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tanei

@tanei

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#911

ya dear shorle start a new thread i hope now prob in that

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#912

@shreya
OYEE MCHOPRA 🤣
i loved the update yaar
so so so beautiful
and loved when geet smiled when he touched her tummy
shooo cute!!!!!

#kathie
me in favour dear
we SHOULD open a new thread for this but
WE HVE TO END THE STORY IN THAT THREAD ITSELF!!!
so hows it???

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Atiffa

@Atiffa

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#913

just read part 31, 32,33,34,35,&36

the writer have a done an amazing job with their parts

Love the the way the story is moving

Especially love the part 36 & 37

Cont soon

Luv

Atiffa

Edited by azee11 - 13 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#914

@ mchopra awesome, beautiful part
loved it
pls pls continue soon

@kathie dear pls continue the story to next thread as the story has lots of things to tell and we would love to read.

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#915

hey kathie...this story has a long way to go...pls do continue

awsome part mchopra

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tanei

@tanei

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#916

im writting next part plz give me sum time update soon

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#917

waiting waiting
double waiting 😆

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#918

luvd d update shreya...
but nw i em really feeling bad for maan..
but maan s not making any efforts to get her bak..

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tanei

@tanei

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#919

PART 38:

He kept his hand on her stomach thinking abt the nite they were together the trust se hand in him while give herself completely to him even he forgot about suhana presences at home .suddenly suhana came in to the room and tapped maan shoulder and he came out of his thought .suhana instead to sleep with geet ,maan smiled let it be the wa she wants.He liked the bond both of them were developing with the time.

Since many years have passed Maan never found a companion in his life until geet came to share himself with someone ,suhana was the only life he had but cant share his heart with her so he kept a dairy in his room and daily write sumthing in it even about geet and how he feels abt her. He was writing both his guilt and fear of losing geet as his ees were getting moist as he was unlocking his feeling.

Now suhana was here for 3 das he got a chance to mingle more with geet due to her he was delighted abt it.but here suhana has other plans in his mind thought she is 6 but sinces the da she had geet in her life she has a urge of having geet around her all the time she has protective feeling and a motherly care that she lack of ,the little devil was also observing his bade papa behavior towards geet also .she loves her to be in house and around both of them always

In morning when suhana woked up she saw geet moving her hand in her hair and greeted her with warm smile and "GOOD MORNING baby when did u came never waked me up. She instinatl got up and hugged her tightly geet was take a back by her sudden action.she called her "Suhana baby" .she came out of hug a similed then said "u were sleeping aunt so thought not to disturb you" with that suhana had a urge of speaking her little heart to geet and adjusted her self in her lap and

said "Aunty I want you to stay her with me for ever."

Geet eyes got wide open by her sudden words she kissed her forehead and smiled. Suhana again looking towards her and said"I miss my parents ,bade papa is always there for me but I need……"she paused and tears came in her eyes. geet immediately

Hugged her and promised to be with here always.suhana happiness was out of this world she kissed her don't knw nth times….

P.S. sorry for mistake