MG FF- Nahin Hona Tha ~2~ Chp 24 Last pt Pgs 53-54 - Page 25

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Hey Maneetians! Sorry I haven't been updating (yes yes I always say that) but I just moved so its been quite insane in my house! Nonetheless here it is. This is the second last update!

Chapter 23
Forgiveness

"This entire incident was a misunderstanding Daarji and Dadajii…The properties were split 50/50 between papa and Rajveer uncle…" said Maan.

Meera then stepped forward and Noor put her arms around Veera protectively…

Meera gave the papers to Dadajii through the barbed wires…" The actual papers that Nitya hid from you all…"

Dadajii took the papers and he looked through them… Nitya looked very very afraid and yet she yelled, " NO THIS ISN'T TRUE!"

"Oh shutup you bloody witch" hissed Geet.

Dadajii looked defeated, " I cannot believe I didn't believe Naina…I can't believe that I turned against my best friend…all because of my daughter and her lustful desires?"

Daarji looked quite defeated as well… He was ashamed and disgusted of his grandson who seems to be going crazy… He rolled around the dirt laughing to himself chanting something…

He fell to his knees… He took his turban off and placed it on the ground…

Geet stumbled towards Daarji and she knelt down, but in reality fell down…
"Geet.. geet puttar arraam se!" said Daarji.

"Just erase these distances Daarji… it's time… for the sake of your son and Naina auntie who was like your daughter" said Geet.

Maan and Sameer helped Dadajii up and

Dadajii looked to Nitya, " I've never felt so betrayed in my life Nitya…never…"

"We have something for Nitya bua as well" said Sameer.

Sameer called the police, " You may take her away now… all evidences prove against her and they've arrived at your station…"

Nitya went to Dadaji's feet, " NO NO… PLEASE PAPA… PLEASE… MUJHE MAAF KARDEIN!"

Dadajii moved his feet away from her and then Maan said, " It's time to take these barbed wires away Daarji…"

Nitya stood up and she screamed, " PAPAA PLEASE! PLEASE PAPAAA!"

Dadimaa walked to Nitya and grabbed her arm and suddenly slapped her… Nitya was crying and pleading meanwhile Tej ran around like a crazy man talking to himself.

" He needs a mental asylum" said Veera with a tear slipping down her eyes.

"Bhabhi, Noor has handled it" said Meera.

And that evening, the nurses and medics of the mental hospital took Tej away. Veera didn't say one goodbye… she hated her husband too much to even say goodbye to him.

Meera smiled supportingly, " Bhabhi, life goes on…"

Veera nodded and tried to smile and she pointed at Daarji… Her eyes shined as they let the tears go…

Dadajii stepped to the barbed wires and he folded his hands in forgiveness, " Mujhe maaf karde Mohinder"

****Contd Below****



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"Main ek haara hua aur thaka hua insaan hoon Mohinderlal…aur zindagi bhar main aapne aap ko khoosoonga kay maine tera yakeen nahin kiya" said Dadajii.

"Yeh burayh haath tujhse maaf maangte hain…"

Daarji stumbled up as he helped Geet up… They both walked to the barbed wires…

Daarji folded his shaking hands, " Mujhe bhi maaf karde Rudra…"

Geet let out a small smile and Maan did too...

" It was all a misunderstanding Daarji, Dadajii…" said Maan.

"Maine tujhe maaf kiya Rudra…aur mujhe bhi karde" said Mohinderlal.

Dadimaa smiled and Dadajii nodded, " Maine bhi tujhe maaf kiya…"

" To yeh dosti phir se shuru karein?" asked Geet.

The two men nodded and they shook hands and held it up above the barbed wires, " Phir se…"

Suddenly, the police came and then arrested an protesting Nitya…

" Papaaa! Pleaseee" said Nitya.

"Le jao isse… I should never see her again…" said Dadajii.

Veera, Noor, Meera and Rano walked up behind Daarji and Geet… Dadimaa and Sameer stood behind Dadajii and Maan.

" And even more than us, we should ask our children for forgiveness" said Daarji.

