MG FF- Nahin Hona Tha ~2~ Chp 24 Last pt Pgs 53-54

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Nahin Hona Tha






Synopsis:

Love knows no borders... Their beautiful dream was caught between barbed wires. One night, twenty years ago...their families had parted into enemies. What will they do? Will their love break the hate between their families? Will their love succeed or fail?

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Hello my lovely Maneetians! 😊

So I'm back with thread 2 of my FF Nahin Hona Tha. I'm sorry that I haven't updated in a long time! Ive been super duper busy with exams and assignments. I hope you forgive me with this update and I promise promise promise that I will try to update as much as possible. I had some free time over the weekend :)

So here is Chapter 16 of Nahin Hona Tha


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Chapter 16
(History Repeats Itself)




Nitya put the picture frame in a silk red cloth and wrapped it up. She put the picture frame back into the deepest side of her closet. Nitya shut the closet doors and then said, " Geet Singh Handa I swear, I will never let your dirty footsteps into this haveli"

Nitya only smirked... she was definitely going to make Maan and Geet's life a living hell!

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Maan recieved Geet's text and he raised his eyebrow. Why would Geet be asking him this? He quickly texted back saying, " Jaan I don't think theres anything wrong!"

Maan shut his phone off since he would be going into the hospital because Dadajii would be discharged in a day or two. Sameer was in the car and he looked at Maan.

" Bhai.. is everything okay?" asked Sameer curiously. " Yeah chote, its fine" replied Maan. Sameer didnt want to agitate his brother further so he didn't ask him, but he knew what was wrong.

They reached Sanjeevani and immediately went in to see dadimaa signing papers at the front. Maan and Sameer went to Dadimaa and touched her feet. Dadimaa smiled warmly, " Jeete raho"

Maan put his hand on Dadimaa's shoulder, " Main kar deta hoon dadimaa, aap choriye"

Dadimaa nodded and smiled. She backed off and Maan began signing the papers.


Suddenly, Prem came walking out and saw that Maan and Sameer were there. " Good afternoon!" smiled Prem. Sameer smiled and shook hands with Prem, " Hey dude... good afternoon"

" So Dadajii will be discharged immediately since he is all ready to stay in the haveli with a nurse!" added Prem. Maan smiled, " Great Prem.. thankyou"

" Don't thank me... thank your lady love" smirked Prem as he looked over his clipboard and quickly signed something.


" Your dadajii wishes to give you something and he is calling you into the room" said Prem.

Maan widened his eyes, " Dadajii is conscious!" Prem nodded, " Just this morning and he only wishes to see you" Maan nodded and said, " Can I see him now?"

Prem smiled, " Right this way!" Maan excused himself and went with Prem all the way to Dadajii's room.

Maan entered to see Dadajii laying down peacefully. " Namaste Dadajii" said Maan softly. Dadaji looked at him and smiled, " Aajao Maan..." Maan shut the door behind him and sat on the chair right beside Dadaji's bed.

Maan took Dadaji's hands, " Aap bilkul theek ho jayenge daadajii..." Dadajii breathed a little and then spoke, " Maan, meri zindagi kab khatam ho jaye... mujhe nahin pata par ek baat meri tumne sun ni hogi"

Maan nodded, " Jo aap kahein dadajii"

" Tum meri jagah lekar... I wish to give you the title of mine as a thakur" said Dadajii.

Maan frowned, " Dadajii, humne pehle iss baray main baat ki thi!"

" Mujhe pata tha kay tum yehi kahoge" replied Dadajii.

" Par tumne yeh zimidaari leni hogi aur Sameer phir bhi chota hi rahega... par tum baray ho... Rishab aur Naina ka bara beta Maan, aur yeh tumhara haq hain beta" added Dadaji.

" Par dadajii-" began Maan.

" Nahin, yeh meri aakhri khwaish samajlo..." said Dadajii in a raspy voice.

" Dadajii nothing like that is going to happen to you... you have the title!" said Maan.

" I know I do, but the property is all under you... not a single penny is in my name son... it is yours and you've helped me set this empire to its heights" replied Dadajii.

" I don't want the property and you are still Bade Thakur no matter what happens!" snapped Maan.

" Son please... this is my wish... won't you fulfill it?" asked Dadajii in a more hopeful voice.

Maan contemplated the situation... now the generation war would be on him... and he would have to end it. Now this was the time to end it. He needed to and this was the only way.

Maan sighed and looked into his dadaji's hopeful but tired old eyes. " I accept it" said Maan. Dadajii smiled, " Thankyou son, thankyou..." Maan saw the joy in his eyes and he only had to agree. The situation seemed in his favor now!

