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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4

she was pulled by a strong arm to a dark room and a click said that the door was locked '. And then before she could say any thing she felt a harsh lips on her soft ones'.. and then she was forcefully kissed' geet was shocked it was her first kiss she didn't know the meaning of the kiss. She was so shocked to react. Her eyes widenened as his tongue explored her mouth and sucked her. It was too much for geet. She can't take it more .she was about to faint but suddenly maan stoped yes he was none other then maan singh khurana maan was is search in geet then then he saw geet enterd in store room he went behing her but suddenly he saw lights went off and geet started running towards the door it was too much for maan as the moment he enterd into college this girl made him crazy now he wanted to know her feel her and wanted to see her from near. Light came and maan again saw the beautiful face of angel her eyes was close and she was shivering with fear tears rolled from her beautiful pink cheeks. Maan felt a deep pain in heart now he was regretting- his act.

Maan very sfotly – open ur eyes angel

Geet heard very soft voice and then she opened her eyes very slowly and saw a man very big man[ ab maan ki body aur height big hi toh hai] standing front of her

Geet [st] hey baba ji yeh kaun hai yeh muje aise kyun dekh raha hai kahin suddenly she remembered a film where a vampire kissed a girl and then killed her. So she took MSK as vampire. And geet startred screams in low voice. Her voice struck in her throat because of fear

Geet- plz muje chod do muje maro mat plz plz vasie bi mera blood bhut kadwa hai bilkul bi meetha nahin hai sachi she behaved like a cute kid '

Maan was totally shocked and amused by her behaviour.

Maan- tume kyun laga hai ke mai tumhe maruga aur blood kadwa kya bol rahi ho tum

Geet- ?

Maan- ans me

Geet-?

Maan – with angry voice ans me

Geet was sacred with his angry voice

Geet – tum mera khoon peene aye ho na I know plz sachi mera khoon meetha nahin hai

Maan was nw amused wih her cuteness and innocence

Maan- tume kyun laga mai tumahra khoon peuga

Geet- maine film mai dekha tha

She was looking so cute maan can't control himself he leaned close to her for kiss but sudenly door opened with a jerk

Ps guys I m belong to rular area meri study hindi medium mai hui hai I m not good in enlish plz meri english pad ke hasna mat

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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
awesome upadte
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
awsome update
loved it
bt short one...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64


very interesting update...

but it was very short yaar...padna shuru kiya and it finished...

Maan kissed her and Geet is so innocent that she is not angry on being kissed forcibly but getting scared that he must be a vampire...

thanx for pm...

and for the note below the update...

the style of ur writing is very good and there is no mistake...
little mistakes everybody does...so don't worry and continue...
Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
awesome update .. Geet is sooo cute ... but why did Maan kissed her forcefully ... idiot na ho to ...
continue soon ... and plzz if u can .. give us a longer update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Lovely update dear 👏
He kissed her 😍
love this innocent geet n naughty maan 😉
Plz dear .. Try to give little long updates plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg omg...maan pehle mulakat mein hi kiss kar diya geet ko...hi bhagwan...abb kya hoga geet ka...

aur geet...humari innocent geet...usse laga ki maan vampire hai aur uske khoon peene aya hai...aur kya boli geet ne...uski khoon karwa hai...🤣🤣🤣🤣...hans hans k pet mein dard hone lage...bechara maan ...geet ne kya se kya bana di usse...oh god...


awesome n beautiful update...

its amazing...

really loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Aww geet is too cute
Awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Awesome update...
awww geet is so cute...
luved the way she said tht her blood is not sweet..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Superb one..
Dont lose ur confidence..
U r writing very well..

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