Daarji turned to Geet and folded his hands, " Geet-"

Geet put her bloodied hands on Daarji folded hands, " Please… Daarji mujhe sharminda mat kijiye!"

Daarji placed his hand on Geet's head, " Rajveer was right… you are going to prove to be his pride…"

Geet had tears welling in her eyes and she hugged Daarji…

Dadajii turned to Maan and smiled at him proudly, " You and Sameer are Naina's pride…and I am so proud to have you and Sameer as my grandsons…"

Maan bent down to seek his blessings and Dadaji blessed him… Sameer smiled and then bent down as well..

"Tum dono mera ghuroor ho…sacha ghuroor.." said Dadajii proudly.

"Mohinderlal, Thakur Maan Singh Khurana se mil…" said Dadajii proudly. Mohinderlal smiled and he pat Maan on he shoulder, " Rab Rakha puttar… Rab rakha…"

Dadajii looked to Geet and smiled… " Idhar ayiye.."

Geet with the help of Daarji went to Dadajii and he put his hand on her head, " Sada khush raho Geet beti"

Geet folded her hands and she smiled, " Aur Dadaji…there is someone else you should thank too"

Dadaji frowned and Geet smiled, " Choteee………." Said Geet tiredly.

Sameer stepped forward and smiled his ultimately cheesy smile.

"Meera" called Maan with a deep smirk. Meera smiled shyly and she stood behind Geet..

" Inn dono ki wajah se hum sab phir ek saath hue hain…" said Maan.

Dadajii and Daarji let out a loud burst of laughter…

Veera walked to them and she put her arms around Geet, " Namaste Dadaji.."

"Yeh hain-" said Dadajii.

"Veera Rai Singhania…" said Veera. Dadaji's eyes twinkled, " Aap Yashvardhan Rai Singhania ki beti hain?"

"Ji" said Veera.

"Humne suna hain kay aap ek teacher ban ne wali thi?" asked Dadaji.

Geet smiled, " Aur banengi…bilkul banengi"

" Tomorrow at sunrise this sarhad will be gone from our lives Mohinder…" said Dadaji.

****Contd.Below****

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"Kal hi Rudra…" The men clasped hands and held it up in the air, " Yeh dosti kabhi nahin choote gi"

Dadimaa wiped the tear of joy and laughed.

"Rudra, tu kal mere ghar aayega…" said Mohinderlal. " Bilkul aaongaa…Rano beti kay haath kay parathay itne dino se nahin kaahye…"

Rano stood behind Veera and folded her hands, " Namaste papa ji"

Dadajii smiled, " Jeete raho beti…"

"Chaliye to phir kal milte hain!" smiled Daarji.

The two families exchanged goodbyes and Daarji helped Geet to the Handa haveli! Truly the sarhad was removed from their lives forever!




*******




The next morning, Geet yawned awake, " Hayeee!" She sat up on her bed and smiled at the sunshine finally shining into her room!

She lookedat the time, it was almost 11 am and no one had woke her up!

"Geeet!" called Veera bhabhi.

Geet smacked her forehead. She spoke too soon!
Geet snuggled back into bed and put the covers over her and Veera came in, " Geet! Uth jaa! Bohot ho gayi neend teri!"

"Kya bhabhi…choro naa" said Geet.

Veera carefully sat down and she pulled the cover off Geet's face, " Uth jaa…"

Geet smiled sweetly, " Uth gayi"

Veera laughed, " Aaja, tere liye nashta lagaya hua hain…"

"Thanksss bhabhi!" said Geet as she slipped out of bed.

Geet was fishing through her closet and she pulled out an outfit and then went into the washroom until she stopped and turned around.

Veera was smiling profusely and Geet frowned, " Bhabhi? Why are you smiling?"

"Geet begum, aapko pata nahin hain kay aaj kaun aarahe hain?" said Veera.

Geet's eyes widened and she smacked her forehead, " Haw! Main bhool gayi!"

She let out a small smirk and Veera sighed, " Pagal… jaa.."