Dadajii slowly picked up his hand and put it on Maan's head, " My son... I give my title to you like I would to Rishab... You are now the Bade Thakur" Maan accepted his blessings and smiled, " Jisme aapki khushi... meri khushi".

Dadimaa and Sameer came in and immediately congratulated him. Sameer hugged his brother, " Congrats bro... or I should say, Bade bhaiya Thakur jii" Maan chuckled, " Thanks chote...or I should say... Chote Thakur sahib..."

The guys laughed it off and Dadimaa blessed him and kissed him on the forehead, " May you live long... and give you the wife of your dreams" Maan smiled at the thought of Geet being his wife...

Sameer smirked and whispered, " Koi yaad araha hain baray bhaiya?" Maan shot a look at him and Sameer only let out a chuckle, " sorry... no jokes"

Maan shook his head and was about to say something until Nitya came into the room. The guy's moods were immediately dampened when she came in and she only said, " Kya hua? sabke chehre par baara kyun baj rahe hain?"

" Kuch nahin bua ji... mind your own business" snapped Sameer. Maan gave a look to Sameer to make him shutup since Dadajii was still sensative to tension and stress.

"Hum sirf pooch rahe hain..." replied Nitya in a total non chalant way. " Maan is the owner of the property and the bade Thakur and heir to this family" said Dadajii very proudly.

Nitya smirked and raised an eyebrow, " Achaa?"

Maan only narrowed his eyes at her Nitya sighed and said, " Bohot bohot mubarak Maan..." Maan gave her the most stern look without saying a word to her.

A few hours later, Dadajii was discharged from the hospital and taken home. Maan hired nurses and a regular doctor to come check up on him everday. Dadajii felt at peace and Maan was busy handling the office work.

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Geet looked at her phone and saw Maan's text. She sighed, " Nahin! I still feel like something is wrong...kuch bohot ghalat honay wala hain!" Meera noticed Geet's growing discomfort.

" I think its Nitya bua again! shes the one who is always trying to ruin everything" said Meera. Geet looked at her best friend intently, " I hope everything is okay..."

Meera put her hand on Geet's and smiled, " It will be fine Geeto..." Geet smiled halfheartedly and nodded.

Geet was buying something until Meera's eyes widened... Geet looked at her and then looked in the direction that Meera was staring in. "Tej veerji!?!" gasped Meera.

Geet frowned, " Tej veerji kya kar rahe hain?"

Geet found Tej to be walking in her direction and he looked straight at Geet. His expression was sullen and straight. Tej stopped in front of Geet and she frowned, " Kya hua?"

" Ghar aaja Geet... abhi aur issi waqt" said Tej. Geet raised an eyebrow, " Kyun?"

" Savaal mat kar... aaja" hissed Tej. He grabbed her arm and began dragging her away and Geet tried to struggle away. " Veerji what are you doing!!?" yelled Geet.

" Chup kar jaa... gaari main behet!" ordered Tej.

"LET GO OF ME" roared Geet. Everyone watched as she was taken away and she was forced to sit into Tej's car.

" VEERJI WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!" yelled Geet. " CHUP KAR JAA... BOHOT HO GAYA HAIN!" roared Tej.


" WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO? KILL ME... GO! I DARE YOU" screamed Geet.

" I'l do worse... shutup and sit quietly" hissed Tej. Geet took out her phone and she wanted to call Maan right away! But she only said, " No... I'm stronger than this!"

She thought for a second... she needed to get out of this situation. Tej drove fast towards the Handa Haveli. "IM GOING TO JUMP OUT" yelled Geet. She opened the door and Tej didn't listen to her.

She jumped out and hit the ground very hard. She hit her head so hard that she could swear that she saw blood. Everything was so dizzy and she only remembered Tej's car stopping.

He got out of the car and Geet saw his blurry figure coming toward her. He knelt down infront of her and he only smirked, " Kya hua?" dard ho raha hain Geet?"

Geet's face was bloody and she was bleeding from everywhere. " Bohot dard ho raha hain... koi baat nahin, tu doctor hain naa... khudi apne aap ko theek kar sakti hain" added Tej.

" Veeerji please... mujhe bachayiye..." said Geet softly. Tej sighed sarcastically, " See that is the difficult part my dear little sister..."

" Pleassee" whispered Geet as she tried to move her hand.

Tej shrugged, " Okay well, tu theek ho jaa, phir ghar aana..."

Tears rolled down Geet's eyes... she sobbed, " Veerjii.. please..." Suddenly, Geet felt dizzy and she only drifted off into deep slumber.

