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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

awesome part.

loved geet's naughtiness n maan's arrogance.

loved maan's dialogue .

hanx for the pm.

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

                                          WANTED
           PART-3

geet is walking on her tiptoes so that no one could recognize her arrival especially her mom who is fuming with anger...
meera is also following geet then suddenly gets freezed...when they heard a voice...ruko...
both meera and geet stands there itself without a moment..

rano:geet...

geet makes baby face...slowly turns towards rano...


geet:[gulps] ji maa...[yes...mom]

rano:kaha thi abhi thak?[where were u till now?]

geet:maa...o mein...o[i..i was..]

she notices meera who is slowing moving towards room...

geet:maa...di..di bhi mere saath thi..[mom di was with me]

meera glares geet and she smirks...

rano:ha meera bolo kaha gaye the tum dono...[meera tell me where u people have gone till now?]

meera is still glaring geet and asking her what to tell...
geet remembers her plan and shows medicines to meera..

meera:dawai...hum dawai lene gaye the...hai na geet..[we went to buy medicines..right geet?]

geet:ha...ha maa hum log daarji ke liye medicines lane gaye the isliye itni der hogayi..[yes mom we went to bring medicines for daarji so we are late to home]

rano:achha! jaha tak muje yaad hai mein ne aadi ko bheji thi medicines lane..phir tumhare paas medicines kese aur o aadi kaha chala gaya?[i think i have sent aadi to bring medicines then how come u know about them and where is aadi now?]

geet:maa...jab mein aur di ghar aarahe the hume rasthe mein aadi mila tha. tho mein ne socha bechara kitna kaam karega?isliye medicines lene mein aur di gaye the...hai na di
[when we were on the way to home then we met aadi there so thought to bring medicines instead of troubling aadi]

meera:ha maa geet bilkul sahi keh rahi hai...
[yes mom watever geet said is true]

geet:aur waise bhi aap tho aadi ko jaanthi hai na..buddu hai o..kahi galat dawai le aaya tho..isliye...
[u know na mom..aadi is a buddu.he may bring wrong medicines so i thought i will bring them]

geet notices that her mom is getting satisfied by her explanation but her happiness doesn't lastlong as aadi who's witnessing all this,by hiding back side the main door comes in front of them..

aadi:di aap phir se muje buddu kaha..[u again called me buddu?]

geet and meera gets shocked by aadi's sudden entry and glares him for spoiling their plan..

rano:aadi beta kaha the tum..geet keh rahi thi ki o khud gayi hai dawai lene phir tu ghar kyun nahi aaya..
[aadi where were u?geet said that she went for medicines then y didn't u return home?]

aadi:[stammering]maa..o mein bahar hi tha[i was here outside the home]

rano:tu bahar kya kar raha tha?
[wat u was doing outside?]

aadi:maa..mein mein kya raha tha?[wat i was doing?]

asks geet for an idea raising his both eyebrows
geet whispers to him..lucky

aadi:ha..ha yaad aaya mein lucky se baat kar raha tha.
[ha i remember..i was talking with lucky]

rano:teek hai...
geet puttar tum log haat mooh dokar aao tab tak mein didi ko bulakar aathi hoon khane ke liye..
[ok then..u guys go and fresh up..i'll call didi for lunch]

rano is about to go but a small boy enters the house with a slip in his hand..
aadi is shocked to see him there because he is the son of the medical store's owner..
the same condition with meera and geet.


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@mumbai:
at railway station:

a man steps in local train and places a bag which he brought with him under the seat on which he sat..
after some time the train reach next station and the man steps out of the train and will start searching for someone..
meanwhile,his mobile rings..

man:ji sir kaam hogaya mein ne aisa hi kiya jaisa aapne kaha tha..
[yes sir...i did exactly what u said]

ss:teek hai..tumne kisi ko dekha paise lethe hue?
[ok..did u see anybody taking money from there?]

