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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
awww poor maan..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LAST PART_Chapter 9

Geet looked at Maan frowning. Kathy was sound asleep. Maan tiptoed to the living room and Geet followed him. The old pendulum had just stroke nine and Geet's tummy started to complain. Maan smirked and turned to face Geet. She covered her face out of embarrassment. "Look that's someone is hungry..., isn't it?" Maan asked snorting right in front of her face. Geet went beetroot and mumbled "yes, I am, this Kathy made me hungry". Maan smirked and flopped on the sofa.

Geet devoured some sandwiches. She looked at Maan who was staring at the ceiling with boredom.

"Ufff...wa...aat!" she said while eating. Maan turned to face her shocked. Geet gulped her food and said "do you want to eat?" she asked. "No, I don't want to finish someone's dinner and then she would be grumbling and all over me" he leered. "Hey, I don't eat much, do I?" she complained smacking him on the arm. Maan chuckled at her childish behaviour. Geet stood up and walked to the mirror and looked at her silhouette. "Am I fat?" she whispered to herself checking her figure out. Slim and beautiful she was, she wasn't definitely fat, well curved body she had.

Maan roared into laughter the next minute. "You're such a game, Geet. I was teasing you...Silly, you're a sucker, silly" he giggled. Geet flushed red and smacked him again on the arm. "I hate you" she said. "I know" Maan said still laughing hysterically and continued "come on, all guys fall on your charm, fight for going out...mesmerized by your charming face and funny antics...including this MSK even is impressed -...!" Maan stated when he abruptly stopped realizing what he just said. Geet smiled and said "I knew you aren't that bad" she answered.

"Whatever" Maan said in his grouchy mood again. Geet sat beside him and looked at him again. "Do you want to eat, seriously, it's late" she said. "I am not hungry" he said sternly. Geet shocked her head and said "arrogant MSK with a big head"

"I heard that" Maan snapped. "Good for you, you can have an idea what I think of you" Geet snapped back. Maan sighed and crouched on the sofa for a better position. The next moment he smelt a wonderful butter cheese aroma. Geet had leveled the sandwich to his mouth and she ordered "open your mouth". Maan stared at Geet and something came over him, he opened his mouth and Geet chucked the sandwich in. Maan came back to reality and looked at the sandwich. "What's this for?" he asked irritated.

"For eating" Geet replied.

"Maan..." Geet said.

"Hmmm"

"Why do we fight?"

Maan turned and looked at Geet. "Because I hate you" Maan replied lazily. Geet turned and stared at Maan without blinking "do you really hate me?" she asked. Maan turned his gaze towards Geet and retorted "no, it just fun to tease you and your gang". Geet chuckled and answered. "Same here".

"Maan"

"Hmm"

"You can go home, it's already nine thirty, and your family may be worried for you" Geet said. "And you?" Maan asked. "I can stay here" Geet said bravely yet she shivered.

"Nah, I'll wait for you" Maan smiled. Geet stared at him for some moments and continued "you're a gentleman maan" and smiled.

Geet had already fallen asleep on Maan's shoulder and Maan couldn't move. "She spells trouble" he thought. I just hate her, he continued.

Mr. and Mrs Newton arrived at sharp 11 as they had suggested.

Mr. Newton to Geet: Do you want me to drop you home?

Geet: I can manage, Mr. Newton

Mrs. Newton (worried): Its dark already, we surely don't want you to go alone

Maan interrupted: I am still alive here (smirking) and I won't mind dropping my cousin's friends' home

Mr. Newton (grinning): Thanks Maan

Maan (annoyed): welcome

MaanEet in Car

Geet: you're a real gentleman, Maan

Maan: Duh

Geet: You know, I always denied and thought you were a ruthless creature...

Maan: I am

Geet: You're sometimes, but not now

Maan looked at Geet who was smiling at her. He grinned...

Maan: Geet, why do you wear salwar kaamez? it's so out dated.

Geet: I think about myself and I don't care what others think of me, if I find myself comfortable in salwars, it's my problem, but anyway, don't deny that the dumb hunks at school don't like me in my salwar kameez?

Maan: They do, I like that you're different from others; at least you don't try to impress others by wearing minis...

Geet (worried): Do you find me bad in salwar kameez?

Maan: Nope, you're beautiful in this way with your funny antics and obsessed mind in winning

Geet (cutting Maan off, while blushing): as if you're not!

Maan grinned and said: which way to your home?

Geet: Turn right...

Maan and Geet arrived at Geet's home

Maan got out of the car and opened Geet's door, shocking her. Geet smiled and whispered "good night" Maan smiled back "you're really nice, sometimes" he winked. "See ya tomorrow, Good night"

Geet waved to Maan and waited for him to go home. She smiled as she reached her bedroom, grinning like a monkey. This was one of her favourite days as a babysitter.

Suddenly Kristy entered the room "so he's your bf" she asked. "who?" Geet asked startled. "The one who came to drop you, choti" Kristy pointed out.

"NO" Geet shouted quickly.

"Quick...too quick" Kristy grinned and left the room. Geet scratched for head and blushed like a fool.

There, at the KM, Maan, too was busy smiling like a fool the next day. Even his grandma had noticed the change in him.

@College, next day

Priya and Nikki were waiting for Geet, so were Sameera and Nike's gang for Maan. Geet and Maan entered the campaign field without arguing or cursing each other; surprising their mates. Instead Geet smiled and Maan and waved at him. Maan replied her gesture.

