Creatv thrd:You can only be mine,jst mine,nt:pg144 - Page 56

Wow dear part 22 rocked yaar wat hapnd to dadima v have to have her rite...and just nw i remembered yash is geet's frnd and coleague so can v change name of suhana dad to dev.

awesome update...waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Sorry no Maaneet jus Suhana n MaanHop ull like itDo let me knw

Part 22

How can Bade Papa not love his Angel knowing that she is home he left his every working then and there and flew back to his Angel he said lifting her twisting her in the air and kissing his still angry cute little Khurana who is his life.

Maan hugged the only person of his life who culd ryt now take away his pain
He hugged her hard making impossible for her to breath
S: Bade Papa i cant breath Suhana said still angry but sumwhr happy after seeing him
Maan let his hold get loose but didnt move out of hug
M:So did my Angel forgive me
Suhana nodded her head in negative
Maan similing to himself moved out of hug making sad face said
M:Oh phir to Bade Papa ko punishment milni chahiye hmm May be he shuld work more or may be he shuld go to the office n saty there till Suhana dosent ask him to cum back
He looked at suhana for any reaction n saw her temper rising
M:No that will be easy better he shuld go to tht meeting which is out of Delhi
Suahan opened her mouth in shock n putting her hands on her hips asked
S: Are u deciding urself punishment or sum gft
I knw how much u love to work so thats not all the punishment
Maan controlled his smile n said
M:Really i thought u wuldnt wanna see my face
S:Who said that
Maan making straight face said
M:Adi n similed thnking Adi wil be dead now n felt bad also
But he cant let his angel be angry on him for long
Suhana's face became red in anger reminding him of Geet but he jus forced her out of his thoughts n concentrated on Suhana who was now palnning to kill Adi
S:Us Adi ko toh I wnt leave him how dare he says lik that
Maan saw her she reminds him of himself
Same anger at the age of jus 5
She can kill sumone for nt agreeing with her or doing what she asked
M:Its ok Angel so say me what my punishment
He asked thnking that she will forget Adi n he will be saved frm more attacks of his angel
Suhana smiled that naughty smile which Maan knew that means she is upto sumthg
She jumped on the bed sitting herself comfortably n said
S:Nthg much jus u have to stay with me all the tym till my holidays get over
She smiled thnking her holidays are for a month n how her bade papa wil miss the office
She knew he wuldnt agree this will make her increase her punishment n thats what she wanted
She patted herself mentally that evn at the age of 5 she was so intelligent n cunning but after all she learned frm the best that is Maan Singh Khurana
She smiled thnking that
Maan gasped n Suhana's smiled widen
Maan thought one month how can he stay away frm Geet for month not touching her not seeing her smile
How will he pass his day witout seeing her eyes twinkel whenevr she is happy or upto sum mischief
How will pass his day witout her smile
His heart was gng out giving reasons to him of nt agreeing jus than his mind asked him why was he thnking so much abt her
He wanted her body he got it Than why is he now thnking so much abt her when he knew that he himself have given her pain
He knew that she wuldnt have given herself to him witout trust n love
But he jus broke it as the moment she dirfted to sleep he left her
He didnt spoke to her evn in the flight leave speaking he didnt evn glanced at her when he knew she was looking at him jus him for answers than why now he was thnking so much abt her
His heart gave another reason u never agree to miss office at any cost than how can u miss now when she will be infrnt of ur eyes all the tym
U got that company jus to be with her ryt
Mind no i didnt got for her but that was for business pure business as that company will give me profit in sumtym
Heart really pure buisness it said as if mocking at brain
brain jus suldnt take that n said u never say No to Suhana how can u say now
Heart making weird face on that but didnt said anythg
Maan thought abt it n it was true he never said no n now also he wnt say no
Atleast this will give him sum tym away frm her n he will get her out frm his heart
Thnking that he said OK
Suhana looked ta him shocked
Maan saw her shocked face n smiled n said
M:I accept the punishment so say what will do this whole month
Suhana sat there shock that her plan failed now how she will get what she wanted
She wanted to get angry but was sumhwr happy that she will get to stay with her Bade Papa all the tym till a month
So she jumped frm the bed n hugged him
While Maan hugged her back sumwhr happy n sumwhr sad

Ok here is the part

Who is continuing can show whole month or jus pass it n show Geet n Maan's view as flashback

Sorry if ull didnt like it

@afsha..

hey afsha superb part yaar
me loving suhana...
guess she is not going to spare get now!!!
want a geet-suhana emotional confrontation..
n e 1 up writers????

gosh, you & your twists

why reya, shreya, bindu & aashu is not writing even a single part ???

hats off to you -- kawaii_geet, simi, angi, ruhi, kathie & aarthirajendran
what a turn of events, that "payback" part, suhana entry, adi's little trouble, their hawt love making
me dancing like idiot ... all of you are mixing all the emotion a story needs ... well done to each of you

want a meeting of Geet with suhana & how they both make Maan pull his hair

awesome updates,
maan & suhana's relationship is just cute.. :-)
keep up the gud work girls.,

Awesome part afsha..loved suhana she is so cute..and loved maan ka heart vs brain too much..

someone updating waiting 😍