurt for saying all that to him...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3
PART 4



he can hear the giggling and laughing sound far away from him'

which is mesmerizing him he knows its very familiar to him.. very close to his heart..

Its geet voice..her laugh her giggle he know that very well.. she is some where near him he can feel her sent.. she is very near him he can feel her presence but can't find out as its almost covered with mist and fog where he can 't even see the face near him...

for some time there is now sound only silent but its not peaceful its deadly silence he is terrified...

Latter again he can hear her voice but now its not in happy which giggled and laughed a moment ago now she is crying bitterly her voice is crying bitterly

Maan' she is screaming while crying..

Geet where are you?

Maan go away from here its not safe for you... please go away.. she is shouting and more over her pain is clearly visible in her voice he want to found her hold her save her and take away from all those struggles she is facing right now'

Geet.. while shouting he turned to the direction from where she is shouting...

now the mist the fog cleared a little bit that he can see her face alone..

The sight in front of him was she is dying some one has killed her...she turned once and meet his gaze once and smiled through her eyes..after a moment she is death her eyes closed automatically...she is lying in the floor lifelessly'.

He broke into pieces seeing her like that in front of his eyes some one has killed her

He went near her and try to cup her face to feel her'.

But all of a sudden she her life less body got disappeared from there in front of his eyes before he touch'

GEEEt he shouted and jerked from his sleep'

Its 3 am he is sleeping and dreaming about her its usual for maan to dream about geet all the night.. but its strange this dream is strange for him'.

He once for all feared and scared of loosing her forever and screamed out in fear out of sleep'

It almost took nearly an half an hour for him get out of that dream..

His eyes are almost filled thinking about his dream..after that he made more twists and turns to get some sleep but unfortunately he didn't get that' he can't able to sleep after that scary dream of loosing his geet..

Any ways geet is not with him

he hate her for choosing her family instead of him'

he hate for leaving him like this forever'

but really his heart says that she is alive and will come back to him one day.. but all at sudden her dead and he not even able to touch her life less body it hurts him'

It tore him into pieces'

#May be its just a dream but what if some thing really happens to her'

What ever I don't want her to suffer I don't want her to die.. I don't want to hear her painful cries screams and shouts...

Where ever she do she choose...I just want to see her happy#'

After doing his thai chi he came out with a fresh mind and got ready to go to office'

All these days he is longing to see geet but today its very desperate to see her he want to just have a glimpse of her he want to see her only once...

while going in the car to KC he called the detective to get information about her'its being 6 months He is searching her through various detective agencies but he didn't get any information about her'

At last some one said that she is married and gone to Canada' but that information is not sure where her family in HP is also missing before 6 months and no one can find them not even the villagers know any hint about that family'

And no one know any thing about them'

Now too he didn't any get information about her not about that family'

He is disturbed after didn't get any information about her he is lost and fumed at the detective agency in the phone and even at the driver'.

Where are you geet?

Where were you?

Where I will find you now geet?

I hope nothing will happen to you of that sort'.

Oh' what is this..

Why am thinking this? Nothing will happen to her..She will he happy with her family'

With her parents.. may be with her man-- may be with her husband-- may be with her kids'

May be she will be the happiest person right now..

This may be word kills him.. her man-- her husband --her kids her parents'.

#When I started thinking about her's

When I started separating her' she is always mine

She is not with me right now..but no one even she itself can't separate me from her in my thoughts no one can separate me from her in my dreams'not even in my dreams#'he stressed those last words thinking about that dream..

He wiped the drops which is about to fell down from his eyes and straighten him self and his tie..


When he reached KC as usual he turned back to reality his own den he enter the office with an attitude as usual in his style with out answering any one'.

when he is about to open his cabin door its opened by some one else and all a sudden there is a mess and some one bumps in to him with a hand full of papers which now flying and the person is about to fall on the ground with out seeing the face he held her by holding her waist and catch her before she fell down on the floor all that happen in the fraction of second that he is lost in his own thoughts about his morning dream and didn't seen the person coming in front of him from his own cabin'

When is seen her face he lost there still he can't believe his eyes

#is it she here in my arms now?'

Is am still dreaming?

am still dreaming# he can't believe what's before his eyes.. till now he want to see her to assure she is fine but now she is in his arms he can't believe his own arms which is feeling her right now'

He can see that in her eyes too that she is too lost even she can't believe this now'

#This means she don't know that this KC belongs to me then why she is here'

What she is doing here?

Why she came here? From her eyes its clear she didn't expect me here but why the hell she is here? if not to see me then why she is here?#..

Lots of questions is roaming inside his head as well as in her mind'

A knock sound in the door got them back and they both straighten them self

Geet what you did?

Aadi is fuming at her but in a soft voice that he is dare to rise his voice before msk'

Wo.. mein 'wo'. She atlast came into sense and frame sentence

mein' I came here to place MD's schedule for today in his table '

He turned his head alone to see her face where she is seeing some where else and answering'

#This means she is my new secretary

Why she need job now that too in my company what she want's from me i already gave my life hear and every thing she asks for me what now...#

sir'.Geet is our new employee your secretary aadi give a formal introduction'

Geet our MD..Mr.MK'

She now turned to see his gaze'

Both didn't have any words to utter now as they itself in the shock'

At a sudden geet try to leave the cabin with the mixture of expressions shock, scare, fear ,guilty'

Aadi you may leave maan ordered...

Geet' he called out' she jerked as its very harsh and almost roar to her..

It's a pleasure for him to call this name after one year'its pleasure to his own hears and at a second his heart jumps out of joy to hear her name

She stunned and stand still there in that room'

Who will clean this mess? He pointed towards the papers which scattered in the floor'

She seen down immediately and try to pick up those papers but instead of picking her hands shiver and she cant pick even a single piece of paper properly'

After seeing her plight he came near her and picked those papers one by one and hand it over to her'

This is the first time he seen her gaze as well as she.. there is lot and lots of things they are sharing now after one year with out opening there mouths..

She took those papers from his hands and about to walk out'

Geet' he called her again' this time very softly lovably'

Geet'how are you?

She can't speak.. words are not coming out from her mouth'

But tears started to flow from her eyes'she controlled to the core not to cry in front of him and went to her cabin with out answering him'

The same plight in him too...

she didn't spoke it kills him...

form the morning he is waiting to only to her but after seeing her its not enough for him..he want to talk to her...


He wants all answers from her right now will he get those answers from her..


part 5

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Precap::::maan shouts at geet...

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sorry for silly mistakes..

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
maneet meet what happened to geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
maan wants to now hw s she..!
but here she s not even conversing with him...
i hope she s not married..!

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