Geet ran into the bathroom and shut the door hard. Veera laughed and she started to make Geet's bed.

A few minutes later, Geet walked out of the washroom and started to dry her hair… She looked at her phone which had a million texts from Maan.

Geet smiled and Veera smirked, " itni subah subah Geet ji?"

"Oh ho Bhabhi stop it…" said Geet.

Veera laughed, " Acha jaldi se aa!"

Geet nodded and she did her makeup and then went down the stairs. She looked at the haveli too shocked for her own self.

The haveli was lit up, cleaned corner to corner… Geet could smell the food cooking… She stumbled down and then she saw Daarji at the dining table reading his newspaper.

"DAAARJI!" yelled Geet. She threw her arms around his neck, " Kaisay ho aap?!"

Daarji had a genuinely happy smile, " Aagayi Rajkumari?"

"Of course…" smiled Geet.

She sat down on the table and Rano served her food, " Kaah le…bohot kamzoor ho gayi hai tu diet shiet kar ke!"

Geet started to eat and Daarji smirked, " Geet…araam se kaah…"

"Kyun?" said Geet.

" Use some manners!" hissed Rano.

"Kyun!? Oh hello! Excuse me! You guys never objected before!" said Geet.

" Ab kar rahe hain, chup ho kar sun le!" said Rano as she smacked Geet's hand from picking up anymore that she could stuff in her mouth.

" Maa said Geet. Rano gave her a glare and Geet sighed…

" Tu Sanjeevani jaa rahi hain kya?" asked Daarji.

"Haan daarji, I will drop by, kyun?" asked Geet.

" Aacha jaldi aana" said Daarji.

"Ji Daarji" said Geet.

Geet frowned at the awkward behavior of her family members. She grabbed her purse and phone, " Main jaa rahi hoon! Bye!!"

She filed out the door and into the car disappearing into the distance towards Sanjeevani.

**********

"Bhaiii" smiled Sameer as he poked his head into Maan's cabin. Maan looked up from his laptop and frowned, " Kya hua chote?"

Sameer let out a bigger smile and he stepped in, shutting the glass door behind him.

Maan went back to his laptop and Sameer sat down in front of him and sat back…

"To kaisa lag raha hain?" asked Sameer as he played around with a small globe in his hands.

Maan looked up, " What do you mean?"

Sameer smirked, "Baray bhaiyaa…aaaj kya din hain?"

Maan continued to look at him with a confused expression, " Kya?"

Sameer wanted to smack his head against the wall…

And then it occurred to Maan a few moments later and he looked up, " Im so sorry Sam…"

Sameer tried to smile, " Arey…mujhse sorry kyun?"

"Kab tak jaana hain?" asked Maan trying to sound casual.

" Chupanay se chup nahin sakta bhai… " said Sameer…

" What should I wear?" asked Maan.

" Uh bhai, you have excellent dressing sense…why are you asking me?" replied Sameer.

"But its Geet's house…I should wear something traditional? Kurta shalwar?" asked Maan.

Sameer nodded, " I think you should bhai…"

"Theek hain…" replied Maan.

"Meera bhi aarahi hain kya?" asked Maan a few moments later. " Of course…" replied Sameer.

" Acha…" replied Maan.

Sameer sighed…his brother didn't give him the chance for any teasing on his side! He stood up and said, " I'll see you at home bhai.."

Maan nodded and Sameer went off singing, " Meri saamne wali khidki mein…"

Maan let out a smirk, " Chote, I know you were trying to tease me…"
Sameer sighed, " Baray bhaiya… saara joke paani mein gaya!"

Maan gave a wider smirk, " Tumne jaana tha naa? Jao…"

Sameer nodded and went off while Maan continued with work.

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Posted: 13 years ago
it finally nitya gone to jail and friendship begin again



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Posted: 13 years ago
finally all ended well...
felt proud for veera!!!
so maan s cumg to ask hands of geet?!
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superb..
finally dey ve ovrcm all barriers
superb updt
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Simply superb!! sab happy happy now!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
awesome part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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yayy all misunderstandings over! cant wait for the next :D

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