Tej smirked, " This is what you get for disrespecting me choti... daarji gave everything to you... and you dare meddle with my marriage...!"

Tej was merciless... he was waiting for something like this way before because Daarji gave Geet 70% of the property while Tej had 30%. She was the only girl in generations and Geet's father had entrusted this to Geet.

Tej stood up and he walked towards his car. He got in and drove away leaving Geet in the middle of the road to die. He stopped his car after a few mins and immediately wiped his hands of Geet's blood and his own sweat.

He sat back and only said, " My final obstacle is gone... now its all mine" He sat up and he opened up his dash board and took out a pack of pills

He took anti depression pills and sleeping pills. He took his medicines and drank water. He sat back more relaxed... now he was done dealing with his last obstacle.

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Meera was getting so worried now.. she called up Maan and told him of what happened.

" WHERE IS SHE?!" demanded Maan. " I don't know veerji! Tej veerji took her away so forcefully in front of everyone!" replied Meera.

Maan's heart dropped and he only said, " WHICH WAY DID HE TAKE HER?!!"

"I think I knoww..." replied Meera. " I'm coming in two minutes.. in the back Meera!" hissed Maan.

Meera agreed and she quickly snuck off. She picked up her lengha and stood outside.

She looked out and saw Maan rushing his BMW. She ran out and saw that Sameer was beside Maan. Meera got into the back and she had tears in her eyes.

" Veerji please meri Geet ko bacha lijiye..." sobbed Meera. Sameer took Meera's hand and said, " I promise kay kuch nahin hoga Geet bhabhi ko"

" Meera tell me where he took her!" hissed Maan. Meera wiped her tears and said, " That way... its the way to the Handa Haveli..."

Maan stepped on the brakes and the car flew towards that direction. Maan drove violently and his eyes frantically searched for his Geet... his heart was telling him that something was definitely wrong.

"Geet.. please.. Oh God... please hold on Geet" mumbled Maan.

They drove on for a bit until Meera screamed for Maan to stop. " VEEERJIII!" screamed Meera.

Maan stopped the car and he looked ahead of him and saw a girl lying in the middle of the road. Meera quickly got out of the car and so did Maan. Maan threw himself in front of Geet

" GEET... " roared Maan. He turned her face around and saw that her face was all bloodied and she was unconscious. Her tears were dry and her face was absolutely pale.

" Geet utho.. please.. utho Geet" whispered Maan. He hugged her hard and tears began rolling down his eyes, " GEET PLEASE.. UTHO..."

Meera put her hand on Geet's hair, " GEET UTH!" No reply from Geet... she was unconscious, it was so hard to see her face.

Meera started to cry and Sameer put his arms around her. " Geeto.. uth please... meri jaan nikalri jaa rahi hain..." whispered Meera.

Maan kissed Geet's forehead, " Jaan.. main tumhe kuch nahin honay doonga..."

With all the strength he had left he lifted her up in his arms and immediately put her in the back. Geet's head was on Meera's lap and Meera was busy wiping up Geet's blood and she only screamed, " VEERJI PLEASE.. HURRY..."

" MEERA JUST RELAX... WE ARE GETTING THERE" replied Sameer. Maan felt like the ground beneath him was being taken away slowly and painfully. His hands were shaking uncontrollably.

" I... yeh... please veerji.. jaldi!" said Meera. They drove all the way to Sanjeevani and Maan immediately carried her out of the car. He ran inside and yelled out for all the doctors.


Prem and Heer came running out and to their horror... they saw Geet completely bloody and unconscious.

They laid her on the bed and Heer's hands were shaking, " MAAN YEH KAISAY HUAA!?" Maan's heart was beating uncontrollably. He seemed to have lost all connection to everything.

They were rolling the bed down the hallway and Maan was running alongside the doctors wheeling Geet in.

He stroked her hair, " Geet kuch nahin hoga... I promise... kuch nahin!" They reached the emergency room and Maan let go while Prem and Heer wheeled her into the room.

Maan wanted to go in but Prem stopped him, " Maan no...you cannot come in!" Maan looked past Prem, " Please let me stay... please..."

"Sorry its rules... Maan listen... kuch nahin hoga!" added Prem.

Maan looked at Prem with a hardened expression, " If ANYTHING...happens to MY GEET THEN I WILL MAKE SURE YOU ALL LIVE IN A COMPLETE HELL ALL YOUR LIVES!"

Prem gathered all the patience and he only snapped, " MAAN GO!" He pushed Maan away and shut the doors quickly.

