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Posted: 13 years ago
@shreya
oyeee mchopra😆
hope u dun mind me calling u tht!!
me off for today
dead sleepy🥱
will read ltr okies
byee
gn sd

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

@shreya
oyeee mchopra😆
hope u dun mind me calling u tht!!
me off for today
dead sleepy🥱
will read ltr okies
byee
gn sd

No i read that...Oh thts fine if u wanna cont..ppl usually dont find it very comfortable..thts why..😆
chalo u sleep me will type and put it up..
Bye Gn
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum updates by all the writers
waiting for the next part eagerly
plz update soon
n i agree geet shouldnt save maan right now maybe sometime later she will come to know when suhana climbs on maans back or something like that
but abhi nahi
let him suffer for some days
n geets familys reaction was unexpected
hitting her with a belt
gosh
hate that brij
bhai hain ya kasai?
update soon
waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Kya galat kaha maine..theek he toh kaha..aapne mere sharer ko use kiya aur chal diye..par aap yeh nahi samajah paaye ki maine aapko khud ko saunpa tha aur isi liye main is bacche ko is duniya mein chahti hoon..aapke liye maine aapki ek raat suhaani banayi thi par mere liye maine apne aap ko us insaan ko saunpa tha jis se main kabhi bahut pyaar kiya THA..

Part 37

Maan stood numb hearing her speak. He was not shocked at her outburst but he was guilty at the amount of pin he caused her and what he made her think about his own self. He knew he would have to rectify the mistake but he didn't know how. The only thing he knew he could do was to love her so that one day she would love him back the way she did that night.

Two weeks later..

Geet was now over two months pregnant. Suhana had gone back to her school. The only topic on which maan would talk to her was also gone.Things haven't become better but they have definitely improved.

She wouldn't be cold but she would not talk to him too. The only time they had a conversation was when the issue of the baby came up.

Geet wanted to work but maan had strictly forbidden her as the doctor had told him that the stress in her initial weeks of pregnancy had made her weak and any further stress could harm anyone and they could even lose Geet.

Geet stayed in her room most of the time reading about pregnancy or her course books. Maan had arranged for her to continue her studies from home since she wanted to study and she had taken up the Job only to support her family.

Geet missed among being friends but she had made her little one her best friend. She would talk to him for hours and then suhana would also call her daily after her school was over and talk to her about the happenings of the day.

It was one such day when maan was in office and geet was at home studying in her room. She wanted water but noticed that the jug was empty.

She proceeded towards the kitchen when she noticed that the door of maan's room open. She was surprised for it was closed at the times when he was not in the house. She tiptoed in to see if anyone wa around but couldn't find anyone but couldn't let go of the urge to go in and see his room.

The room was huge with large bed in centre, books and files at one end and a table at one end, The room was beautiful but the condition of the room was disastrous. It was a mess.

The room smelt of him and she remembered the night he had loved her. He had filled her not only with his love and aroma but his touch on her skin had made her feel so alive. She remembered his tongue on her neck exploring it. Her hand touched along her neck as if she could feel him there. Her hand then went down and she reached her chest where she remembered the moans that escaped her lips when he fondly suckled on her nipples making her ecstatic. Her hand then moved down to her tummy and she jolted. The little one in there, the pain her family had given her all came rushing back to her.

She removed her hand from her tummy and looked about the room. His aroma would not let her leave from there but she hated him for what he did to her. How can I like his touch after the pain he made me go through..how can I forgive him when I know he doesn't love me but used me and he wants only the baby..he told me that day on the airport. How can I devour his touch on my body.

She moved about the room when her foot banged aginst the table. She sat down on the chair to message her toe. She looked on the table where she found a picture of herself kept in a book. She wanted to see what that book contains and so she opens it.

Before she could start reading the phone starts to ring. She rushes to her room and it was suhana.

Aunty bade papa ko bolo na mujhe aaj lene aa jayen..

Kya matlab..

Mere ko 3 days ki holiday hai..mujhe aapke paas rahena hai..aap bolo na..

Theek hai suhana..aap chinta mat karo bade papa sham ko aapke school mein honge..ab aap has do..

Geet then sat down on her chair while suhana started narrating the events of the day.

It was about an hour later when suhana finally kept the phone down.

Geet called up maan.

Maan who was busy in a meeting was shocked to see a phone call from home and immediately picked up the phone.

Maan..

Geet..tum theek toh ho na..tum ruko main abhi ghar aa raha hoon..tum let jaao dr bhi pahunch rahe..

Maan..she shouted..

It was then he stopped talking..

Maan main theek hoon..

He took a breath.

Who suhana..

Kya hua suhana ko..

Kuch nahi..aap ek min mujhe bolne denge..

He nodded his head as if she could see it.

And then explained what suhana said

Aap jab tak suhana ko school se le na aaye tab tak ghar mat aayegi and she banged the phone down.

He looked at the phone for a minute and smiled.

He liked that she bossed over home and even give him an order.

Maan came back home with suhana at about 10 and suhana ran directly to Geet's room where she found geet sitting on a chair holding a book and sleeping.

Maan who was coming behind her smiled t the sight in front of him and gently lifted the books off her and picked her up.

He then placed her on the bed and tucked her in.

Geet smiled when he touched her stomach. He touched it again and she smiled again. He knew she wa liking it.

He told suhana to go to her room and change and he would be with her in a minute.

She left he then placed his hand on her gently growing belly and rubbed it.

She kept her hand on top of his. He moved his hand again and this time he moved her top up to feel the skin. He rubbed her again and he could feel her skin tightening under her palms.

He bent down and gently kissed her belly and said.."I love u baby..i know I cant be with u…but I will be when ur mamma forgives me..i love her too..but I have hurt her..i will make it to her soon..but u don't worry and dnt trouble mamma.." he kissed her once again before covering her belly and tucking her to sleep.

Geet smiled in her sleep feeling his lips and hands on her body. She didn't know the man whom he hated so much had given his life to see that smile on her lips.

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Posted: 13 years ago
if no one else continues..i will be back soon to cont..rght now no more..this is too long already...
hope u like the story and suhana is there for a reason..so pls dont let her go if somone else writes..i need her..hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shreya awesome part sorry dossed off b4 commenting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nyc update
good 2 c suhana back
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note: Great job by aarth, simi, shreya and others.. Keep up the good job guys..👏

Well, there has been discussions about continueing this story in a new thread since many people do not want the story to be rushed.

There is no problem in starting a new thread, but the response it gets is a problem. If the readers abondon that thread then it will be like an insult to us writers. So please do let me know by liking this post, how many are in favour of starting a new thread!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
shreya yar mindblowing update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
kathie yar this story is going very awesomly aur abhi tu bohat khuch baqi hai so sweety NEXT THREAD TOO BANTA HAI YAR😆

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