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Posted: 12 years ago
wowloved itwaiting for moretoo good
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it alot...

evil people deserved it...now waiting fr maneet moments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very interesting concept.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome one plz update and pm me
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THANK GOD THOSE TWO CAME TO A STICKY END
MAAN HAD COME PREPARED BUT EVEN THEN HE WAS TAKEN BY SURPRISE
BUT ALL IS WELL THAT ENDS WELL
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx mimu
u give gift of CHHOTII DIWALI??
love the update but i don,t like one thing that mr and mrs. shergill kaa kissa itanii jaldi khatam ho gayaa
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Posted: 12 years ago


NOTE- Better get this thread finished with this update, till then i won't update, the faster u finish the thread , the fastest u will get the update😉

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Chapter 21

It has been two days since geet was back in KM. though the family members were initially happy,bt now it seemed miserable for them with geet crying continuously clinging to maan.

She was still a child at heart & didn't understand the worldly aspects. So she misunderstood the whole situation. This gave her a impression that the whole thing was a punishment for her not being a "good girl" & this could happen again . bt at any cost, she didn't want to depart from maan, so she clung to maan never leaving him for a second fearing that if she lets him go, he will send her again to someone.

Here maan also didn't know what to do, as in these two days she was only crying uttering a word. He felt helpless.

Meera came to maan's room carrying the food tray. Maan was was sitting on the bed with geet in his lap sitting sideways all cringed up..cuddled in a ball.

Meera affectionately threaded geet's hair with her fingers, geet, baccha eat something. Why are you crying? They won't come after u anymore.

Geet pressed her face in maan's crook of neck more still weeping.

Baccha pls don't do this, don't cry baby. Any of the members could not understand why geet was crying so much, they assumed this as a trauma of what she endured.

Geet u are a good girl na..eat your food.

At hearing the word good girl she immediately looked at meers & then took the plate.

Meera first smiled, bt then frowned when she saw maan taking the plate of food from geet's hand.

Bhai what are u..

Meera go from here.

Bt bhai

MEERA,GO.

She halfheartedly went outside perplexed at maan's behavior.

Maan on the other side, hugged geet tightly.

Geet,we all love u baccha, we won't send u anywhere from now even if u are a bad girl.

She cried more'no ..sob..sob, u will send geet again.

No baccha, we'..I LOVE GEET..very much, I won't send geet anywhere.

Kitna ?

Huh?

Kitna love karte ho geet ko?

Huh? Now how should a lover show his love to his ladylove ..OOPS! babylove!!!😆

Kitna pyaar ..ummm..itnaa he showed geet with his hand.

She frowned. Lekin geet to itnaaa sara love karti hai na maan ko.

He smiled, accha..!! He took the plate & fed her a spoonful,she took it without realizing & started to chew while talking.

Ha, geet bohuuut sara love karti hai maan ko. She said cutely

To maan vi karta hai na bohuuut sara pyaar,he fed her another spoon.

Sacchi..she sniffed.

Mucchi.

To phir u won't send geet na.she sounded so low

(this scene seems similar to me, as if i have read it somewhere,as i am not sure i am posting this, so please if u find this scene similar to anyone report me.)

He wiped her mouth clean & kissed her forhead

No sweety.

Geet good girl na ho ho tab bhi?

He laughed, yes tab bhi.

Soon she lied down in bed blabbering..bt the tear trails were still on her cheeks.

He wiped them & patted her head helping her to go to sleep.

Actually maan was watching her reactions all the time trying to find out the reason of her crying, when he saw geet eating when meera called her a good girl,he understood geet's fear. He wanted to get her out of the fear & indeed he was successful

U look best with your smile geet,I want that geet back when she didn't know what is called crying.

******

PAST

KHURANAS were the new neighbor of Prataps. Though the Prataps heard about their arrival, could not go to meet them as the were busy in an important project of the company day & night.

One week later , the chaos was finally over for the prataps. Mrs pratap decided to take a day off from the work. It was a fine afternoon & unexpectedly mrs. Kurana came with her son.

The ladies gossiped while the boy got bored &started wandering around the house, suddenly, he heard a babyish gibberish coming from a room, their he saw a very pretty little cutie sitting on the bed playing with woolen balls.

She saw him stretched her hands to pick her up giggling


Meanwhile at the hall:-

Bhabiji, I don't know why, bt whenever chotu picks a kid up in his arms the baby starts to cry..now he doesn't even want to get near them.

Don't worry aisa hota hai, maybe you are thinking to much.

Pata nahi,.bt if this goes on, it will create an hatred for kids within him.

The boy though wanted to pick this chubby cutie,bt went from there.

The baby climbed down the bed with a great effort leaving all her precious woolen balls & ran after that boy to as fast as she could with her chubby legs to catch him.

In the hall:-

I don't know bhabi, what's going on, she is the healthiest & most good moody kid u can ever have, I mean she doesn't throw tantrums like other kids doesn't get irritated, doesn't cry often..even she has started to talk a little & my baby , my geet ..she is just now almost one year old.

Wow, now that is one good kid u have, bt what is the problem, everything seems fine..

Yes, bt jabse bolna shuru kiya hai, she doesn't say a word other than MAAN, we are tired of asking who is this maan!! Bt she giggles & again goes on saying that.

Mrs. Khurana's eyes widened at this WHAT!!!!

Now what happened to you?

WHAT YOUR GEET UTTERS ALL THE TIME?

Mrs pratap answered perplexed thinking why is she being so hyper..MAAN..😕

My son..my chotu's name is MAAN.

A perfect silent & the mothers looked at each other.

*********

Maan was looking behind again & again what's wrong with this kid! She was following him all the way, no matter where he went, all the way giggling..pointing at him with her little chubby fingers maan maan maan maan..

He increased his pace a little, bt not too much..only to see what she does.

She also tried to increase her speed, bt fell wobbling.

GREAT!!! Now she will start crying like all the other kids..& all will scold me for making her cry!

Bt to his surprise..she didn't cry..she got up .still giggling with a small bump on her head, she looked very cute.

Is she an idiot!!maan thought seeing her smiling instead of the fact that she got hurt.

She wobbled her way up to maan & stretched her hand up to carry her. This time maan couldn't ignore her & carried her in his arms..her giggling increased 10 folds as she slathered his cheeks with her kisses aka saliva.

Maan smiled & kissed her cheeks & tickled her tummy,to which she laughed more..

That was the time the two ladies came running there. They did here the thud, so came to check..& they were astonished looking the sight in front of them.

Precap- Past &Geet's tuition!! 😉Who will be the teacher!😕.hmmm.thinking..what will happened to that bechara!😆

Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago

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