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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
maan n geet both have unique way to express their feelings...
love the way geet fighting with herself to hide her growing feelings for maan...
maan also expressed his feeling for geet in his own way...
loved it...
last update will miss it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RockBarbie



Well how about this -

Check out girlfriday and -sookie- and there are some unfinished MG FFs there. Pick one and I will complete that :=) That sounds good? [will be posting as RockBarbie]

This is an open invitation for all. :=)

Let me know by next weekend...


can u give the links of the ff's???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon


can u give the links of the ff's???



Here you go:

a) Memento Mori

Maan is an ex-cop turned private investigator. Geet is an ex-heiress turned Maan's associate.

b) Omerta

Maan is a weapon smuggler and Geet dances in a club from Maan's rival gang.

c) Convergence

Geet goes back to her ancestral house and starts walks on the thin line between fantasy and reality.

d) Eternal return

Maan here is ACP - Assistant Commissioner of Police who starts investigating a case in which Geet is brought in for her expertise. As the case unfolds both Maan and Geet are forced to confront their demons and an old investigation is re-opened.


These.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RockBarbie



Here you go:

a) Memento Mori

Maan is an ex-cop turned private investigator. Geet is an ex-heiress turned Maan's associate.

b) Omerta

Maan is a weapon smuggler and Geet dances in a club from Maan's rival gang.

c) Convergence

Geet goes back to her ancestral house and starts walks on the thin line between fantasy and reality.

d) Eternal return

Maan here is ACP - Assistant Commissioner of Police who starts investigating a case in which Geet is brought in for her expertise. As the case unfolds both Maan and Geet are forced to confront their demons and an old investigation is re-opened.


These.


thanx for the links 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
THEY WERE THEM !!!


that was the most apt brief of their bonding...

In the last paragraph the way their beginning was described..it is the advanced stage of a couple's life...particularly affection and comfort..


You have used,regarding them all the sentiments that are branch of love but not the word love itself...and that is the best thing which leaves the reader with a satisfaction to imagine and frame their "ever after"...


The lovliest was "you idiot"..


P.S. Preivous chapter remains your best written...

love

SANJH
Edited by sanjh89 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

They weren't in love or anything. They didn't even know if what they felt for each other was tangible enough to pursue for a future together.

They did have something. They had moments. They had memories. They had feelings. There was attraction. There was affection. There was understanding and ready acceptance. There was a pull neither could deny. They understood each others passion. In the eyes of the world, they were wired wrong. But they found the jarred edges of their personalities slotted together perfectly. They were better together than being alone. They were them. And that was enough to put their rejections, disappointments behind and start something new. It was time.

The serendipitous moment had passed.

They cheered together on the other side of it.



This definitely moved something in me. Wondering if the final summing it up affected every one else this way or was it just me. A non conventional FF which i quite enjoyed. Amazing work. Thanks for this.

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Posted: 11 years ago
First OMERTA. That was the most killer cliff hanger, I have ever been left upon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant! Enjoyed reading it. Thanks :).
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow i have read all parts together simply amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely end or should I say wonderful start of a new relation!!!

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