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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Part 26 Shreya was so healing...Oh I loved it. It almost felt like he was trying to erase her wounds.


But "tum meri ho""...i thought it will be "main tumhaara hoon""

or did he mean, that he had erased Arjun's touch and now she is only his

Ritzy Latter...he meant that i dont care if u are touched before but when he kissed her nipples and breats which arjun ahd mailigned..he told her..now ur mine and every other mans touch is removed from u.. as far as i understand a girl would not let anyone touch her breasts until she knows that he will be the only one(india mein atleast)..and here deep down geet wouldnt have maan let her touch her if she hadnt beleived that she would marry any one else..

SIMI: I am still angry..HMPH
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 awesome part 25 26 just fantastic.loved the song in the last updates part 27 superb
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Thnks afsha..

where is nazmaa she wanted to write, kathie and simi too..
one of u take it over..then i will write another part...

im here is anyone writing next or shall i continue???
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Posted: 13 years ago
nazmaa take over..simi JUST BANNED me.. hmph
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Posted: 13 years ago
Give me 20 minutes to update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sherya am sorry😳
yaaar main toh tumhare bhale ke liye kehe rahi thi😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
Simi: awww tht doggie was so cute..how did u know i LOVE DOGS..i melt at the sight of them..
and mmm simi seriously i dint feel sleepy before 4 or 5 now..today i am here coz exams got over otherwise i would be studying 99.99% of time..so not ur fault..and me too just bhaav khaoing..hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Simi: awww tht doggie was so cute..how did u know i LOVE DOGS..i melt at the sight of them..

and mmm simi seriously i dint feel sleepy before 4 or 5 now..today i am here coz exams got over otherwise i would be studying 99.99% of time..so not ur fault..and me too just bhaav khaoing..hehe


ahhaah friend hoon mein tumhare toh itna toh credit dena chahiye lol😆😆😆
ahahaha ohh okay..how did you think you did on your exams?😆
hoep you pass!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


ahhaah friend hoon mein tumhare toh itna toh credit dena chahiye lol😆😆😆
ahahaha ohh okay..how did you think you did on your exams?😆
hoep you pass!

I will pass madame..i think so..hehe..
except one i think in others i knew wht i was writing..hehe...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Awww
Thank you so much
But i do write i have an FF also😆😆😆😆😆
Will try writing more now

seriously PM me the link na

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