man:nahi sir doond raha hoon..
[no sir..iam searching for him]

ss:shut up stupid..tu waha doond the raho aur waha o aadmi paise lekar gayab hojayega..jaldi jaao aur deko waha bag hai ki nahi..mein hold karunga tab tak...
[shut up!dont waste time in searching him at one place..otherwise he'll disappear from there by taking that money.now first u go and check whether the bag is there or not]

man:ji sir...
as soon as he turns towards the entrance of the train,he bumps in to a strong body...

man:sorry sir..

ss:tu muje sorry kyun keh raha hai?kahi o bag lekar gayab tho nahi hua..
[y are u asking me for sorry..don't tell me that he ran away taking the money]

man:nahi sir..mein tho usse kehraha tha jisse mein takra gaya hoon.
[not to u but to the person with whom i bump in to]

ss:ab jaldi jaakar check karo..
[u first go and check the bag]

man goes to the place where he kept the bag and finds it there..

man:sir bag hai..[bag is here]

ss takes sigh of releif..

man:par paise nahi hai...
[but the bag is empty]

ss:[shocked]kya?????????

flashback:
man comes and places the bag under the seat on which he is sitting..
karan who is already sitting in the seat behind the man with his back facing that man's back takes the bag slowly,cuts it with a knife as it is locked,tranfers the money in to his bag...

next:
karan is the one who bumped with that man..
he glares when that man asks for sorry,takes out his goggles,wears them and moves silently from there...


ss comes out of shock with his mobile's ringtone..

ss:hello..

karan:aakhir dikhadiya na political brain...
mein ne tumse pehle bhi kaha tha ki muje dekne ki ya mere bhare mein jaanne ki koshish mat karna phir bhi tum apne harkatho se baaz nahi aane wale hai na...teek hai deal cancel hai..
[ finally u showed ur political brain..
i already said u that dont even try to know about me or try to meet me but u'll never come out of ur actions...ok i'll cancel the deal then]


ss:are nahi nahi..kal hi party meeting hai aur ab tum peeche hatoge to problem hojayegi...aisa mat karo..mein ne jo kuch bhi kiya us ke liye maafi maangtha hoon..
[no dont do that..iam sorry for what i did..u dont cancel the deal at this last minute because 2morrow itself is the party meeting]

karan:teek hai..agar tum phir se koi naya khel rachane ki koshish bhi ki na tumhare dost ki jagah par tum hoga aur ha laash bankar..
[if u even think of any plan again then u'll be there in ur friend's place and ha u'll be a dead body]

ss:[gulps]teek hai..

karan disconnects the call,removes the sim from his mobile and throws it away...
he starts moving from there as a normal man where the man(who brought money) is lying in the pool of blood there in the bathroom whom he shooted as soon as the man recognized him..


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@hoshiarpur:

the boy enters with slip in his hand..rano who is heading towards s.d's room notices that boy..

rano:arey munna tu yaha.?[hey munna u?]

munna:ha chachi papa ne muje bheja hai ye slip aaplogo ko dene ke liye..
[papa sent me here to handover this slip to u]

rano:par ye kya hai?
[wat is this slip about?]

geet interrupts and grabs slip before rano could take it...

geet:(smirks)munna tu ja...
[munna u can leave now]

rano notices that some thing is fishy and stops munna..

rano:munna ye kaho ki papa ne kya kehkar ye chitti bheja hai?
[did papa said u anything about this slip?]

here geet and aadi continuosly signalling munna to go from there without saying anything to rano..

munna:o...chachi mein...o

rano insists him to tell but he is adamant as geet and aadi were continuosly warning him...
atlast rano raises her voice..
rano:muje pata hai tu kyun nahi bata rahe ho...[stares slightly towards geet and aadi]
agar tu ab nahi bataya na tho mein tumhari maa se kehkar teri khabar lene ke lie kehti hoon...kyun ki aaj kal jhoot bolne laga hai na..
[ i know the reason behind ur silence...if u wont open ur mouth then i'll inform ur mother that u are telling lies to every one now-a -days]

munna:(instantly)aadi bhaiyya shop mein prescription bhul aaye the isliye mein lekar aaya hoon..
[aadi bhayya forgot the prescription there in the shop itself..so i came to return it]

he is very quick to run from there because he know wat would be the result and his condition if geet catches him..
rano turns towards aadi and geet by holding her waist with both the hands...she's continuosly glaring both of them...
meanwhile,meera slowly runs towards s.d's room..

rano:tho tu medicines lene gayi thi...hai na..?
[so u went to bring medicines]

geet makes innocent face and stands there with her face looking down..


rano:aadi tum apne di ko bachane ke liye mujse jhoot bol raha tha..

tumhe kuch kehke kya faida ye plan tho geet ka hi hoga...

