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Posted: 11 years ago
Perfect banner for the story 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Perfect banner for the story 👍🏼

thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh RB!! I cant believe I missed so many updates of this story...I guess this is what happens if I keep checking if you have updated the cult or not and not check your tweets...lesson learnt!!
Just caught up with all the chapters and I absolutely love this story...love how Maan-Geet relationship is slowly evolving...the after dinner convo between Maana nd Geet was one of a kind...just like the participants...
Happy New Year to you too RB!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

"I'll be here," Maan said after swallowing. "Isn't that a good enough reason for you to come?"

shoo...I love love love this guy!!!
But what came next both broke her heart and elated at the same time.
siighhh - only you can write like this RB!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Writer,
My apologies in advance.this is not my comment post, that post is next in row.my this post is dedicated to your this story and its calming effects. this post is also not for promotion or discussion of Gurmeet or his present show.its just a
me sharing about how soothed I felt after reading MAANEET here...

it all happened like...none of my fav. writer has updated...so out of boredom,I was venturing in different forum. and then I reached forum of reality show wherein Gurmeet is currently participating(Tauba tauba will not do it again)... So much negativity was there...that I literally escaped like a cat with her tail in legs... I was so disturbed that I was ready to read any story in thus own forum... AND THAT IS WHEN I SAW THE UPDATE... So relieved I was ...and then when I finished the chapter.. I let out a calming sigh... and was like...this is where I belong...
thank you writer...

I hope you didn't mind my this post...

love


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Edited by sanjh89 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
As I have interpreted, this chapter appeared to be a depiction of GEET's emotional attachment towards MAAN and glimpse of MAAN's emotional attachment towards GEET...
the way GEET took HIS "I LIKE YOU" as a commentary on weather.it has shown the simple nature and simple expectation she holds...
"A HONEYED HUM..." ...now that was as beautiful as a brilliant cinematography of a serenic silent romantic scene...
she didnt wanted to disturb micro cosm of his words...
she wasn"t fully understanding his gravity,yet was listening totally...
"SHE SMILED WHEN SHE FELT MAAN'S PRESENCE,INVADING HER SPACE AND MARKING AS HIS OWN"( the most soulful part)...
these three parts have shown the depth of her attraction which she has left free to move on...
"HE WAS VENTURING ...FOREIGN TO HIM"
HE HAD NEVER FELT THIS ALIVE BEFORE...(another best line)
the ease with which he described himself and confusion of others regards him to her...
"...CONTINUE TO INTERACT ON CONTINUAL BASIS WITHOUT ANY ADDITIONAL AGENDA..." these parts are showing that how slowly but guardingly MAAN is encouraging his attraction...

overall this entire chapter and its reading was as I have mentioned in earlier post...calming

love


SANJH



Edited by sanjh89 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
HAPPY NEW YEAR
awesome update
I love maan and Geet conversation especially the planet part.
They are indeed getting closer n habitual of each other presence.
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
just came across this story

its so beautiful i liked it very much. Maan and geet's interaction is so lovely and different. every words u wrote its just superb.


both are slowly coming closer
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
I love this geet maan convo a lot
Maan accepting that it is better that naintara and dev are getting married
Geet agreeing to it
Maan accepting indirectly that they both are way closer now.
Just Fabulous
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
They were now closer than that.


how do u define 'closer'... by that does it mean u can sit silent in each other comp n not feel awkward... or does it mean that u talk for hrs n yet it seems like a few minutes...

in their case...i think it is just diff...

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