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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

who is next dear
plz update soon😉

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Good one afsha..

waise are we planning to have consequences of that night spent together ya no..

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kathie_berns

@kathie_berns

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

Awesome update afsha...

Hope somebody continues soon..

The thread is going at a slow pace compared to the previous threads but the story is quite gripping...👏

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: Shilalipi
updating in half hour

waiting😉

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

PART 23

maan is watching TOM&JERRY with suhana(MSK aur TOM&JERRY😲haey bechara🤣)suddenly suhana shouts loudly OMG OMG maan panicked and said "wat is it sweety why r u shouting"suhana cools down a little and said "oh nothing bare papa actualy i forgot mujhay ESHA(suhana's friend)se milnay park jana tha"

WHATTT maan shouts(ufff yeh dono hi kitna chilatay hain)u punnished me that i'll have to stay with u all time and now this park grrr😡NO NO i'm not coming with u and thats final😡.

SUHANA; app ko kon le ker ja raha hai park😲(in ko park le gayai too ESHA dar ke mar jayae gi aur uski mom meray bade papa ko drool karay gi sara time😡no no i'm not taking this risk(ajj kal ke bachay bhi na)at all)app ko nahi mujhay jana hai bade papa.

MAAN; WHATTT😲

yes i'm going to meet ESHA and u be a GOOD BOY(😲😲)and watch ur fav football i'll be back soon hmmm love u suhana kissed maan's cheek and ran outside.

maan thinks "what's this leaving me alone at home MSK ko wait kernay ka bol ker bhag gayai very good aik yeh suhana aur dosri geet dono hi aik se barh ker aik mili hain mujhay"(opps yeh maan babu ne kya socha😲).sudenly maan was shocked on his own thinking"god i'm thinking geet with suhana NO not at any cost MSK is never ever gona change for any girl.

but DESTINY has its own plans and at this time DESTINY is smiling at MSK THE GR888 😃

Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago

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Shilalipi

@Shilalipi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

Part 24

It has been almost a month since that night...now it was almost the end of suhana's vacation..maan was thinking "what now!!" as with suhana..days were bearable..but nights were OHHH..it was a pain!!!every night lying in his king size soft bed he whenever tried to sleep...geet..her smile..her laughter..her blush...& of course that night would be infront of his eyes...

"SUHANA SING KHURANA se bach kar mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai...ha ha ha ha...now come on adi uncle..don't be shy..come out.."

adi who was in verge of crying came out..all dressed in saari LIPSTIC!! wo BHI CHERRY RED & BINDI CHURIYA!!!!

before he could cry breaking down for his HALAT..came suhana's voice more demanding than maan.."AB NAACH BASANTI NAACH"

adi was actually suffering for maan's lie which he had told to save himself.

well it was a daily routine for suhana & adi to dress up like that & dance...he thanked his stars that he was given this punishment in KM & not in KC..or else he Would hav left no iZZAT...

bt well..it was fun with little suhana too..bt he wondered what happened to his boss...after returning from the island he seems to be always lost somehere...

"bade papa... bade papa... BADE PAPAAA...""suhana shouted..

".ye.yes baby.."

i want to go to shopping mall to bye new toys...suhana pouted

of how can i refuse my sweetheart..lets go...

yiipieee

maan was cursing himself all the while to the shopping he mentally chided himself

"what's wrong with u maan!! after 10 days suhana will return & instead of spending time with her..u r daydreaming about geet!!urgh!! i hate that girl!!"

suhana was buying toys ..when maan got a imp call & he went to the side to attend it..suhana was a big fan of GOLGAPPA..she saw a chat wala on the other side of the road..she saw maan & rolled her eyes..oh god this call won;t end soon!!so she thought to cross the road & then she will call maan later after eating as maan otherwise will not let her eat from roadside chatwala!!

geet was sitting at the park across the road thinking about her life..how it turned 180 after that night...she was inclined to leave the house her parents..all becuse of that night...yes she was pregnant..& the day her parents & her brother knew.. they wanted her to abort the child..bt how can she..it was the only sign of maan left to her other than memories..she was thrown out of the house by her brother..& her parents even could not do anything..she was going to mumbai tomorrow as delhi became more & more unbearable for her day by day & she wanted to leave the city..fotunately meera had a flat there & she offered it to her..so...

suddenly breaking our of the trance she saw a small girl crossing the road..a car was coming towards her... without thinking she un towards her &...

maan was distracted from the call by the sound of cars suddenn halt..he saw that suhana was not in the shop...waiting for the worse he ran towards there...he saw a crowd formng there & after passing through the crowd...

the sight he saw crumbled the earth beneath him..suhana was crying .."aunty aunty utho na..suhana ko darr lag raha hai...aunty..aunty.."

geet was lying there lifeless all covered with blood..

he could not even scream..only a whisper came from his mouth..geet!

he was in the hospital..with suhana by her side sleeping...

dr. came out..".MR KHURANA..."

maan like a cheetah just pounced on him..with red bloody eyes holding he doctor's colar..

