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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -memorable-
beautiful OS ❤️

Thank you :)

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: krati5
firstly thnks 4 d pm dear... it ws a lovely os... a short one buit very well written ... a description of his whole life till nw in few paras... a nice one...😊

Short ?? o_O omg you know this is the longest OS I've ever written if you read my other works they are more shorter 😆

But glad to hear that you liked it and were not disappointed :)

Thanks a lot!

Cheers,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Gurti_Rocks
Thanks for the PM...You really did a great job...I loved the way u portrayed the feelings of both ...Good going!! would love to read more of your works... keep writing...😊

Hey,

Thanks a lot...felt good that you found it nice...

I'll pm you some of my works read if you like :)

Cheers,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Ramhari
Beautiful OS
Thanks for the PM
Your portrayal of his life's journey was beautiful
he went through a lot and finally found solace with her in his arms
Hope you continue the story
Hima

Hey Hima,

Thank you!
Glad you liked it...I din wanna drag more and hence had to cut short a lot...I did want to include a conversation between the two but then somehow it din fit in maybe I'll write about it next time hopefully :)

I'll try to continue but I can't give you an assurance due to my erratic schedule 😆

Cheers,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: smallville
awesome!!

Thank you... :)

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: t_areeb
really nicely written
like the way you gave introductions of the characters

and their small meeting

Glad you liked it and also glad that it came out well...and things din seem too much hurried!

Thanks a lot !

Cheers,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
awww...it was sweet one...
simple, short ( that managed to explain maan's life and their love story in a matter of a few paragraphs) yet simple...
really loved it

Reya <3

Hey Reya,

Thanks a lot dear...glad you liked it though yes technically speaking it was short considering the fact that I ended up describing Maan's whole life in some short paragraphs but glad it conveyed what it was supposed to be!

Thanks for the comment :)

Cheers,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
nice...simply beautiful..😊

Thanks a lot!
Glad you liked it :)

Cheers,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Alyaa_27
its lovely..

Thank you dear :)

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Is it necessary to write something Fatima?
Don't you think sometimes we don't want to write as we know that there is no word to express what you felt?

I feel like not commenting to say, "It was brilliant, or it was mind blowing." etc etc.

Indeed the way you have yet again directed your words to produce such One Shot. Definitely intriguing to continue and come to the end what you have wrote.

The craziness you shown in it's own beautiful way is containable. Not sure how far the love could drive you to that extent, although it does make you think...Kiya piyaar itni had tak logo ko andha banadeta hai ya phir pagal?

Shayad...yahi piyaar hai...dil tere bin kahin lagata nahi...waqt gujar ta nahi...kiya yahi piyaar hai...