Creative Thrd2:U can only be Mine,Just mine 145/6 - Page 62

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Posted: 13 years ago
ash: abhi update karna hai toh kar le..i havent even opened word yet..hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
naa u do it
abhi sir pe semester ka tension hain
next week se hain n me not even prepared
dimaag mein kuch bhi nahi aa rha..
u do it pleejjj
will join u guys later wen am free...
abhi mood bhi not ok!!!!!

me totally on writers block yaar
am not even updating my own ff!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
update soon my wonderful ff writers :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
i will update after 5 pm IST...pakka..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

i will update after 5 pm IST...pakka..

shreya🤗🤗ok yar we'll wait😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
read all parts in one go
how could his own dadi do to the unborn child
and that too in the name of khurana
really want to see a strong maan now coz he needs to take care of geet plus change the mind of his dadi ... rather she should b punished
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Posted: 13 years ago

Maan: but my baby...he is not here with me...we had so many high hopes and dreams..I even thought about the name of the baby...the baby room, toys everything..its all gone (he cries hugging her...Dadima looks ahead in Geet's room with anger...)

Part 62

Next day the doctor discharged her but she still would not react to anything. She would look at everyone as though she was looking through them. The only time she had reacted was when suhana had given her the teddy. Though suhana had stayed with her and slept with her geet was still a statue.

It was in the afternoon when they reached back home. Dr had advised her complete bed rest looking at her mental state and given some medicines so that she could sleep.

After reaching home maan had made her eat and have the medicines. She had slept off and he crept out of the room and into the hall when his phone rang.

Mr. Khurana I am Geet's dr could u come to the hospital please.

Dr. everything alright.

Yes..its something about Geet.

I will be there in ten min.

And without looking back he drove to the hospital and walked into the dr's cabin without waiting a minute.

Geet..he asked as soon as he enetered.

She is fine mr Khurana pls sit down.

But..

Pls Mr. Khurana sit down I will tell u everything.

He took a deep breath and sat down.

Mr. Khurana maine Geet ke tests kiye the kal and what I found out was that she was poisoned with a pill that's not very much in use. I found the remains of the pill from the fetus that we removed from her body.

But..

I may be wrong but it looks like she was given the medicine on purpose and that too by someone who wanted to kill the baby not her. The person knew the way the pill works and its action.

He didn't know how to react that. Someone killed his baby and made his geet a statue.

I promise whoever it may be will not be forgotten. I shall find out soon.

Thanku dr. he nodded and walked out.

He was in a daze and drove back home.

He entered to see dadi smiling and talking on the phone.

He looked at her shocked but just walked up without paying any attention to her.

He reached to his room and saw that Geet though asleep had streaks of tear stains on her face.

He shook her and she got up.

He looked at her eyes..Her eyes were red.

Geet..

He shook her but she looked at him blank.

He wrapped his arms around her. She rested her head on his shoulder but still didn't cry.

Geet..baby nahi aayega..and he put his one hand on her tummy.

He wanted to make her cry.

She still didn't move.

He moved her away and brought the dresses and shoes she had brought for the baby a few days back.

Geet..yeh ab kisi kaam ke nahi hain..

She looked at him and then at the things on the bed.

Phek do..she said in a cold voice.

Geet..he almost shouted.

She looked at him blank.

Geet..baby nahi aayegaa..koi tumhe kabhi yahaan par kick nahi karega..tum kisi ko dubara yeh dresses nahi pehna paaogi..he kept his hand on her tummy again.

She flinched.

It was the first reaction he had got from her in last two days.

Geet..koi mujhe papa aur tumhe mama nahi kahega..tum kisi pe apni mamta nahi luta paaogi..koi tumhe poora nahi karega..

He could see her eyes getting misty. He knew a little more and she would cry. He was hurt and pained too but she had to cry.

Geet..koi tumhara se apna jeevan ki Shakti nahi mangega..and he touched her chest lightly koi tumhari god mein nahi khalega..and he kept a toy in her lap.

She sobbed and broke into tears.

He hugged her immediately.

She sobbed into his shoulder and he patted her back.

Maan..baby chala gaya..

He let her cry holding her into him.

She sobbed incessantly and her sobs turned into hiccups but her tears didn't seem to stop.

Geet shh..bas karo..Hum dono hai na..baby ko hum nahi bhoolenge haina..

She nodded her head but didn't leave him.

Geet..ab tum let jaao..

She shook her head.

He pulled her away and kissed away her tears. She closed her eyes. He kissed her eyes. She pulled him closer.

His touch was weaning away the pain in her.

He kissed her forehead once and asked her to lie down.

She lay down but her head rested in his lap.

He removed his shoes and made her comfortable. Within few minutes she had slept off holding his hand.

He kissed her forehead and his hand touched her bosom.

He remembered how the night before she had kept the doll on her bosom as though she was deriving nourishment from her.

She has squealed.. Maan humara baby bhi aise he meri godh mein khelega na..and she had touched the dolls lips to her nipples.

He had turned naughty and shown her how the baby would suck milk from her.

He had lied down in her lap and sucked her nipples.

She giggled at the feel of his lips on her chest. Maan..she moaned when he licked and sucked her giving her breasts due attention and feasting on them.

He smiled at the memory. He then looked at the girl who lay in his arms. She seemed pale with no happiness on her face. A few hours and everything had changed. He looked at the pain on her face and his heart wanted to cry for her.

He wanted to make her pain go away and keep her in his embrace but before that he wanted to punish who made HIS GEET cry so much and snatched away her dreams.

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Posted: 13 years ago
I hope some miracle happens means may be geet becomes pregnant again.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

I hope some miracle happens means may be geet becomes pregnant again.

u will have to wait for that...
ket dadi be punished..uske baad..
PS: did this make u cry...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
very sad
i hope geet recover soon

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