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Posted: 13 years ago
hell tired ..so just a small update as many of u requested will update both ffs on friday,a BIG one.bt i am now not going to pm this part or update TDSMOH, 😊
chapter 9
at night,all were sleeping,someone sneeked into geet's room in dark,there was something in his hand.
He turned on the nightlamp & the sight made his heart drown in immense pain,which was already sore due to guilty.her cheecks had blue fingermarks on them,there were trails of tears,there were still bloodspots in corner of her mouth & nose which indicated bleeding.he just hugged her burning body chanting,sorry geet,i am sorry,pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya tha,i am really sorry.
geet stirred a little,bt was not fully conscious du to drags.she hugged him tight & started crying furiously & continued to mumble in her semi sleep..geet ko ap logo se chorke nahi jana,geet kavi vi shararat nahi karegi,geet ne pakka promise,geet good girl banegi,geet kan pakarke sorry,geet ko apko chorkar vi nahi jana,geet khud khayegi,khilane ki zid nahi karegi,geet khud nahayegi,geet bahuuut achi larki banagi,geet ko ap logo se alag nahi rehna...
he just hugged him more tight,kissing her face allover..thn it struck to him,she did not eat at all,he was more angry at himself. he called geet ..
geet,utho baccha,chalo khalo,geet,utho...
bt geet was still in her sleep ranting those words again & again crying..
shh..shhh,chup baby chup,it's ok,chup ho jao sweety,kuch kha lo.
she was still not responding,so he just pulled her to his lap,cradelling her,like a mother holds her infant child while feeding,then with spoon by spoon,made her drink the milk which he had brought.
after feeding her,he made her lie down & covering ith spread,he kissed her forhead,cleared her tears with hands very lovingly ,switching of the light,he went from there.
when he cameout frm geet's room,suddenly,the lamp nearbyit up,he was startled,then saw kavita was standing there with a very calm expression.
chalo kuch kha lo,tumne kuch nahi khaya.
he fumbled,saying nahi..wo..main..geet,nahi..wo .wo
tumhe jo batana hai,badme bolna,avi khanechalo,maine vi nahi khaya.
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maan & kavita were in dining table,..
baki sabne khaya??
wo khana to nahi chate the,lekin maine zorzabardasti khila diya.
they were eating silently,stealthily looking at each other when the other is not noticing.
suddenly kavita said,kitni bholi aur pyaari hai na???
ha.. bahut.
kavi vi kisiko chot nahi phauchati..
ha..
shararati hai,par dil se ek bacche ki tarha saaf hai na??
ha..he chuckeled remembering her naughtyness & childishness.
ekdum choti si baby hai..
jab jante hi ho ki wo kavi janke kisi ko kuch bura nahi bolegi tab kyu kiya aisa??
now his smile wiped off & there was his face became dark with sadness,guilty & pain.
aunty pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya,jab sam ko usne ye sab kaha to mujhe bahut bussa aa gaya,upar se subha se pareshan tha kucj clients ko lekar. jo vi ho usse sam se aise baate nahi karni chahiye thi..
beta agar use wo kya bol rahi hai uska matlab pata hota to shayed wo kavi na kehti..aur ye shayed tum vi jante ho
now maan had nothing to say..he just dipped his head in shame,shame of loosing his control,regret for treating such badly with a doll like geet,who was in all sense a glass doll,fagile & clear from heart.he knew he has to do something to pay this.
apne gusse pe kabu karo beta,gusse se kuch nahi hota,main janti hu ki itni hi baat nahi hai jitni tumne bataya,agar tum batana nahi chate to koyi baat nahi,tumhari taklif tum kisise vi baat sakte ho,par iskeliye kisiko dard maat do.she started to go towards her room.
thanks aunty mujhe samaj ne ke liye,apne sahi kaha,aur vi kuch hai,bt main apko bata nahi sakta.ye meri majburi hai.
koi baat nahi beta.
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precap-maan manifoying geet😊😉

Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
a big thankooo
Edited by jssood - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor geet...what happened to maan?????
normaly i never hate maan no matter how rude or evil hz character is in any ff bt in dis update i tuly hate him...how vud he just slap geet...

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Edited by Ash1991 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
GOSH poor geettt !!
eagrly waiting 4 nxt prt...cntnue sooonnn..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem maan regretting kavita made him understand do next soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one
but still not able to
forgive maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
he apologized...but i m not satisfied...
poor geet..hw much she has to go thru b/c of him..

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part...

chalo maan ko apni galti ka ehsaas tho hua...continue soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 8
what the heck was that?
Maan didnt even say a thing to Sameera when she slapped her and also he too slapped her...
i thought Maan will be somewhat concerned but no hes so disgusting...
didnt ever expect this from Maan...
poor Geet...
cont soon...
Edited by spvd - 13 years ago
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