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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: leverne
@shreya hot update..wow maan left her in the end..but i am happy he said ur mine..poor geet her wounds didn't heal yet..

Litteraly and emotionally they didnt' heal yet😭

i wonder what happened to vicky?😕

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Thnks swati, simi and nadia..

i think it was fine...he reached her, i couldnt make anything more thn that happen..pata nahi i couldnt..

next time pakka..

afsha: Jaldi..look 4 waiting souls u have..hehe

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Ruko Got the song posting in sum mins

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

i will write a part kal!😆

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#765

Originally posted by: leverne
@shreya hot update..wow maan left her in the end..but i am happy he said ur mine..poor geet her wounds didn't heal yet..

Exactly..i didnt want HOT wala HOt..this was ok..he claimed her with the lightest of his touches..he didnt kiss her even after baring her ..

she gotta be healed..and he will both ways..it was not correct..not now atleast..

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

Likh toh diya

Nw im scared of posting it😭

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

afsha: post kar ya Pm me..i will check it if u want..

jaldi kar..

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#768

Im posting If ull dnt like it toh pplz tell me

Fingers crossed

Maan walked out of the room while Geet laid on the bed
The window was open n Maan sat at the same chair where Geet was sitting before he came
Sumwhr the song started playing
It was as if the nature was showing Geet what Maan wanted to say

Boy
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
Maan looked at Geet whom he culd see sitting frm window
Geet avoided looking at Maan evn knwing that he is seeing her

Gal
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani

Gal
main achhi buri jaisi bhi hu
tu achha bura jaisa bhi hain
main teri hu kaisi bhi hu
tu mera hain kaisa bhi hain - 2
Geet looked at Maan listening to the words
Maan's eyes reflected same words

Boy
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam - 2
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam

Boy
toote hue dil ki kashti ko
toofan mein kinara mil jaaye
tu thaam le mera haath agar
dono ko sahara mil jaaye
Maan walked towards Geet hoping she wuld give in

Gal
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam - 2
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam

But he was wrng she jus turned her face frm him to the other side shwing him she didnt trusted what she saw in his eyes
Giving him the pain he had given her by not trusting her
He knew it wasnt so easy to pacify her
But wuld have hurt so much he didnt thnk that

Hop ull like it

Here is the video of it

If ull want ull can watch it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ny_rMlhoR5o&feature=fvsr

Edited by -afsha- - 13 years ago