[so aadi u lied me to save ur sister..however it's waste of time to ask u because iam sure this might be geet's idea..right?]

aadi and geet are left with no other option rather than listening her..

rano:geet...beta tu kab samjegi?tu abhi bacchi nahi rahi.. badi hogayi...ye baccho wale harkat karna band karo..
[geet u r no more a kid now..so plz stop behaving like a kid and doing mischievious things]

meanwhile,s.d comes there along with meera..

s.d:ofo...rano ab bas bhi karo kyun meri maasoom si phool jaisi bacchi ko dat rahi ho tum..
[oh stop it now rano..y are u scolding my innocent girl?]

geet and aadi's face glows like a star as s.d came there as their saviour..
geet instantly goes and hugs s.d..

geet:[innocently]dekhiye na buwa ji maa kese daat rahi hai muje...
[see how mom is scolding me]

rano:accha!tho ye bhi bata ki mein kyun daat rahi thi..
[oh so tell her the reason also..]

s.d:rano..jo bho ho o bacchi hai..bacche hi tho sharaarat karthe hai..iska matlab ye nahi hum unhe choti choti baat ke liye daate
[watever...she is still innocent like a child and every child will obviously be mischievious..it doesnt mean that we scold them for small things]

meera:bilkul sahi kaha buwa ji ne...[she said right]

rano:tho ab aap sab ek hogaye ho...mein hi akeli hoon..
ye bata ki muje kya shouk hai tumhe daat ne ka mein tho bas tumhari fikr karthi hoon isliye..
[so u all are a team now and iam alone..
wat do u think i like to scold u always...i just care for u?so i..]

geet immediately comes and hugs rano from side wards...

geet:maa mein jaanthi hoon..aapko kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai..sach kahu jab aap daat thi hai na muje accha lagtha hai..aap ki har ek baat mein pyar nazar aatha hai..
[i know that u cares for me and u'll scold me for me,infact i enjoy them and i see lot of love in every word]

as soon as geet says those words tears roll down on her cheeks..
geet wipes her tears..

geet:maa ab aap plz rona shuru mat kijiye...muje bhook lagi hai kuch khane ko milega..
[mom plz dont start crying now and iam hungry now..can i get anything to eat..]

rano:nahi..aaj tuje khana nahi milega muje rula diya na..isliye..
[no u are not going to get anything to eat today because u made me cry na..]

geet:[innocently]buwaji...

s.d:rano...

rano:didi aapki laad pyar hi ise bigad kar rakhi hai...
[u are spoiling her with ur love]

geet:maa jab mein itni pyaari hoon tho buwaji kya kar sakthi hai..mujse pyar karne ke alawa...
[what she can do when iam such a loving girl..how can she stop from loving me]

everyone of them smile...meera,aadi and geet hugs s.d and rano..
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@night in geet and meera's room:

geet:di aaj bahuth mazaa aaya na..us ladke ki tho acchi kabar li mein ne par use aur maar padni chahiye thi aapko chedne ke liye..
[today we had lot of fun na...i really enjoyed the way i handled that boy but iam upset that he ran away without taking revenge of teasing u]
meera:ab bas bhi kar...accha geet ek baat bata ki apni hone wala pati kesa hona chahiye?]
[stop it now..and tell me wat qualties do u wish to have in ur future hubby]

geet:us ladke ki tarah darpok tho bilkul nahi hona chahiye...
he should be well built and should have attitude jise dekkar sab ka hosh ud jaaye...
[he should not be a coward first of all...he should be a well built man carrying attitude always with him...everyone should loose their conscious as soon as they see him]

flash :
karan is coming to the dark room with full on attitude on his face..


