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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
part 2
oh no u dont...
dont even dream to separate them...
Maan is powerful and influential then why the hell he cant convince her family...
poor Geet shes gonna ruin her life...
and hope Maan stops that...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
awesome update dear...
loved it...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
oh gosh geet chose her family over maan 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awesome part dear👏
loved it
plz cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

part 2

Part 3

After one year'

Maan is in his gym practicing thai ch in his black vest but his mind is not in showing any interest in that it is busily roaming around the words which geet utter him at there last meet'

Maan its over...

But this the there last meet which make him more anger on her till after one year------- no..

The last words she spoke to him was

Sorry Mr.khurana you are mistaken I don't love you...

why me no one else will love you...

you can love only your self...

Just get out of my house now

I don't want to see your face again

Get the hell out of my life...

He was stunned by the words just a moment she utter in front of him... he strongly believes she is lying...that she didn't love me is a lie his hear says... her eyes and the tears she shed a min before says that... he left her hands which he held till now he stopped in the place right there with out a moment where before few minutes he is dragging her to the door by holding her hands with that words he stopped there.. actually stunned by her words.. his legs are not moving mind is not working at a sudden moment he felt a hard hand punched him on his cheeks then he came out of trance that brij has punched him where he stand still with out reacting to the punches brij gave him...

its nothing to him before the words she utter just now..

his eyes where locked on her its not moving away from her '

After a second he came to senses when briji lift him by holding his thavez which is tied in his neck at a fraction of seconds it reached ground maan gather his strength and sense back after getting that in his hands and now gave pay back to every punch he get from him..

at a sudden he found some one slapped him he lift his head to found that is darji...
When darji slapped him he is about to slap him but in a fraction of seconds geet came in front of him with a folded hands and said

Please go away...

Did you hear that I don't love you...

I will go with my parents decision if its hell or heaven I don't care about anything apart from them... they are every thing for me..

please you go away ...

she said that in between her sob and tears...

he left from there silently with out thinking about any thing else...

In KM maan practicing thai chi where as his mind roam around that day when she neglected him the one whom he loved most neglected him that to with in a fractions of seconds she said go away from my life so easily in front of him this kills him till now'

That words changed him completely she didn't know how much her words wounded him now he is not the maan who loved some one or loved by some one he is a rough, tough, angry, young,success full business man'

His phone rang he come out of his thoughts and attend the phone which brought by servant'

Hello sir...some media people..We want to take one small interview of yours sir..'

sorry I don't have time for that now..

Sir only for 10 mins not more than that..Sir if you are free now can we ?'

Ok be here in 30 mins I don't have more time'

Ok sir'

After he got ready came down the steps where there is a media people all around in the corridor of KM waiting for maan..

Sir first of all congrat...s you are the very young success full business man who got the number one business man of the year award'

He nodded in response not more than that'

The reporter knows very well his answers will be not more than hmm and yes so she continued'

that as usual questions about his success his feel about getting that award went on he

Sir I know you might have already answerd so many interviews so you are tired of that usual questions... she paused for a while and then continued

So I want to ask some personal questions if you don't mind'

Hmm..

Did you love some one?

He didn't respond'

So it means yes..

Who is behind your success? Is she?

Yeah she is behind this huge success he didn't show any interest in other things after she left him... he can't bear her seperation so he just divert him self from that heart breaking incident and concentrate in his business which leads to the great success now but is he is really happy about it?'

This success means some thing to him now..' the answers is big NO.

He is not at all happy with this award name fame popularity either his mind is not in peace with out her..with out his geet..

He utter those last words little bit louder'

So her name is geet right'

He just get up from there and walked away with out uttering words he don't want to give any gossiping news to media right now..'

He left for campaign after that lots of media interviews and award functions he don't want to remain in that crowded environment for a while so he left city for few days

When he return he had lots of pending works to be done so he came straight to office as usual his office is maintaining pin drop silent and every one started wishing him he didn't respond to any one and with that attitude he went to his cabin with shoving his fingers in his pant packet and other hand is holding his cell phone.. after he settle in his chair aadi came in with a file and asked his signature'

What is this?

wo..si..si..sir'the selected candidates appointment order which needs your sign..

He remembers before leaving for campaign he fired his secretary for being irresponsible in maintaining the files'

Its almost 15 the secretary has changed for him in this year he almost fired every one for being irresponsible for not be regular and perfect '

Its like his hobby every month to conduct interview for his secretary

This time that job done by adi and some senior staffs'so he didn't want to check further details simply he signed the papers with out reading it..

Aadi is there any important meeting today

No sir'

Ok then I will come tomorrow

Ji sir'

Saying that he left KC and drive straightly to hospital to see dadi'

She is remain in the bed for these past 6 months before that itself she is very weak and that didn't affect her so much but now doctor asked her to take complete rest where maan advised her to stay in hospital itself where in KM she will always remain alone and no one is there to take care of her'

He went to her room'

she slowly opened her eyes and called him near her..

Ji dadi maa.

he came near and hold her hands with his both hands

How was you campign

Good'. How you doing dadi maa..Did you need some thing..

No beta am getting every thing and more over I got more friends here life is going smooth instead of staying alone in that mansion I am loved to stay here with more people around'

He now clearly knows what she will say next'

it's the same dialogue of dadi when ever he came to see her'

The one thing I hate here was the medicines and those strips injections'

Dadi'he smiled a bit at her actions and immediately changed into his stiff face soon

Maan beta why can't you marry and bring one bahu for me in KM for my company'

He didn't react and stares at dadi'

She knows what is hurting him inside and she don't like to speak about that but some times as a caring dadi she wants him to marry and settle with his wife and kids'

I found a girl too'

She continued after a long pause

He still looked in her eyes'

She is the staff nurse here who take good care of me if you meet her once...am sure you will marry her.. can I call her now'

He gets up from the chair.'

I know you maan.. you didn't able to forget about her but how many days you will stay like this I want you to forget g '

Before she complete he walked out of that place' he didn't want to hear about that

he don't want to hear that name either'

He hates her for going away from him

He hates her for making him like this

He hates her for doing this to him'

He hates her to the core'

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Precap:::: as every one know now his new secretary is geet...there first encounter in his office..

part 4

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Sorry for small spelling, grammatical, hidi mistakes...

bear with me for all this... i will try to correct my self if possible...


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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
awesome update loved it
what has geet made him
she has made him a robot😭😭
i hate geet for doing this to maan😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update loved it
what has geet made him
she has made him a robot😭😭
i hate geet for doing this to maan😭😭


from now on all going to hate geet till the end...
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: nishha


from now on all going to hate geet till the end...



yes she has done a thing that she deserves hatred but still a small place of heart also feel sbad for her main culprit r her family😡

waise when r u updating th enext part 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079



yes she has done a thing that she deserves hatred but still a small place of heart also feel sbad for her main culprit r her family😡

waise when r u updating th enext part 😉


yeah this geet is the reality... many girls are still in oscillation between there love and there family love...😭
at last they decide to sacrifice there love for there family...
that is geet too doing here...😭


don't know may be when i get the story to proceed...😉😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg maan kya se kya bangaya..i really hate geet 4 ths...waitng to knw wat happns next

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