Eternal Return: Ch 9-16 summary; 26/July/2015; pg 101 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Ofcourse, read all chapters...but on phone. Thats why you didnt see me there !

I must say you did a pretty good job with the light hearted romance on IPKKNDin Vertigo... it had a few snatches from the soap and yet a distinctive feel of its own..

And you know what, reading that, one can never be sure that its you...the language is very simple and so is the treatment to the story ! Kudos to your versatility girl ...

I have always loved your Maan-Geet office stories and though I wish you would write something similar to Vertigo for them, I am convinced that the day you mention the "LOVE" word between them, something will snap about how I relate to Maaneet in your stories and somehow the anticipation I have will end. So its better you write either light hearted comedy or intense romance between Maan and Geet😆 Are there any in the pipeline ?

I have said everything about your other stories and none about this one. The truth is, I have catching up to do ! I will be back 😊



Thank you! Yes, I have retained the characters as they were at the origin of the series and using almost similar storyline. I wanted to keep it simple so that I wouldn't trip and fall and get away from the way I write. Intense romance? Seriously? You are on my thread not Devi's 😆

Sure, catch up and come back soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

She gets to be Reid? I wanted to be Reid...no fair!


I am loving this FF already 😃. Especially when Geet said- been watching too many procedurals, have ya? (talk about being tongue in cheek😆)

Update soon, Sooks!

So is Maan's dad the murderer? or is that too easy (and you would hardly do easy)...so what have I missed?



Well...she is not very much like Reid but yeah...there are similarities... He he...yes, I watch way too many procedurals and when I started reading textbooks, I realized how off the serials are - especially the speed in which they solve the case 😊

Maan as murderer? Wonderful.

Maybe we should have a thread/poll dedicated to adding names and hypothesizing.. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
like ur ff..
awesm updt
waitin 4 d nxt one!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

hmm...interesting...

i actually forgot what i wanted to say when u mentioned Bones...i love that one...😳

n now i really dont know what to write...as for mr guha...he looks as a suspect...well when any1 is murdered...the first suspects r always the family members...n in this case...it is quite obvious that he would be the prime suspect...but i will not draw conclusions...as i know from past experience...especially in ur stories...that nothing is what it seems...😆

btw...love the understanding...the signals that they share...quite fascinating...but i guess when u work for a long time with some1...u know what the other one wants ...here wants refers to when u solve cases together...i am not sure whether i am making any sense...🤔...if not...just ignore it...😆..i will reduce my blabbering the next time...😳...😆

I personally have nothing against Bones since I was a fan of the show before. I even have few OS written on Booth and Bones 😊 But after season 2 it went on a separate tangent and the levy they get (along with Castle) is quite mind boggling. I lost interest when the characters became stagnant in Bones.

I wrote about those 'signals' because it is something evident in all aspects of our lives - especially with ones we work for a long time and close quarters. It is my personal experience where in my colleague and friend notices the way I react during meetings - example, if I remove my specs - I don''t care two hoots about the topic, If he leans back and drums his fingers - he knows something that the presenter definitely doesn't know.
If you start observing, you will notice these traits in your friends too :-)


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Answer to previous:

1) Well that's how far the pop culture psychology go. It could have been extreme stress which has made him remember
yes it can be...but the stress can also be induced seeing the same situation...n continuously thinking abt it...as it relates to the similar murder 2 months ago...
Quite possible.

Or like suspects, is he imagining things??
this...i really dont know...mayb...but there is something missing...

2) Do tell me please...😊
no way...coz what i am thinking is ..i think wrong...so no guessing in the PUNISHMENT area...
Oh, come on! That's not fair. There is no such thing as right and wrong at the moment...

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Sookie- If you could really catch criminals as fast as you can in shows...there'd be none left!

Could it be the guy who Mrs.Guha was sleeping with or is that to simple? It never ends up being those who we think.

I bet it'll end with some random psychotic milk man who committed the murders 😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
society prepares the crime n the criminal commits it :
(thanx for the pm n nice read.

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part...

I always .loved this investigation part in ur stories.. They seems to b thrilling... N with amazing twists
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Posted: 13 years ago


Most of your questions will be answered in coming chapters, I promise :-)
OH! Which Thai show are you watching? I went on a streak last year and watched a lot of them! Let's see if we have watched something in common :)


Yea I got hooked on Thai Lakrons Last year as well through one of the Threads here in Geet's.

My Fav is Aum and Ann. Watched 3 of his shows, just finished this one 4 Hearts In Mountains-Thara's Himalaya.

