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Part 1

2 weeks later

Maan was tired; tired of thinking of Geet.

"I've left her behind'behind'now she got nothing to do with me now" Maan said irritated.

"Argghh'I hate her'" he tried to force on him.

"It's been two weeks'two weeks to forgot her'but no, no, she keeps creeping in my mind!"

His phone rang.

"What's up, Adi'" he said annoyed.

"S's'sir'you have to visit'" Adi stammered when Maan cut him off.

"Right'I remember" he said cutting off the call.

"I wonder why sir seems always lost nowadays." Adi thought as he hanged off.

+++++

"Pinky'Pinky'will you accompany me to the doctor?" Geet called.

"Sure"

"By the way Geet; where's Yash?" Pinky asked.

"Where could he be ' he signed up for a job!" Geet laughed.

"Okay, get ready, I am waiting for you" Pinky said.

Geet nodded and went inside her room.

She patted her tummy and said "Maan'please let me come back'please Maan"

She sighed and started to get ready before she broke down crying.

+++++

"Good morning sir, did you call for me?"

"Hmm" Maan said.

"Where were you yesterday Mr. Yash?" Maan asked angrily.

"Actually'sir'woh'I had to go to the doctor" Yash said trying to find an excuse.

"Hmm'get back to work; prepare the contract to sign by the R&J Limited" Maan ordered.

Yash nodded.

"Sure, sir"

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"Mrs. Geet, you should take care of yourself" the doctor told Geet.

"You don't eat properly" the doctor continued.

Pinky frowned glaring at Geet.

"'And you also seem weak" the doctor added.

Geet looked sheepishly at Pinky and at the doctor.

"You're innocent looks won't work for me" Pinky smirked.

"Don't worry, doctor, I'll take good care of her" Pinky said. Geet smiled.

"Good day"

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"Pinks?"

"Yeah"

"Kabtak'from when will you keep looking after me, I just can't handle it anymore" Geet said looking at Pinky with tears.

Pinky shook her head and started to bake the dough. "We all work here, Geet, and looking after you and the little member is our priority!"

"Pinks?" Geet said in tears.

Pinky looked at Geet and Geet hugged her.

"Hush'Geet'hush'you mustn't be sad" Pinky consoled her.

"Thanks'when my own one forgot about me'you'you'" she started but Pinky didn't let her continue.

"Come on, Yash will come home, hurry up, cooking"

+++++

"What I didn't do Maan'what I didn't" Geet thought. "I did almost everything for our little angel'I am working hard; I and Pinky bought an apartment'why are you doing this Maan'why don't you accept us'"

Precap: Maan sees Geet with Yash!

And he's not surely a happy person!

IMPORTANT NOTE:

Eeww...guys...my school is starting on the 12th and I am not sure to be updating regurlarly. I am not even sure of updating! My vacations would be in four months time that is in April. But I can't surely left this like that. Maybe an update thrice in a week

I am not sure though...will miss you all 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by music_girl - 12 years ago

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