Sameer and Meera quickly ran in and Maan stood there frozen looking at the ground. Sameer saw his brother's expression. Sameer saw his brother's fists clenching slowly and then he knew that Maan was definitely going to take revenge now. He knew his brother very well.

" Bhai" said Sameer softly. Maan didn't respond and Sameer walked over and put his hand on Maan's shoulder and said, " Bhai... come sit... please"

Maan didn't budge and only grumbled, "I'll kill that bloody dog..." Sameer gulped, " Bhai who?"

" Tej..." replied Maan dangerously. "Bhai listen... if you are going to do something then please don't.. let Geet bhabhi get better!"

" Im going to kill him for doing this to my Geet... Maan Singh Khurana's Geet..." snapped Maan. Maan was in full kill mode now.

" Bhai... we have to deal with this tactfully.. .abhi nahin!" replied Sameer. " No... I'll finish that bloody asshole off right now..." grumbled Maan.

Maan shrugged Sameer off and began walking towards the exit and Sameer ran after Maan. " BHAI STOP..." yelled Sameer.

Sameer had to run extra fast down the hallways and he finally stopped Maan by the arm. " BHAI.. LISTEN TO ME! HE IS GOING TO EXPECT YOU TO KILL HIM...!"

"THEN HE BLOODY SHOULD WELCOME HIS DEATH!" roared Maan. " bhai STOP IT! DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND?" yelled Sameer.

Maan looked at his brother with anger, " DONT YOU DARE RAISE YOUR VOICE IN FRONT OF ME SAMEER!"

Sameer sighed frustratingly, " BHai im NOT! JUST LISTEN TO ME.. ONCE! PLEASE!"

Maan narrowed his eyes dangerously, " What?"

" Dont you understand bhai? History is repeating itself!" replied Sameer. Maan raised an eyebrow, " What do you mean?"

Sameer led Maan back to where the waiting area was, outside Geets room. Maan sat down and Sameer only sighed.

" Bolo chote..." added Maan.

" Bhai... don't you think this is a pattern? I think I know why Tej did that..." replied Sameer.

Maan paused and Sameer continued, " Its Nitya bua for sure... and do you remember her wedding trunk full of her belongings?"

Maan's eyes widened, " Haan toh?"

" Bhai, I found something long time back in that trunk..." replied Sameer.


Maan looked confused, " What chote?!"

"Maa wrote another page, separate from the diary... she might have ran out of pages so she wrote it in another separate page" replied Sameer.

Sameer nodded, " I have the page and I know exactly what maa was saying... There is a deep dark secret of Nitya bua that we all don't know at all and only maa knew"

" And one of her promises relates to what is happening right now bhai..." added Sameer.

" What do you mean?" demanded Maan. Sameer took a deep breath, " This was all planned bhai... history is going to repeat itself again."


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So here it is ladies and gentlemen 😊 I hope you liked my effort and All if not some of you will be wondering what exactly JUST happened. Well then, there are more secrets that are to be revealed and everything else will be revealed soon! So keep guessing 😆

And Ive pm-ed almost close to 160 of you. For all the silent readers... please comment and like. And to all the sweet individuals who comment on every update. Thankyou 🤗

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Chapter 16: Page 1
Chapter 17:Page 10
Chapter 18: Page 17
Chapter 19: Page 25
Chapter 20: Page 30
Chapter 21: Pages 38-39
Chapter 22: Page 43
Chapter 23: Page 48
Chapter 24: Page 53-54

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omggg ur backk diii
cant believe hehe
missed you n this FF a lottt
omggg what update
maan became the thakurr
and omfgg tej is so evill
poor geet
u better nott let anything happen to her
poor maan😭
i wanna kill both nitya n tej ughh
and whats the history lol
cant wait to read moreee
pleasee do update soon hehe
thanks a lott <3
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVELY
its my 1st pm for this FF so will start from begininng 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcomeback
mindblowing update
so their is dark secret
uff tej want to kill his own sis because of
property
nitya upto something
i'm glad sam stop maan before he done damage
waiting next
thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome back lov really missed you Amazinf update
Hasn't it gone a bit short eh?? Anyways hope alls well n Gud luck in life and all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks 4 the update...after a long time your updating but good to know that your back. About the ff i hope geet is fine...idiot tej just bcoz of property u dnt do that...lets see about what is this mystery
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on the new thread
welcome back
and HOW CAN YOU LEAVE US HANGIN!?
you better update this soon!
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upd after a long time...
wel superb upd...
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awesome update loved it
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welcome back ...

congrats !!!!!!!! 4 d new thread ...

awesome ... superb ... interesting ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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