HOW IS SHE HOW IS SHE..WHY ARE U NOT SAYING ANYTHING DAMMIT!!!! HOW IS SHE!!!!!!!

mr khurana..it has been more difficult to save her life as your wife is PREGNANT

Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: Shilalipi
It has been almost a month since that night...now it was almost the end of suhana's vacation..maan was thinking "what now!!" as with suhana..days were bearable..but nights were OHHH..it was a pain!!!every night lying in his king size soft bed he whenever tried to sleep...geet..her smile..her laughter..her blush...& of course that night would be infront of his eyes...
"SUHANA SING KHURANA se bach kar mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai...ha ha ha ha...now come on adi uncle..don't be shy..come out.."
adi who was in verge of crying came out..all dressed in saari LIPSTIC!! wo BHI CHERRY RED & BINDI CHURIYA!!!!
before he could cry breaking down for his HALAT..came suhana's voice more demanding than maan.."AB NAACH BASANTI NAACH"
adi was actually suffering for maan's lie which he had told to save himself.
well it was a daily routine for suhana & adi to dress up like that & dance...he thanked his stars that he was given this punishment in KM & not in KC..or else he Would hav left no iZZAT...
bt well..it was fun with little suhana too..bt he wondered what happened to his boss...after returning from the island he seems to be always lost somehere...
"bade papa... bade papa... BADE PAPAAA...""suhana shouted..
".ye.yes baby.."
i want to go to shopping mall to bye new toys...suhana pouted
of how can i refuse my sweetheart..lets go...
yiipieee
maan was cursing himself all the while to the shopping he mentally chided himself
"what's wrong with u maan!! after 10 days suhana will return & instead of spending time with her..u r daydreaming about geet!!urgh!! i hate that girl!!"
suhana was buying toys ..when maan got a imp call & he went to the side to attend it..suhana was a big fan of GOLGAPPA..she saw a chat wala on the other side of the road..she saw maan & rolled her eyes..oh god this call won;t end soon!!so she thought to cross the road & then she will call maan later after eating as maan otherwise will not let her eat from roadside chatwala!!
geet was sitting at the park across the road thinking about her life..how it turned 180 after that night...she was inclined to leave the house her parents..all becuse of that night...yes she was pregnant..& the day her parents & her brother knew.. they wanted her to abort the child..bt how can she..it was the only sign of maan left to her other than memories..she was thrown out of the house by her brother..& her parents even could not do anything..she was going to mumbai tomorrow as delhi became more & more unbearable for her day by day & she wanted to leave the city..fotunately meera had a flat there & she offered it to her..so...

suddenly breaking our of the trance she saw a small girl crossing the road..a car was coming towards her... without thinking she un towards her &...
maan was distracted from the call by the sound of cars suddenn halt..he saw that suhana was not in the shop...waiting for the worse he ran towards there...he saw a crowd formng there & after passing through the crowd...
the sight he saw crumbled the earth beneath him..suhana was crying .."aunty aunty utho na..suhana ko darr lag raha hai...aunty..aunty.."
geet was lying there lifeless all covered with blood..
he could not even scream..only a whisper came from his mouth..geet!
he was in the hospital..with suhana by her side sleeping...
dr. came out..".MR KHURANA..."
maan like a cheetah just pounced on him..with red bloody eyes holding he doctor's colar..
HOW IS SHE HOW IS SHE..WHY ARE U NOT SAYING ANYTHING DAMMIT!!!! HOW IS SHE!!!!!!!
mr khurana..it has been more difficult to save her life as your wife is PREGNANT

awesome update yar but do me a favour make it part 24 i wrote 23 and i'm sending it some cute moments with suhana sooo plz u tag ur update as part 24😃

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nehaagarwalv

@nehaagarwalv

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#568

👏 Interesting updates shilalipi.

For Maan now it would be like ek hi bhul, for which Geet has suffered so much😉

He should be punished for his deed, first he kidnaps her, uses her and then leaves her. Thats Cruel and very mean...Poor geet, thrown out of her own house. She could do nothing as she was kidnaped. She was trapped and cheated into false love and concern. She should hate Maan for being in such a position and he disappeared without even taking any responsibility and after that night he ignored her completely.

😆 Loving it!!!!! update soon!!!!!