When Geet reached her troupe, her friends were all over her.

Priya: What was that?

Geet (innocently): what?

Nikki: You know – that!

Josh: Stop it (yelling) Geet, you smiled to MSK and waved to him

Geet (absent-minded): yeah so

Priya (shocked and agitated): So? Geet, I remind you, he's your enemy, your competitor!!!

Josh: I can't believe this

Nikki: Neither am I

Geet (shrugging): He's not now

Nikki (suspiciously): what happened while you guys were babysitting

Priya (agitated): Answer us GEET

Geet (looking at them in a weird way): we talked and sorted our differences, now come on, I am hungry, didn't eat anything

Josh (giggling): If Kristy finds about this, she'll kill you

Meanwhile

Samira (in a hurt tone): Maan!

Maan (grinning): Hey Sam

Nike (suspiciously): MSK what was that?

Sameer: How could you do this to us (in a deceived tone)

Maan looked at them confused.

Adi: You were smiling to Geet Handa, without fighting, arguing and cursing her, she waved to you and you waved back which was pretty fishy for all of us including Geet's friends

Maan looked at Adi weirdly after his brief quick description.

Samira: Please Maan, you can't do this

Maan: Do what?

Samira (hurt tone): Befriends with Geet

Maan: Why?

Nike (yelling): You hate her MSK, what's up with you!!!

Maan (tired of the conflict and yelling too): Shut up all of you, me and Geet are friends now, so you better too!

Nike: What!

Samira: Never

Maan glared at them.

Adi: Fine

Maan (calm tone): let's go to eat, I'm hungry

@canteen

A group of juniors had taken the table of MSK unknowingly. Nike had gone to fetch the foods. Samira left the gang feeling sad, hurt and angry. Sameer was fuming when he saw the juniors.

Sameer walked over their table and said in a fuming tone: Do you know where you're sitting!

Boy1 (trembling): S-s-sorry

Boy2 (rescuing boy1): We were hungry and no table...

Maan cutting them both calmly: it's okay, we'll have another table

Adi (looking at Maan): Maan are you sure you're alright, no fever, no flu?

Maan (rolling his eyes): come one

Adi went to Geet's table and said humbly: Can we adjust with you guys, no table available, just some seats next yours

Priya (snapping coldly): No

Geet brushed off her snap and added: sure thing

Adi grinned at Priya and went back to MSK. Soon MSK and gang crowded over Geet's table.

Nikhil/Nike (grumbling): The juniors took our table that's why...

Josh: It's okay, its happens

The two gangs finished their food and was coming out of the canteen when Dev, another hunk who pretended to be greater that MSK was coming to Geet.

Geet (praying and closing her eyes): Hey babaji...not him, not him, priya, nikki, josh, save me

Priya (glaring at Dev): Brute

Maan and Gang was amused.

Dev came to geet and said: Hi hottie how are you. He kept focusing his eyes on Geet.

Geet annoyed and started to reverse: bye

Dev blocked Geet's way and Geet glared at him.

Dev: Hottie, believe me, am in love with you.

Maan unable to bear Geet's uneasiness: oh shut up, just get lost from here.

Dev, scared, scooted off like a fly.

Adi (glaring at Dev): Snitch

Priya (smiling): thanks maan, owe this to you!

Maan: never mind, I hate him

Sameer: what's up with Dev?

Josh: He's always coming to trouble Geet, sending her flowers, SMSes and all

Nikki: Yuck

Geet's friends and Maan's Mates walked ahead leaving MaanEet alone. Maan grinned at Geet.

Maan: don't worry he won't' come again

Geet: thanks

Maan: are u free Friday night

Geet (realizing what he meant): sure, why

Maan: For a date, what for?

Geet (flushing): where

Maan: Gimme your phone number, will call you later and tell...

THE END

NOTE: CANT MANAGE TO UPDATE ALL< TOO TIRED...SORRY FOR INCONVIENCE...

THANK YOU ALL😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh god!!!!!!!!!
They really becum friends with each other..
Poor sam.. Their friendship brought the whole gang together..
So enemies can be friends may b lovers..
I loved the msg...
But i Can't believe it s the last part..😲

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Posted: 13 years ago
this is the last part😲
i cant believe it
bt loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOoo don't end it keep it on hold will wait but don't end it😭
anywayzzz great update like always
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear it was awesome ...👏
so they r friends now ...wow dear...it was a quick end..
hey dear r u going to give a epilouge ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
so now enemies can b frnds n i guess lovers also...bechari samira...aur dev...hero banta hai...maan k ek dhamki sehi bhag gaya...he he he...

so d gr8 nws is dat both enemies going fr a date...not bad...

awesome update...

its amazing...

really loved it a lot...

want an epilogue plz...

thank u fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Frankie! Awesome ending!
loved it!
awww their never ending teasing!
Finally they turned friends haaayyye!
loved how MSK confessed he is impressed by her and really doesnt hate her!
The gangs' reaction to their friendship was hilarious!
grrr Sam as usual a b***h!!!
ha ha Dev coward ran away with MSK's one dhamki lol!
awww MSK allowed the juniors to sit there and adjusted their gang with that of Geet's!
Haaayyyeee he asked her for a date!! lovely!
so finally enemies turned friends then lovers!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved the ending !!!!

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