MY JUNGLE GIRL link of thread 2 @ page 1

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I hope u alL will like these two ...i would have started these after new year..bt today is someone's Birthday...that's why i dedicated the opening to her.as birthday gift..Yup today is Abgina di/Crazydevil's birthday...the writter of the awsomre ff CHAHAT..wish her a very happy birthday.& hope she will like the presents..pls like & give comments..whether good or bad .

My Jungle Girl

Chapter one

She was going round & round around him & checking him...sniffing him..puling his shirt..

Wh..what are you doing???he stammerd as she brought her nose to his neck to sniff him while her checking out process..bt she didn't answer..instead she stood in front of maan reaaallyyy close & looked him with awe. She traced the features of his face slowly as if recognizing him..his eyes'nose.. cheek..lips..he closed his eyes in feeling an unknown sensation along with ethereal calmness..he opened his eyes feeling her touch in his hand & looked at her with softness & awe.. WHAT WAS SHE!!??😕she took his hand and matched his fingers with her..now her whole attention was to there plams & fingers..in her first reaction ..she widened her already big adorable eyes..then smiled broadly..a smile of childish excitement..

maan smiled & asked her- my name is maan what's your name??

my name is maan what's your name??

it took him a minute to realize that what exactly she had said to him..she actually mimicked HIM!!!!

then he roared in seething anger

HOW DARE YOU TO MAKE FUN OF ME!...MAAN SING KHURANA..

she again copied him..

HOW DARE YOU TO MAKE FUN OF ME!...MAAN SING KHURANA..😊

then she looked at him waitting for him to say more..fluttering her eyes innocently

Maan was about to burst at her more when he looked at her eyes..which were looking at him EAGERLY watting for him to say more..then he understood that she didn't understood him at all..just was saying all that he was saying

Maan smiled & taking their joined hands to his heart (well..it seems that neithr want to leave each others hand..)😳..said..my name is maan..then removed it & pointing towards her with his eyes asked..what's your name??

She took their joined hand to her heart & said GEET..then again slowly took joined hand to his heart & said MY NAME IS MAAN..then again took their jonied hands to her heart & said GEET..now she started repeat the process in excitement

MY NAME IS MAAN ...

GEET

MY NAME IS MAAN

GEET..

MY NAME IS MAAN

GE..

Maan now understood that she was getting it all wrong ..so he tried to correct it..

No no no no no..

Geet repeated same process like before..

No no no no no.

GEET..

No no no no no..

GEET..

Maan again tried..Geeet mera naam sirf maan hai..

GEEET MERA NAAM SIRF MAAN HAIII(again same process)😆

sirf maan

sirf maan

nahi nahi..nahi nahi..

uff!

Ufff!!!!!!

Now he placed his hand on his head with hopelessness

Ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi!!

Geet saw him & also placed her hand on her head

Ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi!!😆 looking at him with the corner of her eyes to see if she has done right or not & if he was doing anything more

Maan now closed his eyes in frustration..

She looked at him bewildered..confused.. Maan now opened his eyes & looked at her adorable face..& doe like big confused eyes which were at him..

He slowly took their still joined hand & placed it on his heart & said

MAAN..

Then slowly he took the joined hands & placed it on her heart..

GEET..

Now geet also followed him slowly..

MAAN...

GEET...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Character sketch

Maan Sing Khurana-23 years old.super rich & intelligent & very mature compared to his age as at 18 years he was inclined to take all the business in his hands for his little sister & greedy relatives.Cruel world have made him angry & ruthless.

Gurmeet as Maan in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi

Meera Sing Khurana- 18 years has a generous heart.Loves dev.But has one trait..karne se pehle kuch sochti nahi..thinks with passion..not mind..he he he

Perneet Chauhan

Geet- 16 years..was3 years when she was lost in jungle..will reveal more as the story progress.

Armaan Malik-33 years,maan's friend

Karan Singh Grover

Sameera Pratap- well 23 years 'no one knows except her what goes in her mind'.certainly not any good thing..&..OOPS..Maan's fianc!!!!!

Jennifer Singh Grover

Dev Pratap-22 years.SUPER STUPID ASIQ of MEERA..uff!!!!these two really fit each other..

Samir Sharma

INDEX


part 1- page 1 PART6-page 19 part 11-page 52 part 16-page 92

part 2-page 4 PART 7-page 30 part 12-page 63 part 17-page 106

part 3-page 7 part 8-page 35 part 13-page 69 part 18-page 113

Part 4-page 11 part 9-page 40 part 14-page 77 part 19-page 124

part 5-page 15 part 10-page 46 part 15-page 88 part 20- page 131

Part 21-page 142


THREAD 2

Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute start ...

write super soon 😃

love
Sana
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome ff

cont soon...plz pm mee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely..❤️
cntnue soonn
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merry christmas dear..
congrats for starting 2 new ffs...
will be looking forward..
i think geet doesnt know the outer world other than jungle..
nice concept..maan has to change geet a lot..
waiting for next..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOL LOL LOL ROFL...kya baat hai chotu ma stomachs still aching...dis is really funny...luved it...
maan sach mein pagal hone wala h...hehe
Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago
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MERRY CHRISTMAS DEAR!!😃
very nice start😛
continue soon...
Edited by anisha_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing
loved it
pls add me to ur PM list
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awww i luvd it plxxx add me to d pm list n plxxx update soon

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