geet:uska dole shole tho bilkul salman khan ki tarah hona chahiye...
aisa hona chahiye ki use dekthe hi sab kahe mashallah kya ladka hai..aur un par se nazar utane ki man hi nahi karna chahiye...
[he should be fit and have muscles like filmy hero salman khan...and cant even take eyes from him]

flash:
karan is doing taichi with full anger in his eyes...


geet:seedhe kahu tho he should be super hot...

flash:
karan comes and sits on a couch as he is panting after doing taichi..


geet:aur sirf mujse pyar kare aur mera khayal rahe..
[he should only love me and pamper me]

meera:hmmm..badi lambi list hai tumhari...aisa insan ko tho bagwan ne banaya hi nahi hoga isliye sirf sapne mein deko apni rajkumar ko..
[hmm..ur list of qualities is very big..i think god would have not created the man of ur dreams till now..so better see him in his dreams..]

saying so...she lays on bed to sleep..

geet:aap dekhiye na di ek din mere sapnon ka rajkumar zaroor aayega mere liye...aur muje apne bahon mein mehfoos rakhega...
[u see one day my dreamboy will definitely come for me and protects me from every trouble by holding me in his arms forever]

geet:kaha hoga mere sapnon ka raj kumar..?kya kar raha hoga?
[where would be my dream boy and wat he will be doing now?]



here karan is very angry on himself...

karan:mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai?mein sabki tarah kyun nahi jee saktha...?aaj meri wajah se ek aur insaan mar gaya..mein ne khud maara...
[why this happens to me always and y cant i live my life as a normal man..i killed another man today..]


he closes his eyes and remembers some incidents from his past life...
he quickly opens his eyes..

karan:nahi mein kuch galat nahi kar raha hoon...is duniya mein agar jeena ho tho aisa hi jeena chahiye kyun ki acchayi aur insaniyat ka koi mol hi nahi hai is duniya mein ...
[no.. iam not wrong..if i have to live my life then i should be like this because there is no value for humanity and goodness in this society]

meanwhile,vikram comes there...

viky:are karan tum abhi tak jaag rahe ho..
kal subah ke operation ke liye tayyar ho na..
[hey karan..y are u awake till now?are u ready for 2morrow's operation]

karan:ha iam ready..
aur tum kyun jaag rahe ho?tumhe sona nahi hai?
[yes iam ready but y u are awake till now?

viky:hmm...sone hi ja raha tha...
[iam going to sleep now]

karan goes from there and vikram also goes from there after sometime...

precap:
rajeev sharma is really dead..
police surrounded karan...

hope u all like it..if u dont... plz dont throw chappals on me but throw negative comments which helps me to improve...

sorry for mistakes and bear with my language as iam not that fluent in them but tried my best to give best...plz comment and negative comments are mostly welcome...actually i want them so that i can improve myself...

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love u all...
-mona

link to next part:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/51773559

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: richa23
Awesome dear.
Plz update it

thanx dear😊

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

awesome update dear...
loved it...
omg.. geet,meera n aadi.. ufff... kitne nautanki hain... loved them...
hayeee geet's dream boy... woww... flashes of maan.. loved that part very much...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Awesum part..
luvd geet's description about her future hubby..
just filmy style..haye...

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Simran Kaur

@DDbiggestfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Amazing part...
Thanks 4 d pm..

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

part 2
nice part...
does Dadi know about Maan/Karan's work?
Geet is so bubbly and lively...
cont soon...

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shweta

@sweety095

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

i hope karan/maan is saved.i also want maan and geets confrontation😳

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

aww... Geet ke family parts wer really cute...

they are so playful , naughty and fun... mujhe bilkul apni yaad aati hai is Geet ko padhkar.. hehehhehe...

Maan ke past me to kuch bohot khatarnaak hua hai...

eagerly waitin to knw...

awsum update Mona...
continue soon...
luvya...