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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u sooo much di..but the impact u hve left behind..
an still not over it...
its better i go n sleep i guess...
1000s of thots running in my mind...

n u r ryt..readers n writers can only improve each other...
so the one who is a writer can connect to ur characters well...
sigh...me gone mad di...
better i sleep...
warna i'll keep on sulking the whole nyt

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved it !!
I hope maan talks about how he feels and I hope geet understands him!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Speechless

very emotional and painful feeling really bad for both Maan and Geet he was thinking his marriage with geet a mistake Poor Geet she had so much dreams You made me cry Awesome and Amazing Job very well written sad update but the way u portrayed

Thank you dear...your images always leave an impact on me...
i love that emoticon which u have used for Geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tammana_Maaneet

Hey Di,
It was a very emotional one...
I could visualise the movie seq without watching the video...
The best part of the movie is wen she tells him to open the spread and see her once and the dialogue he said, " mera pyaar iss pariksha ka mohotaaj nahi hai poonam", it always swells in my mind...
Maan's inner turmoil is well explained...
His going blank and remembering everything was but obvious...
He had lost his 1st love., who no one can ever forget...
His last Qn at his doorstep was explicit...
What has he done, spoiled 2 lives at a same time with no mistak of the other one...
But I guess GEET will handle it very well...
At the beginning it wud be difficult for her to believe but later she will manage...
I hv the mush trust in ur writing Di...
Continue soon... Wud be waiting...
Thnkx a lot and keep writing...

I know...even I thought of adding iot but it did not gel here for me...i actually saw that clipping 15-20 times to get the feel right...and everytime I saw it...I was crying
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh No...He is regretting this marriage, OH no, OH no.

I felt his sadness when he was recounting those images from past, but to realize and maybe call his marriage to Geet a mistake is a big no no in my book. I don't know what you have intended this story to move towards, but Maaneet's future together looks bleak at this moment.

SR, hmmm? I don't know what to expect. Waiting to find out.


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Posted: 13 years ago
what perfect timing for maan to realise taht he hasnt moved on
that he still loves poonam
and that he has probably destroyed an innocent girls life her dreams
awesum timing
couldnt have been a better moment than the first nite when geet is expecting a new life with her husband
if not as husband wife then maybe as frnds
at this moment i dont sympathise with maan at all
i can understand his pain but still how can he just decide to get married without thinking
he wanted a companion to be with him when he feels lonely and now hes having second thoughts
by the time he realises his love and need for a frnd life partner n soulmate geet will have too suffer his indifference, his pain, his anger, his arrogance, his ego.
i hope geet doesnt loose her bubbliness and fun element even in the worst of times
she should still ride the bike do what her heart says
and i hope maan understands his feelings soon
why are all men stupid?

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks ritzy . rite now not in condition to say anything. I know tough road ahead for geet and even maan where he is going to compare his each moment with past . But kehte hai na " shiddat se chahne se ek phattar bhi mom ban jata hai " so , hoping maan will also cum out of his past . it is not that he shld forget his past but shld treasure along with his present . waiting for day , even knowing long path ahead . ritzy u r doing awesome job 🤗

Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnx for the PM. Its a lovely story.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

Oh No...He is regretting this marriage, OH no, OH no.

I felt his sadness when he was recounting those images from past, but to realize and maybe call his marriage to Geet a mistake is a big no no in my book. I don't know what you have intended this story to move towards, but Maaneet's future together looks bleak at this moment.

SR, hmmm? I don't know what to expect. Waiting to find out.



he is not regretting marriage as much he is guilty of ruining Geet's dream...he feels responsible and hence thinks he was hasty and had made a mistake

Next part...hmmm...well it is not going to be pretty...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti_ms

what perfect timing for maan to realise taht he hasnt moved on

that he still loves poonam
and that he has probably destroyed an innocent girls life her dreams
awesum timing
couldnt have been a better moment than the first nite when geet is expecting a new life with her husband
if not as husband wife then maybe as frnds
at this moment i dont sympathise with maan at all
i can understand his pain but still how can he just decide to get married without thinking
he wanted a companion to be with him when he feels lonely and now hes having second thoughts
by the time he realises his love and need for a frnd life partner n soulmate geet will have too suffer his indifference, his pain, his anger, his arrogance, his ego.
i hope geet doesnt loose her bubbliness and fun element even in the worst of times
she should still ride the bike do what her heart says
and i hope maan understands his feelings soon
why are all men stupid?


I agree Shruti...u r anger is justified completely...he has indeed did something stupid

So let's see how Geet handles it and also how Maan reacts going forward

let's just say...Geet is not someone who will take bd treatement low...her family is there to support her and she is financially and mentally independent

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