I'm going to start the 2nd part of it. It's a series of 4 stories of Quadruplet.

In this show they have shown Aum is the prince and the kingdom he is coming from is more like our culture in a sense dressing is more like us Indians and even I found few Indian words. Over all it was a fun show and interesting.

PS: I have to start reading all the replies that you answer to your readers as I realized you share some views. And one of was some mentioned about Maan's Dad being Killer, but in your reply you mentioned Maan as killer. Cause I already had that doubt which I said indirectly in last comments.

PSS: My friend at work if you remember I mentioned that I shared your Story THWU with my white friend she was hooked on it. She just messaged me asking if there is any more interesting story going with that writer. So here you go perfect timing I must say isn't? Going to share this one with her.

So the recent chapter. Bones..aah My fav and I love bones herself. I remember the convincing of the higher authority to allow her to interrogate the suspects and the people and I love how Booth has to keep her in control not to use her hands and legs. LOL.

The way Geet and Maan work together as working in telepathy, they understand each other. Or rather Geet is on Top she know Maan very well. With her profession I think she has mastered that and she is his friends.

Now I don't think too much here as its a 1st interrogation of a husband and a father but as we found out that he knows whom his wife was sleeping with. I believe Maans notion about being punished seems to be clear. Suspecting the Mr Guha on that basis would be too soon that is so obvious though. So then I must say continue please waiting for the next.

Here is our little internal chatting abt your Story:-

Shaheda Patel/opc/... how was it?
Lori Pascoe awesome... I love how the names still remain the same- Geet Maan
Shaheda Patel/opc... Emily
Shaheda Patel/opc... Satya
Shaheda Patel/opc... David
Shaheda Patel/opc... she talks abt bones
Shaheda Patel/opc... hehehehe
Lori Pascoe too funny


Edited by Newdime - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...I see that you are posting a lot on this thread Sooks. :)
So the punishment theory might just be right.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime


Yea I got hooked on Thai Lakrons Last year as well through one of the Threads here in Geet's.

My Fav is Aum and Ann. Watched 3 of his shows, just finished this one 4 Hearts In Mountains-Thara's Himalaya.

I'm going to start the 2nd part of it. It's a series of 4 stories of Quadruplet.

In this show they have shown Aum is the prince and the kingdom he is coming from is more like our culture in a sense dressing is more like us Indians and even I found few Indian words. Over all it was a fun show and interesting.

PS: I have to start reading all the replies that you answer to your readers as I realized you share some views. And one of was some mentioned about Maan's Dad being Killer, but in your reply you mentioned Maan as killer. Cause I already had that doubt which I said indirectly in last comments.

PSS: My friend at work if you remember I mentioned that I shared your Story THWU with my white friend she was hooked on it. She just messaged me asking if there is any more interesting story going with that writer. So here you go perfect timing I must say isn't? Going to share this one with her.

So the recent chapter. Bones..aah My fav and I love bones herself. I remember the convincing of the higher authority to allow her to interrogate the suspects and the people and I love how Booth has to keep her in control not to use her hands and legs. LOL.

The way Geet and Maan work together as working in telepathy, they understand each other. Or rather Geet is on Top she know Maan very well. With her profession I think she has mastered that and she is his friends.

Now I don't think too much here as its a 1st interrogation of a husband and a father but as we found out that he knows whom his wife was sleeping with. I believe Maans notion about being punished seems to be clear. Suspecting the Mr Guha on that basis would be too soon that is so obvious though. So then I must say continue please waiting for the next.

Here is our little internal chatting abt your Story:-

Shaheda Patel/opc/... how was it?
Lori Pascoe awesome... I love how the names still remain the same- Geet Maan
Shaheda Patel/opc... Emily
Shaheda Patel/opc... Satya
Shaheda Patel/opc... David
Shaheda Patel/opc... she talks abt bones
Shaheda Patel/opc... hehehehe
Lori Pascoe too funny



I am a Chakrit fan and has seen almost all his Lakhorn. He is a very good actor and his series have something different to offer. My all time favorite would be Sawan Biang with Ann and Ken - they make the best couple! I don't know why but Thara Himalaya put me off so I stopped watching it after few episodes.

I am glad that your friend liked reading THVWU...and many thanks for recommending this FF to your friend. Its really sweet of you to do so :-)

I have said it before - Maan and Geet already are in an established friendship and have known each other for a while. Their past is also going to be explored so one can understand their mutual understanding.

Thanks a lot Shaheda for writing..
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