MG$ I Wanna be with you$/part 13/ pg 32&33/15-06. - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it.
wanna read more...
continue soon
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Part 1

Part 2

As usual she didn't meet his eyes'

Please maan speak soon and left this place its not safe for both of us..

He glared and fumed in anger'

Enough geet'enough' tell me what's happening? Why you are not speaking to me and what's this letter all about? He showed her a white paper which she had given to meera before leaving delhi

Maan its over... I already stated every thing clearly there in that letter yet now he want her to speak more this happens today but he hates that now..

What you mean by every thing is over.... he hold her shoulders and pinned in the wall near by I means am nothing to you--- you didn't love me--- don't you wish to share your rest of my life with me as my wife.' he words almost cracked...

Yeah... its true that i loved you.. but now I can't my family didn't accept this.. I have already explained that to you clearly before it self when proposed to me'

yeah she always afraid of some thing when ever he speaks to her he know she loves her family a lot and don't want to hurt them that doesn't matter to him at that time..but when it comes to the commitment marriage it matters a lot..

I will talk to them...I will make them understand..he tried to maintain soft tone.

No its not going to happen now...they wont leave you alive...before you speak...and you already spoke to them and you came to know by now that how they are..'

yeah its the first time when he spoke to geet's darji and claim his hands from them that's the biggest mistake he did... there was a heavy clause between them they don't like maan that too when they came to know that he loves geet they just thrown him out of the house...and also insults his dadi maa... which he can't bear and slapped brij there was almost a war happen at there first meet for maan they are animals who don't have any respect...

Ok then lets elope come with me now we are going to delhi now itself....

I can't maan I can't bring such shame to my family they are having some respect in our village---- I can't do that to them'

Ok then let me speak to them once again and claim you hands come with me now.. he knows its not easy but yet he is not ready to loose her as she said in that letter he can't forget her...

They will kill us before we speak... she said in a fearful tone now..

I damn care about it.. i am ready to face them.. come with me'he hold her hands and almost drag her..

Maan please understand... you know very well what happen to chunny and his lover purender... I don't want that happen to you '

geet nothing will happen to me come with me now...

No they wont leave you alive... You please go away from me forget me.. search some other girl, lover her marry her and live alive happily..

she almost cried while telling that.. she now didn't want any thing other than his safety she was happy that he is alive some where that's enough for her to live rest of her life...

Sh*** he want to say that but he didn't...how my life will be happy with out geet.. i just want to die with her don't want to live with out her...

but she is adamant not ready to face the problem he chides why she is so weak why she is not read to face the problems why she is afraid of every thing... why she is saying me to forget her is that easy for her to forget me and lead her life with some other man...is she is ready for her marriage with other man... that thought kills him he pushed his hairs behind and turns his back towards her...

Is this is your final decision

There is no option

He didn't say any thing and started walking after taking few steps he again turned his face over his shoulder to see her and said

nothing going to change in your life until you stand on your own leg... until you hears your heart until you stop afraid of others and decide to live for you'.

His last words were true but for now she can't decide for her own wish she cant think about her own self now she needs to think about maan his happiness he may not be happy now with her decision but she thinks after some moths or may be years he will forget her one day and choose his own life and his love --- his girl'

At the same time she didn't want to damage her family values by eloping with maan' after a deep breath she says to her self it's the only good for every one it's a good decision for maan to her family but what about her... she didn't think about herself Is she will be happy with her own decision of staying away from maan who loves her the most in the world'

Now she didn't have time to think about her self she has wants to think about others mainly maan but not about her own'

she stand still there until his zeep disappears in the road with in the dust...as it moves far away from her eyes she shed a drops of tears which she held till now and lost in the way he went...


Is this decision going to be her biggest mistake in her life...

part 3

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
oh so she choose her family than maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
nice update she doesn't choose maan ab kya hoga
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh poor maan!
she s not even ready to try to get her luv..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice part dear bt very painful one..
So geet is afraid of hr family and said maan to 4get her that easily..ab kya hoga?
Waitng 4 next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update...
but very painful...😭
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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y enpa intha thyagam..she will marry someone else n her life will become mystery..
again the fate will make maneet face each other...i thinkso😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey congrats nisha loved soon continue...a college based love story i think u will show their future life as settled in job etc...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
simply superb...
moi wondering what's gonna happen now...

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